With the Law of Cause and Effect, This Newborn Is Invincible?

The writing is very good, including the foreshadowing and plot writing. However, I have to point out a few shortcomings. First, the male protagonist has too many superpowers. It's only chapter 80 and sometimes a superpower suddenly appears and I forget where it came from. Second: There is basically no emotional drama. If you want to write a story without a female protagonist, you don't have to arrange the role of Shen Hezi. There is no emotional drama in 80 chapters. Do you want to be like the Earth Spirit who only has emotional drama in hundreds of chapters? Third: Maybe the character of the protagonist likes to trick people and have fun, but it doesn't look very good if he cheats his teammates too much. Sometimes it may be said that the protagonist cheats his teammates just to have fun, but the perception is not very good. Fourth: The main plot is very unclear. In the final analysis, it is to eliminate the alien beasts, but it is basically not mentioned. The foreshadowing is very obvious. These are my comments. I hope the author will get better and better and the novels he writes will become better and more profitable!

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I have returned to the writing style of the first book. It is good-looking and a funny article suitable for relaxing and entertaining in your spare time. @ChaQin The author's first book "Equality of Quality: I Can Exchange Everything" is very good-looking. I recommend reading it. I have re-read it several times.

Overall, it's okay, but something feels weird. I always feel that the protagonist is not very smart, that's generally the case.

The protagonist is not a loser, and there is no ridicule of the plot. The original number one is not jealous of the protagonist but wants to be his adoptive father. The protagonist does not pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger but tells the official about the talent resources. When the protagonist eats his good brother Qingmei, I will give it a five-star rating.

The fun, plot shaping, and ability to make jokes are all okay, and there is logic to talk about. However, if the author gives it too much, it will easily fall apart later. It depends on how the author writes it. As long as the quality of what can be written later does not fall directly to the bottom, it will be readable.

I remember that after I traveled through the world without any risk, I was very happy and sang a song called "The Blood Song of the Three Realms". I was discovered by the "Lord of the Stars" and took me to the "Journey to the Misty" and entered the "Heavens and Worlds". I met the "God of Killing" known as the "Natural Disaster". He sat on the "Throne of the Divine Seal" and wanted to kill me, but was saved by the "Nine Heavens Sword Demon". After they recovered from their injuries, they said goodbye to me. Later, he recommended me to "The Evil King of Another World", and I did "Underworld Special Forces" in "The Unrivaled Tang Sect". There, "Galaxy Emperor" taught me "Swallowing the Starry Sky", and "Qin Emperor" taught me how to play the piano. I was developing Final Intelligence there, and I had Clairvoyant Eyes. When I have nothing to do, "The Magic Chef of Ice and Fire" teaches me how to cook, and "The God of Bacchus" teaches me how to mix wine. The most awesome thing is "Emperor". His old man taught me "Unparalleled in the World" "Peerless Magical Powers", and I followed the path of "Emperor Supreme". Soon after, I trained the "Immortal" Divine Body. Under the "Heaven Realm and Firmament", I used the "Destroy the Sky Map" to defeat the world's best master "The Evil God" and snatched the "Throne of the End of the Dharma". However, the world could not bear my power and the space was shattered. I was sucked into the "Perfect World" and returned to the "Wild Era" Yuan~~~Oh! I am getting old, and now it is your young people's world, but young people, you have to update! (God)

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There are 72 chapters so far, and there are no overly novel abstractions [Like]. Except for Feitian Spraying Yoneda's Gong Duan, which is a bit curious, everything else is within the acceptable range [Angry]. There is nothing too curious about the rest of the book [Like], and if it is abstract for the sake of abstraction, it is a good book [Like]. So, digging for gold in the rocks? [Think]

The protagonist is very moral in a certain way [Like][Like][Like] Let us like it

It's very comfortable to watch, the protagonist is powerful and interesting, and the character's IQ is online

When I saw the steel-coiled Pokémon ball in Chapter 53, I really couldn't stop myself from posting a comment. This book is definitely for human beings. AI is not so outrageous. I gave it 5 stars for the top level. One star was deducted because the updates are too slow. Why can't you update 10 times a day? I really need to give you the Seal of the Human King.

I can't stand that kind of purely enjoyable writing, so I call this writing a piece of music. Don't worry about anything, just feel happy. But there are also some problems. If the technology is not up to par, it is likely to collapse later. My suggestion is to work hard to shape the characters and relationships.

Interesting, so interesting! It's more interesting than Yunsu watching Xiaoyu's female costume next to her!

Push it up, push it up. There are too few updates. Don't give up.

Although the protagonist is a bit neurotic, he is really funny [laughs][laughs]

Awesome! It must be eaten. It is not recommended to watch it at night because you can't hold back your laughter.

I have to say, it's really good [laughing evilly]

This book is great, right? He is the author of his brother. Let me tell you how the more I read this book, the more familiar I become. It's just a passer-by, right? I haven't slept yet, so I'll get up and code. I want to read some more.

New book, don't poke or poke

Holy Thunder Nice looking, love watching, Abstract required

It's funny, but it's still refreshing and comfortable to read. The bigger the hook, the better. Come on, author [Chigua]

It's a bit interesting, even though it has some worn-out stuff, it's still quite interesting.

So funny, so beautiful

After reading the first few pictures, it feels a bit like another novel I have read. The protagonist's skills are daddy and holding people in his arms

The plot is funny. Ability abstraction. Updated in a timely manner

The protagonist is a harlot, but it's fun to watch the harlot.

It's a cool, cool novel, the male protagonist is bitchy, the female protagonist is something like that

The characters are likeable and the development is good. I want to watch it.