Yj's Life Starting from the Spider Nest

A+... That's how you rate it, right? The younger brothers and sisters at home all love watching it! They made it so that they had to give up the family party just to read the latest issue (heartbreaking). However, with the help of my younger brother, I witnessed the excellence of this novel with my own eyes today! Haha, I almost missed the treasure! We plan to in-app purchase the latest broadcast rights of your novel and watch it at the family gathering, haha! Tomorrow morning I will go to Amway to help other elder brothers and sisters~

The second book I like is related to Spider's Nest. Compared with Lao Huo's book "Middle Finger Father", which was not smooth in the early stage and confused now that he doesn't know how to write it, this one is getting better and better except for the beginning. It really attracts me. Unfortunately, the volume is still too small and it is not satisfying. Come on, author, I will continue to watch this rare A+ grade work!

The story is quite interesting, the characters all have their own personalities, and there are a lot of laughs. I haven't discovered OOC yet and it's non-toxic and safe to eat. The content is too little, but I'll give it a try.

The writing is good, but the update speed is a bit slow, unlike a new writer. Did you transfer it from a cat? The popularity of Tomato's books will only increase if the number of words increases, and the results will be better, so when will the author publish more?

It looks good. Yang Ming's current limit is very high. After all, the power of the twelve black beasts is gathered into one body. It would be nice to awaken an ego later. Also, the author's updates are too slow. I hope it will be speeded up and there will be more descriptions about Yoshihide. I feel that it is a bit lacking at the moment.

Okay, give it some encouragement. I want to see daily life. At present, Tomato has about 100,000 words of traffic. Come on, author. It seems that the author's name was seen on a certain Hakimi. ⊙ω⊙

The story has great potential, but this mirror world is not the world of Spider Nest Blade. Instead, the original fathers have been transformed into sinner fathers, and then merged into a brand new mirror world. Moreover, when it was the first time to forge a sword, my parents were not very aggressive, and they had the characteristics of sinners. There are few poison points, there is always a mirror world...

A+... That's how you rate it, right? The younger brothers and sisters at home all love watching it! They made it so that they had to give up the family party just to read the latest issue (heartbreaking). However, with the help of my younger brother, I witnessed the excellence of this novel with my own eyes today! Haha, I almost missed the treasure! We plan to in-app purchase the latest broadcast rights of your novel and watch it at the family gathering, haha! Tomorrow morning I will go to Amway to help other elder brothers and sisters~

Awesome, I want to see the red-lined version of Blade of the Spider Nest [lick screen]

Everything is given by command. The spider thought so and hid itself in the shadow of the spider web, just waiting quietly - waiting for some prey to crash into the web, and then hunt and eat it. One day, a hole suddenly breaks in the web, and an alarm immediately sounds in the spider's mind: the web must be repaired quickly, otherwise it will die and its prey will slip through the hole in the future. But he saw the petals falling from the hole. Petals in spring, petals that are useless for survival... The spider faced the hole and remained motionless. This... Is not bad. The spider thought so strangely that he even bit the lower end of the web, just to watch the petals fall one by one. I also had the urge to jump out of the net and leave the nest. Then, spring ended. Cold poured in through the hole, freezing the spider in place. "It would be nice if the net wasn't bitten... At least... The petals wouldn't leave because of it..." But... Do spiders really like spring? He hid himself deeper and deeper, hiding behind layers of cobwebs, fearing the truth - was it empty, or was it a real regret? Everything the command gives, everything the command takes away. If it is empty, there will be no regrets and you can enjoy the instructions, but why is it sad? So what is it that is getting more and more tingling under the chest as I think about it more deeply? If it was a regret... It meant that he had more than just instructions. What was tingling under his chest was the sincerity that he had not been able to reveal. He was pulsing with his breathing, causing the wounds under the mask to bleed. Love is real, so hate is also real. He doesn't want to admit that he has lost everything, but he always fantasizes about returning to his original position. But in the end, I could only curl up on the cold sofa and drink bitter wine. What can you say about papers and textbooks that numb a painful heart? When facing the loss of teaching materials, your proud Palermo swordsmanship and prophetic eye can do nothing. He didn't even notice the tears in his eyes. Palermo will accelerate after every collision, but the gradually accelerating swordsmanship cannot create the future he wants.

