Honkai: Star Rail National Fate: Summon Jingliu to Split the Heavens with One Sword from the Start

As a young reader who has never written a book, I know that I am a bit judgmental, but I still make a suggestion: 1. Reduce the switching of perspectives (not to say that the protagonist and the audience are not good, but it is a bit too frequent. You can write the protagonist's perspective after a paragraph and then switch) 2. Add more thoughtful ones (now it is very similar to the early works, everyone madly mocked the protagonist, and then was slapped in the face. Same, it is not that I don't like it, but I will be tired after watching too much. Of course, if the author treats this world as a female channel, let's talk about it separately) At present, I have seen from Boss Yao that there are other opinions that will be raised in the future. I look forward to subsequent improvements and I will definitely give you 5 stars💕 (I really like this type of article (Collapse of Iron + National Destiny), I hope the author will work hard😘)

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33 Comments. I feel that the first 33 photos can be skipped. I should go back later. I will use my spiritual sense to investigate again and I will follow up on the comments later. In addition, please give the author a big boost. I saw it on the recommendation list. I like the subject matter. The writing is okay. I just need to reduce the number of off-site in the future. It is a bit annoying to hear those people insisting. I'm so happy, I finally got over it 😏 😏

The author is great. After reading the book review and reading it myself, I actually feel it. This novel is very good. The resources provided and the rewards given to individuals for increasing their life span should be within a certain range [Bookshelf plus one]

Feel good about yourself and the content is good. Um... That's why the summons are all for women, and there are some very strong men too. Overall good

It is recommended to skip the plot of the dummy in the first 50 chapters. The other plots are okay [Thoughts]

It's okay. The writing style of the female channel in the early stage is a bit toxic, but it's okay later on. Let's see how it performs in the future. Let's take care of it for a few days.

A plump, round and juicy novel [Read carefully]

Needless to say, it looks good and fulfills my fantasy.