The Purity of Your Magical Girl Is Too Low!

It's a very spiritual beginning, but unfortunately, the protagonist behaves forward-looking, shrinking from everything, and disguises himself inexplicably. There is no interesting development or main line. In other words, except for the boring plot, everything else is good.

I like the setting very much. Magical girls are about love, miracles and hope! The first two or three chapters were very comfortable to read, but as the chapters got longer, I felt there were some problems. For example, if you act too arrogantly, you are still doing this thing, but suddenly you do another thing after two sentences. Most of the incidents are just a small taste, and the end is over after a brief start. Aunt Mei Li's emotional catharsis was not well prepared, and it was a bit abrupt and inexplicable. And you still need to play memes in moderation. I don't hate memes, but too much can affect the viewing experience. To sum up, I hope to see a clearer story line. Don't inexplicably do another thing while doing one thing. Even if you do, the transition process should be clearly written. If you want to teach students, if you want Yunzi to become a unique magical girl, you should teach her well first. If you want to gather a group of protagonists, you should first find some seedlings. I taught Yunzi a sentence or two, and then went to school to teach the younger generation. After teaching him a lesson, nothing happened, so a new good seedling came. After teaching him a few times, the new good seedling had to fight monsters again, so where is Yunzi... If you have to go slower and lay the groundwork in more detail, you will be happier watching it. But I really like magical girls, and I firmly believe that magical girls are love! Miracle! Hope! A believing heart! Friendship! Bond! So please keep writing, I hope to see good stories! Come on!

It feels very comfortable to read. With the recent popularity of AI in new books, AI sentence patterns are basically invisible. It is absolutely clear. The character design of the male protagonist is also very good, and the setting of the vest will give you endless surprises!

The protagonist setting is very good, not girly at all, invincible writing, not weak, has a waistcoat, the waistcoat is difficult to remove, and has a biased thinking. However, for the sake of the overall situation, I did not choose to break up with the aliens. I chose to cultivate talents on my own and let real magical girls return to the world. It's a pity that the protagonist eats beef and is not a happy person😭 Otherwise, humanity will be doomed🤓👆🏻I think it is most likely to be a story without a female protagonist. The protagonist is completely a life mentor and a close brother (the protagonist's strength is equivalent to Dachao (full health version) who went to the black robe world) If the protagonist doesn't wear a vest, he will be chased and called mom whenever he appears🤓👆🏻

Great, this is the orthodox magical girl I want! Love and justice transformed! And girly friendship! Beautiful girls of all ages without single lily arguments The protagonist Ciallo~(∠ω＜ )⌒☆completed the transformation in one go, and was even envious because she had a gothic lolita on her back

Advantages: There are too few disadvantages that can be mentioned. Although there are few at present, the quality is good. Disadvantages: If you go too far, the beginning and end of the event are too short. Possible problems: The male protagonist has a good character, but some people may not like the character of this lover king. Anyway, I think it's good

It's actually a hand-written text without AI. However, the problem is quite obvious. Japanese light novels are actually not suitable for China's modern online writing environment. The setting of this article is the era after peace, so there is no conflict or excitement. But everyone needs to know that even Pokémon, which is known for its warm and daily life, also has battles and dark sides. Only in this way can conflicts be created, so that the style of the article will not always be bland. This kind of mediocre article has a relatively small audience, and it is easy to get bored if you read it too much.

Give some encouragement to the seedlings. Although the setting is relatively old, the character of the protagonist is quite lovable. There is no trace of AI. It is quite interesting and worth raising.

To be honest, after seeing so many magical girl novels, I basically couldn't stand them anymore. I stopped reading them after reading only one or twenty chapters. But this one is very good. Finally, there is a good one. I didn't expect the author to write it so well. The more I read, the more addicted I became. I quickly updated it. Come on [like][like][like][like]

Absolute love, the desire to protect that comes from it, teaches you how to save the world...

With support, the three views are upright, super upright, extremely upright, with absolute strength, and not without brainstorming. The protagonist group is very good, and the sense of substitution is also very strong. I haven't seen such pure love and justice for a long time. The only thing I can't stand is the bad jokes mixed in from time to time. I can't stand listening to the novel.

Yes, this is the second Magical Girl novel that Tomato has read that I really like. Although it has a slightly similar structure, it can't stop being interesting. There is a slight collapse + water at the back, and I don't know why I can't control the rhythm.

This is the kind of male protagonist I want

I want to order you to divide your troops into five groups to fight for infinite love😡

Okay, there's nothing bad about it, it's just that the span is too big and not excessive. One second I'm fighting and the next second I'm confessing my vest at home. I'm relatively new. Other than that, there's nothing wrong with it.

A rare magical girl novel, not one of those scammers. The stickers are also very good, Wanfewang this one

Surprisingly, it's pretty good-looking

The future is bright, I mean the writing is good, please write more

Not bad, but really classic. Classic concealing identity.

The plot is okay, and the writing style shows that it has ideas, but there is still room for growth. It seems to be much more comfortable after about 30 chapters. Traditional magical girl! ! ! Vs modern magical girl! ! ! Who will win? ! ! ! Infinite Love: Hoho, instead of running away, do you approach me instead? Magical Girl Leou: You seem to have made a mistake. You are the challenger. With two sounds, the field expands (crossed out) and transforms! ! The war begins

Infinite Love Sir [crying] Lover King [crying]

Beautiful, love watching it! ! ! Not enough to eat, teacher [cry][cry][cry]

Support me, the plot is pretty good

Beautiful, a real magical girl

Haji is not a district

There are quite a lot of memes, so Lehe is definitely enough ()

I don't want to be in a six-point area

Hajisaku, you are not a fool✋🏻😋🤚🏻 (By the way, I have seen so many good reviews, why is the score so low?)

Auntie quack, coo quack!

It's a lot of fun, please support the author by giving it a good review