The initial rating is out. Maybe, just maybe, it'll go up.
[Groveling ex / one-on-one romance / both inexperienced / happy ending / transmigrate into a book]
[Muralist focused on making money & wealthy CEO, calculating and restrained at first, pathetically lovesick and obsessive later]
After transmigrating into a wealthy-family melodrama as an NPC, Jin Youling only wanted to steer clear of the original plot, take on commissions, and make money. She never expected Chen Yuchi to completely lose it.
At first, he said, “Know your place. Don't cross the line.”
Later, he said, “I'm used to having you around. Don't go.”
Finally, with red-rimmed eyes, he begged, “I'll do anything. Come back to me. I can't live without you.”
She refused without hesitation. “We're not right for each other!”
She packed up and left at once. She had no desire to play out a tragic love story with the CEO.
The writing is okay and very delicate, but I really don't see where the male protagonist is abused. The female protagonist is still too decent to him. The female protagonist allows the male protagonist who humiliated her before to enter the house, but does not let the male protagonist who respects her enter the house. And it doesn't feel very abusive. The female protagonist is already throbbing in various ways. She just insists that she doesn't like the male protagonist. Moreover, the male protagonist is engaged and keeps looking for the female protagonist. You should cancel it first. If you don't cancel it, do you want the female protagonist to continue to be your lover? 🤦
Very good 💕💕 It seems that the heroine is quite sober at the moment. I hope she won't forgive the male protagonist too easily in the future. I will chase my wife to the crematorium fiercely. I hope the sojourn mentioned by the heroine will also come true! Come on, the author, I just stayed up all night to read it and savor it carefully.
They are all very good-looking so far. The heroine is really sober. I have seen similar ones before, but the heroine will always give up and leave for the hero, give up her original goals, etc. But the heroine in this one does not. She knows her goal, is very sober, and leaves when the contract expires. The female protagonist is so beautiful, has a tough and gentle personality, and is an artist. She is really attractive, so I am not surprised that the male protagonist would fall in love with her. At present, I only see the male protagonist as rich and handsome, and I haven't seen other shining points yet. I have to say that he will reflect on himself, realize his arrogance, and be willing to change. Then, the protagonists are all clean, but the male protagonist got engaged before the contract expired, and did not terminate the contract immediately after the engagement. He still waited until the contract ended normally. If you mind, you can think about it again. Overall, I still highly recommend it (except for Ms. Yang's scenes, I also like them all. How can I abuse myself for a man who doesn't love me 😢) I think it's good for the two to get to know and love each other again after they have completely broken off. Now, the male protagonist will feel very unlovable, and when the female protagonist likes the male protagonist, it will also make people feel that the female protagonist's liking is quite inexplicable.
I really can't stand myself. Why did I click on this kind of novel again? It's actually good-looking. I don't know why the traffic is relatively low. I gave it 4 stars because it hasn't been updated yet 😳 I'll change it to 5 stars after it's finished.
The writing is particularly good, the female protagonist is very charming, and the male protagonist is very cold and arrogant in the early stage, but later becomes attracted and is well portrayed. I hope that the male protagonist will be tortured more in the future, and that the female protagonist will not accept him easily. I still love the heroine more and hope that the heroine can focus on her own career line. In fact, it would be nice if other male supporting characters appeared later.
Although it is still the routine of passing through the book to become a cannon fodder NPC, the author has injected a self-improving soul into the heroine, who is kind and tough, sober and self-loving. And the male protagonist is not a flat-faced boss. He also portrays the emotional changes of the female protagonist very delicately. I look forward to the crematorium.
It's a very interesting book. I don't have much time to comment on it, but the description of the two people's psychological states is very realistic. Especially in the current situation where AI literature is rampant, this kind of works with a sense of living people are more worthy of support and cherishment.
The writing is very smooth, and it can be seen that the author himself wrote it carefully. There are so many AI articles now that I really can't stand them. Keep up the good writing, keep up the good work!
The writing and plot are both good. The heroine doesn't want to refuse and welcomes her. She is very sober. She read the latest chapter in one go and urged for updates.
It's so well written, the female protagonist has a very charming personality, and the male protagonist's transition from arrogance to temptation is also very vivid.