The Forgotten Stars Continue to Shine in Gensokyo!

This book is the second work in the Oriental Project series I'm a newbie and I'm just writing for fun. Please give me some advice on my writing style. [Original characters + daily unit + second creation settings + the mastermind behind the scenes (?) + Gensokyo's unique beautiful girl stickers (maybe?)] She woke up from the nebula, her clothes covered with starlight. Every point of light is the emotion and memory that humans have delivered to the starry sky. The starry sky outside is getting darker—not that the stars are extinguished, but that there are fewer people watching the stars. She followed the last stream of light through the barrier and fell into Fantasyland. There are witches, magicians, vampires, and a bunch of idle monsters here. No one knows where she comes from. They only know that she sits in the corridor of the shrine every night and looks at the stars, occasionally solving (causing?) Mutations, and occasionally continuing to light up the forgotten starry sky. She is "Nebula's original memory" and the "Fourth Sage" of Gensokyo - but what she wants is not a title, she just wants to find a place where others are willing to raise their heads. This is a story about "being seen". It is also a story about "never forgetting".