Me? Throwing Myself Into His Arms?

It's so beautiful, it made me itchy, I couldn't help but go out and spend 500 🤦

In a word, the reversal is too sudden sometimes. I don't understand what's going on with Gu, I think it's a bad impression. So does the hero. Sometimes she suddenly knelt down, and sometimes she suddenly burst into tears and cried. I want to ask, how did she know that the male protagonist was a prostitute when he saw her just after time travel (sorry for skipping some of them). The second thing is that this person wants to be punished well, and beats her for a while and then doesn't love her. It's very disconnected. At least in my opinion, if she really loves the male protagonist, she won't beat and scold him (in some plots). The same goes for the male protagonist. Especially the chapters towards the end, I immediately forgive them. Although you said in the comments that it is not a female protagonist, this trend can easily go wrong if you don't pay attention. Male readers should want to see the male protagonist training the female protagonist, rather than pulling the female protagonist here because of her own inferiority. If I were the male protagonist, I would torture Gu directly. Don't say you forgive me, just fake your death. . . Gu's friends told her, "Does he love you or not?" "For him, a prostitute, I have to open a sect-protecting formation." Gu just said, "He is just a cheap husband", "I am Gu Linlin", this is too divisive. The author is great. The above are some of my complaints. There are some places that I can't explain clearly. In short, the highlight of this book is the interaction between Gu and the male protagonist, but the poisonous point is also there. Don't talk about the heroine + the man with the background of cultivating immortals is so despicable. You, a petite "dwarf", met you. Shouldn't a person who is good to you live a good life? Sometimes he loves you and sometimes he doesn't like you, and he labels many female protagonists. To take care of this situation, it is estimated that the male protagonist will have to chase his husband before he can develop a relationship with someone else. I hope the author will stop making plots that make the male protagonist kneel. . It's a bit jarring to watch, after all, the male protagonist has no shortage of women (if you want one). Although Gu is the first, but he is only the first. Don't put too much emphasis on Gu, author. After all, you have labeled him as a female protagonist, and Gu will be weakened to a situation similar to Qingmei's defeated dog. I will give four stars here. If Gu is tortured hard later and I feel happy, five stars will be given. Come on, author. Okay, okay, five stars for you The male protagonist finally realized that this is a world dominated by women. I thought the author missed this point. Unfortunately, it was a bit short and not enough to watch. However, I hope that the male protagonist can still treat Zhou well. After all, although Gu and the male protagonist were separated, it was a good thing. Gu should be tortured. Looking forward to the plot. Finally, I hope that the male protagonist will not be too arrogant. After all, it doesn't matter if there is less female protagonist. The emotional line should be written better, and don't be overflowing with emotions just because she is the female protagonist. Come on, author.

Unexpectedly, the male protagonist started a harem because Lingling thought that the male protagonist was 🦆, so she never wanted to admit their relationship to other people. In the end, she broke up with the male protagonist without telling the reason. Later, she found out that the male protagonist was her for the first time, and she probably regretted it to death [laughter]

It's a good article about female heroes cultivating immortality. It seems to be pretty good so far. The author should keep up the good work and don't write it as a female channel in the future.

The writing is so awesome, it's not about being emperor for the sake of being emperor. I haven't seen such a fascinating novel in a long time. Each character is well portrayed, very full, and looks very comfortable. The emotional scenes are really addictive, but I don't know how to torture the sect master later. I'm looking forward to it. This book is definitely unique in the subject of men being inferior and women being superior. In addition, In addition, the male protagonist is a bit indecisive. To put it bluntly, it may be a bit annoying to read, but it does not affect the perception of the plot at all. If you like to watch the love and hatred between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, you can read it. It is not popular now because the word count is too short. This book is worth 9 points just for its writing and emotional scenes, which is much better than those novice novels I read 😠

The protagonist does not have the pretentiousness of ordinary heroine novels. She eats when she needs to, and eats good and clean food without wronging herself. This is better than many male heroine novels. It is not like the common heroine in male pornographic novels whose personality changes after time travel. She also likes to be a licking dog and can't stand it after just one look. This book is well written.

Wu Fu Wu Fu, is the male protagonist's character finally going to change? I'm so looking forward to it

To God, it would be better if there is a chasing husband later Things change in the back, not as good as the pure love character in the front

Author, let me show you a clear path. In fact, in the following plot, the male protagonist should abandon Gu Lingling and treat her as a female supporting role, or a female villain (that is, a direct plot kill). In this case, there are guaranteed to be people watching. It must be like this, it must be like this, it must be like this!!!

Not girly, not toxic, no green spots, doesn't look abusive now, I hope I won't be abusive in the future, I hope I will be responsible for the heroine in the future. I think it's worth five stars. [OK][OK] This Liu Bei is a god, he is the god Liu Bei. This heroine is one of the best books I have ever read. I hope that in the future the male protagonist will not behave like a mother-in-law or be too toxic.