[The scores have just been opened, ignore the low scores now, haha, see if the content and subject matter suit your taste]
Once in time, Luo Li became the fiancée of Erlang God Yang Jian, who was married to his childhood sweetheart. She went with him to Kunlun through all kinds of difficulties and dangers, and learned that he had no qualifications to cultivate immortality and could only be a mortal!
What happened to mortals?
Mortal Luo Li walked his own path in the Great Tribulation of the Gods and became a member of the list!
Facing the gossipy eyes of the immortals in heaven, Luo Li replied:
"What are you talking about! Who is the related household?! Even if Yang Jian is my ex-fiancé, Nezha is my good friend, Jiang Ziya is my teacher, and Jie Jiao admires me, I really made the list based on my own strength!! It all depends on myself!"
"Comrades, colleagues, as gods, how can our thoughts remain in the past? We now should be facing the future, we should be those who want to build a beautiful new world, we should serve mortals wholeheartedly, sacrifice the small self, and dedicate ourselves to the greater self!"
Ah, you ask me how to donate?
The King of Inspiration has eaten many boys and girls, and still wants to be taken back to the South China Sea in Guanyin's bamboo basket? Bring it here, it's a great supplement for koi!
Fengxian County overturned the tribute and offended the Jade Emperor? Not only will I knock over your tribute, but if it doesn't rain, I will smash your temple!
Chenxiang, if you dare to tear up the book of life and death in Liujiacun, let the evil people go, I will tear you up first!
Ah? How dare I?
Guess~
[No system, not a cool article, a story about a mortal in a mythical world, with a heavy tone]
This is a story about "mortals", a story about gods fighting, monsters eating humans, and all living beings struggling to save themselves under the punishment of heavenly tribulations and gods!
Reader comments
It's okay, but the middle part is too sad. I feel like I have been physically and mentally abusing the heroine. There is also the amnesia part, which makes me completely forget about myself. Tsk, I felt angry and sad when I watched it. Does the author want a razor blade? Isn't she Yang Jian's fiancée? I don't know how to write it next, let's take a look😊😊😊
It looks good, the writing is very good, and there are no bad points so far.
I'll make some minor revisions to the review. It's okay. I hope there will be more storylines for Yang Jian that will abuse both body and mind.
Great article! The heroine has her own goals and determination to become an immortal. She is not a hollow person or a tool person. After reading the first volume, she immediately added it to her bookshelf. The highlight moments created by the author for the heroine really impressed me! It doesn't matter if I don't want my ex-fiancé, it doesn't matter if there is a CP in the future, the only thing I value is the heroine's path to immortality [I learned it]
Seeing that Di Xin recruited refugees to join the army, I was really curious and hoped that the heroine could become a saint for once. Most of the time when I read novels, I like the selfish lone wolf, but maybe I am really a little bit unwilling to do so. I can't help but have the opportunity to benefit all people! Judging from the current progress, Di Xin's character design does not fit the mythology, but is a wise king with forward-looking vision and means! Slavery is wrong. The heroine temporarily chose Jiang Ziya's destiny faction in the struggle, but I am not willing to accept it! The heroine comes from the future. She is educated, knows what is good for the people, and knows the right path of development. I selfishly hope that the heroine will devote herself to this and do a great cause with great vigor. She will not be here in vain. According to my opinion, since it is possible, I should take a gamble and be famous forever! I hope the author can expand the world view, derive new story lines, give the heroine a chance to become a saint and change her destiny, and also give Di Xin, who dares to be the first in this story, a chance. The above are all my personal thoughts. If you have different opinions, you can discuss them. Don't overdo it.
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It has a very orthodox flavor of prehistoric mythology, so it is definitely not a cool novel. If you like to read the original work of Journey to the West, then you will definitely like this flavor. It is a rare group portrait of prehistoric times in recent years.
Ps: After reading a lot of The Ancient Mary Sue, I finally found something good, but I was really anxious waiting for the author to update it.
This author, Dada, is really in line with my taste *^O^*. I really like the stories written by Dada! The plot logic is online and full of foreshadowing, and the character creation is also very vivid. It is very immersive to watch. The whole process is immersive and crazy.
[Love] Recently, I prefer Fengshen or Honghuang novels. The heroine is not Yang Jian's foil. She has her own social circle and her own ideas to implement. A heroine who can wake up step by step is also quite good. Many female heroines in Fengshen World are essentially dream novels, revolving around a certain male god [face covering]
The author's writing style is really good ദ്ദി˶>ω<)✧But maybe there are fewer people reading Yang Jian's writing. It's not a loss if you invest in it (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡It's very interesting and there are no surprises.•˶ɞ˶•
Only then did I realize that it was my ex-fiancé who abused me so much that the author compensated me for my mental losses. Chapter 50 added.
Let the heroine and Lingzhu be together
It's very good, the plot is interlocking, the heroine's character is decisive and resolute, but she also has the characteristics of a mortal. The whole story is as if it had happened before
The writing is not bad; the plot has great ups and downs and can easily arouse emotions (Yeah😊Yes
Also, the characters are more three-dimensional
Summary: Fried chicken is good! ! ! !
Didn't the author say no spoilers? 🤨🤔🤔
I want to ask if the male protagonist has always been Yang Jian, I hope it is
I cried so much from the moment I learned that the heroine could not practice cultivation. The writing is very good, the content is very delicate, and the emotions between people are also very real.
I really like the heroine's character [Blowing Kiss], the author's writing style is very delicate
Can the author suddenly update 100 chapters? Since I started following your book, I seem to have a taste of love. I click on it a dozen times a day just to wait for your update.
It's beautiful and exciting, please give me more
Super beautiful and very exciting
Why is it being serialized again? I thought I could have a nice meal, woo woo woo.
