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It's ok, it's ok, the writing has a sense of orderliness and trivial life. From a personal subjective point of view, it seems a bit like Japanese literature. I feel comfortable with the language and I quite like it. As a painter, the author's paintings are also very beautiful, and the settings are okay. I support it directly. I beg the author to be more prolific [crying] It's not enough.

Give yourself five stars, hahaha. Currently, I update it once a day. If I have the ability in the future, I should update it twice a day. The main reason is that I write too slowly. This article will be cruel, not only sweet, but the ending is good, not so sad, after all, we are a youth campus article~ I thought a lot before writing this book. I originally planned to mainly write about Onkoma High School, but the Fox Team was a bit NB, so I changed it. If you want to read Onkoma, I will write a few extra articles. I originally planned to position the male protagonist as Gong Yoo, but from my personal perspective, I feel that Bei Xueyin is not able to control his type. She can't hold this kind of wild fox, and she doesn't think she will like it. At most, she can act like a brother. If I position the male protagonist as Kitano Shinsuke, I'm not very good at writing, and I feel it would be better to be a relative. After careful consideration, Zhi stood out! Xiaoxue is so lucky compared to the heroine in my last book, hahahaha! [Cool]

The summary is that it is very interesting to watch. Please be careful not to read this for fear of spoilers. The daily development with the North Team in the early stage is very cute. The heroine does not just revolve around the plot. She has her own independent plot and the setting is relatively complete. There are no big loopholes. In the later stage, the heroine's friends before the time travel will travel together, and both of them will be rejected by the world. They are very weak. This is also a minefield. It should be based on this abuse of the heroine. , And my friend has a relationship with Kuroo, and the heroine is Wamiji. I hope that this pair of CP will develop quickly. The daily relationship makes me sweet and confused, but it just can't get better. The most important thing is that the author can only update once a day, but try not to keep books. The author should be a student, and the pressure is relatively high. It is not easy to find time to write this book. The summary is that the author, come on, keep writing 😋

It's super, super, super cool! The scene where the heroine dresses up as her brother Kitano Shinsuke to scare the two Miya brothers and Ginjima is so funny, hahahaha! From now on, Miyaji will have to look at the face that is almost exactly the same as his Kita teammate's face every day. Hahaha, I don't know if I'm a coward or not. Hahahaha.

I feel that the author's writing style is much better than the previous one, and the writing is very delicate and sweet, and the plot does not drag out. The more obvious change is that it was originally in the first person, but later became the third person. Come on big [sending heart]

How happy I am to have a wife who can draw and write as well*^_^*

Cheers, author✊, I feel that the writing of this book is much better than the previous one, and the daily descriptions are very realistic. I look forward to the future development.

Say important things three times, eat it up! Eat a lot! Eat a lot! 😋😋😋😋😋😋👍👍👍👍It's delicious! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

Very, very beautiful

Very nice, please update more [love][love][love][like][like][like]

Well, the author wrote it well

Looks good! Great work and update [please ask for more explosive updates][please seek more explosive updates]

I feel that the writing is very smooth and the rhythm is very good. It doesn't drag on and it's tied immediately. The one point missing is because I haven't finished it yet. I look forward to the follow-up and hope that I won't abuse women. Editor 2: I've read Chapter 64 now First of all, the author describes some life-like details of the plot very well and with ease; and he has a very good grasp of the psychology of the characters, such as Miyaji, who writes very well about his impulses, bad taste, awkwardness, liking, the enthusiasm of the first love and the mature ambiguity after the reunion; Bei Xueyin also clearly describes the psychological process when he returns to his country to face his family again, the person he once liked, and naturally describes the happiness of the family, etc. However, I don't like the plot of Yukine's illness. It feels a bit sadistic, because the main meaning of this plot has no meaning except for Miyaji to comfort Yukine and the beginning of his relationship with Yukine. And this plot can be replaced with other plots. Why should Yukine lose the opportunity to pursue her dream again? Although he was cured later, the description of the treatment was almost very dull except for some random stings (I quite like this description, it did not deliberately describe the pain of Yukine's illness). If the plot of this illness is more detailed later, it can make the life more vivid. If the plot of illness is integrated into Yukine's personal growth, it would be an effective character growth line. However, at present, I feel that this plot has no character-building significance. It loses Yukine's subjectivity and is just for Miyaji to take advantage of it; and why is there a push for marriage in the novel? Other than that, the content is fine, and the author's drawings are also very cute, which is great!

It's really beautiful, and the author made the emotional lines less awkward. And I just hope that the author will add more chapters every day. [Laugh][laugh][laugh][love][love][love]

Nice! ! The protagonist has his own pursuits and works hard for them. He is a hard-working type! The writing is also very good, please keep writing!

Super beautiful, Xiaoxue is so cute

Light novel genre Very cute everyday

It's very beautiful, and the emotional expression is also very delicate.

Delicious, warm and everyday, good-looking