Pokemon: Every Heroine Falls for Me

The writing was too messy, and the protagonist was very conflicted. He had just subdued La Lulas and told her to only use three points of force, but ended up encountering two low-level members of the Rockets. The author had already solved one person, but still let the other go, just waiting for the Rockets to make the same mistake again. Once a cadre comes, the snowball will not snowball. Moreover, as soon as the protagonist left the town and arrived on the grassland, he encountered a group of Spearow. Although he explained that he did not enter the town because he was afraid of harassing the residents, it was so close to the town, and basically everyone in the town had one Pokémon (the worst ones were even the Magic Wall Dolls with fighting power). There was also Ogi Gakusei, a super newbie and champion Pokémon, which was no better than a 10-year-old kid escaping into the forest. And I don't know if there are any powerful Pokémon coming in the forest. If the introduction is marked as a brainless cool article, I don't care. But no, it's really too brainless. The beginning is like this and there is no desire to read on. But since this is a newly published book by the author, four stars will be given to attract traffic. While there are few people, you can retouch the content according to the outline.

A very good Pokémon Time Travel fanfic! The protagonist Lin Feng travels through Zhenxin Town, awakens the goddess's heart system, and becomes calm and rational without any brainless cheating. The bond between the heterochromatic Larulus and Kirulian is very touching, and the storyline of tracking down Team Rocket in Viridian Forest and having a big brawl in the camp is full of atmosphere. The original characters from Kanto appear, and the map and settings are restored to their original positions. It not only makes the system more fun, but also pays attention to the emotions between people and Pokémon. It is a million-word novel that Pokémon fans should not miss! Some of the plots still have room for polishing, but the overall reading experience is great, and more updates are in the works.

Writing is not easy, so I won't give low stars. This book gives me the feeling that it is a mess. If you want to write down the qualifications, just write it down. Some have it and some don't. It looks very awkward. The data panel is also very lame. There are qualifications but no levels. What do you think of the author? What other attributes, gender, and skills are there? The system feels like a mess. The main character is also a mess. He always looks calm and narrates the story. If you don't know how to write, don't describe it. I've seen other people try to hide their shortcomings. Even if it's simple, it's fine. You're good. If you write poorly, just write hard. It's very awkward. If this wasn't a new book, I would definitely give it one or two stars.

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Not very good. What's the trump card? You can only use three layers of force normally... I'm not sure, but the Rockets only use three layers of force against you? If you provoke Fu Mingguo, you won't touch the body if you don't have money. If you meet Team Rocket, you won't tell Da Mu. What do you think?

[Petrochemical] I was deceived by the name and introduction! The plot is too elaborate and confusing, and you can hardly see what you expect! Gone [staring]

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Well, this book is very comfortable to read