None of the donkeys in the production team have rested for so long. Please update me quickly [angry] [angry] [angry]
I can only say it looks good. It's a little different from ordinary prehistoric novels
It's really good-looking, very novel, and the plot has ups and downs.
Looking at the introduction, Shu Jing should be the person who intercepted the teaching, his ex-fiancé? Is Yang Jian still the male protagonist?
Ok, I tied it all night, the goddess wrote so beautifully, I will follow you [blowing kiss]
My meager textual description cannot express my love for this book.
Can the author please reveal a little bit about the sweetness behind it? No, please, please [sending my heart] [sending my heart]
I have read so many books and never reviewed them. This one deserves a five-star rating in my heart. It's really good! !
It's so beautiful that it makes my heart aching and hot [crying] [shy]
It's really good to read. The author writes so well. Come on, boss. [Blow a kiss]
It's okay, but the middle part is too sad. I feel like I have been physically and mentally abusing the heroine. There is also the amnesia part, which makes me completely forget about myself. Tsk, I felt angry and sad when I watched it. Does the author want a razor blade? Isn't she Yang Jian's fiancée? I don't know how to write it next, let's take a look😊😊😊
It looks good, the writing is very good, and there are no bad points so far. I'll make some minor revisions to the review. It's okay. I hope there will be more storylines for Yang Jian that will abuse both body and mind.
Great article! The heroine has her own goals and determination to become an immortal. She is not a hollow person or a tool person. After reading the first volume, she immediately added it to her bookshelf. The highlight moments created by the author for the heroine really impressed me! It doesn't matter if I don't want my ex-fiancé, it doesn't matter if there is a CP in the future, the only thing I value is the heroine's path to immortality [I learned it]
Seeing that Di Xin recruited refugees to join the army, I was really curious and hoped that the heroine could become a saint for once. Most of the time when I read novels, I like the selfish lone wolf, but maybe I am really a little bit unwilling to do so. I can't help but have the opportunity to benefit all people! Judging from the current progress, Di Xin's character design does not fit the mythology, but is a wise king with forward-looking vision and means! Slavery is wrong. The heroine temporarily chose Jiang Ziya's destiny faction in the struggle, but I am not willing to accept it! The heroine comes from the future. She is educated, knows what is good for the people, and knows the right path of development. I selfishly hope that the heroine will devote herself to this and do a great cause with great vigor. She will not be here in vain. According to my opinion, since it is possible, I should take a gamble and be famous forever! I hope the author can expand the world view, derive new story lines, give the heroine a chance to become a saint and change her destiny, and also give Di Xin, who dares to be the first in this story, a chance. The above are all my personal thoughts. If you have different opinions, you can discuss them. Don't overdo it.
It's okay... Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over! Let the spirit beads take over!
It has a very orthodox flavor of prehistoric mythology, so it is definitely not a cool novel. If you like to read the original work of Journey to the West, then you will definitely like this flavor. It is a rare group portrait of prehistoric times in recent years. Ps: After reading a lot of The Ancient Mary Sue, I finally found something good, but I was really anxious waiting for the author to update it.
This author, Dada, is really in line with my taste *^O^*. I really like the stories written by Dada! The plot logic is online and full of foreshadowing, and the character creation is also very vivid. It is very immersive to watch. The whole process is immersive and crazy.
[Love] Recently, I prefer Fengshen or Honghuang novels. The heroine is not Yang Jian's foil. She has her own social circle and her own ideas to implement. A heroine who can wake up step by step is also quite good. Many female heroines in Fengshen World are essentially dream novels, revolving around a certain male god [face covering]
The author's writing style is really good ദ്ദി˶>ω<)✧But maybe there are fewer people reading Yang Jian's writing. It's not a loss if you invest in it (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡It's very interesting and there are no surprises.•˶ɞ˶•
Only then did I realize that it was my ex-fiancé who abused me so much that the author compensated me for my mental losses. Chapter 50 added.
Let the heroine and Lingzhu be together
It's very good, the plot is interlocking, the heroine's character is decisive and resolute, but she also has the characteristics of a mortal. The whole story is as if it had happened before
The writing is not bad; the plot has great ups and downs and can easily arouse emotions (Yeah😊Yes Also, the characters are more three-dimensional Summary: Fried chicken is good! ! ! ! Didn't the author say no spoilers? 🤨🤔🤔
I want to ask if the male protagonist has always been Yang Jian, I hope it is
I cried so much from the moment I learned that the heroine could not practice cultivation. The writing is very good, the content is very delicate, and the emotions between people are also very real.
I really like the heroine's character [Blowing Kiss], the author's writing style is very delicate
Can the author suddenly update 100 chapters? Since I started following your book, I seem to have a taste of love. I click on it a dozen times a day just to wait for your update.
It's beautiful and exciting, please give me more
Super beautiful and very exciting
Why is it being serialized again? I thought I could have a nice meal, woo woo woo.
None of the donkeys in the production team have rested for so long. Please update me quickly [angry] [angry] [angry]
I can only say it looks good. It's a little different from ordinary prehistoric novels
It's really good-looking, very novel, and the plot has ups and downs.
Looking at the introduction, Shu Jing should be the person who intercepted the teaching, his ex-fiancé? Is Yang Jian still the male protagonist?
Ok, I tied it all night, the goddess wrote so beautifully, I will follow you [blowing kiss]
My meager textual description cannot express my love for this book.
Can the author please reveal a little bit about the sweetness behind it? No, please, please [sending my heart] [sending my heart]
I have read so many books and never reviewed them. This one deserves a five-star rating in my heart. It's really good! !
It's so beautiful that it makes my heart aching and hot [crying] [shy]
It's really good to read. The author writes so well. Come on, boss. [Blow a kiss]