Personally, I actually want to see the family line between Lixiang, Yoshihide, and the protagonist. After all, Lien gave Yoshihide love in the original work. This is a very important part of the character building of both parties, because Yoshihide can't figure out whether the love he gives is real or fake. He couldn't figure it out either, so he had the entry about the false father. But since it was a suitcase, I felt there was little hope. I also hope that it will not be completely humanized and used as a part of the plot to promote the plot. If the description is biased toward the inside, you must pay attention to the way you are completely numb and enjoying yourself under instructions. If you prefer Lean, you must write down the dissatisfaction and resentment hidden in your heart when executing the instructions. I hope it's not just a personal computer.

I have played both Bus and Ark. This is my criticism of this work. 1. Among the current monthly diary-themed works, this work puts forward another idea. The setting of the protagonist as a trainee in a spider nest is quite novel. This can be given 5 stars. 2. The author has updated at least one to two chapters every day so far. At the same time, the style is almost exactly the same as the previous one, and there are no big surprises. As a game adaptation fan work, it is qualified, which means that the author has indeed spent time on the game background. This can be given 5 stars. 3. Whether the protagonist's abilities are too complicated. The protagonist, as of the point in my criticism, already possesses many abilities. For example, Gregor's wrapping paper makes people very confused. Too many abilities are likely to have an impact on subsequent battles. For example, when the protagonist fights the boss, he opens the wrapping paper again and again. Is this the protagonist fighting the boss, or the boss fighting the protagonist? Of course, the reduction of what I mean is that the protagonist lacks a unique fighting method, such as Lei Heng's Tiger Bounce. There are too many novels I have read that give the protagonist too many abilities that lead to rapid expansion of combat power. For this I give 4 stars. 4. The author's plot advances slowly. What I don't want to see is that it took the author a whole word count of Dream of Red Mansions to get to the Ark part. I would like to make a suggestion based on my knowledge: you can finish the content about killing your parents first and then go directly to the Ark content. The content about your children can be interspersed with the Ark content as a side story. I was attracted by the combination of the contents of Ark and Spider Nest. The too slow plot advancement may cause people like me to quit this book. I give this 3 stars. Summary: This is an excellent YJ fan novel of the same time period. It is a daily novel suitable for people with a slow pace. At the same time, the protagonist's excessive abilities may also set up surprises later. The overall situation can be called excellent. Final rating: B-

Reader: ... If I just let you go, you will probably never update again. (Wear right-hand gloves)😶 Even if you stop you from leaving, you can't leave anything behind for me. (Wear left-handed gloves) 😐 But... It's better than being heartbroken by empty regrets, isn't it? 😑 (Bleeding)... (Mask covering face) Hiss... (Sound of blood burning dry)🔥 Ha. Great, let's get started. 😄 (Takes out weapon) 😐 This wound... Doesn't need to be healed. 🙁 Since once you continue to update, the wound will eventually become hot again...😕 Well, might as well get used to it. 😶 Author: You make it sound... Like I will update. 😡 Reader: Author, as long as you update it. That way the book won't disappear. 😐 So... Don't go.

The entangled love between these guys in the Spider Nest is so exciting! This is what I want to see!

Red thread, family, bond, this is what I want to see [Adoration]

Yes, author, it's better than I thought. It doesn't look like it was used for Al. It should be purely handmade.

Although it is said to be the father of Spider Nest in the mirror world, it seems that it is written according to the main world.

Except for some slightly childish wording (such as the great horror between life and death), the overall article is relatively warm. Both the interaction with the sister and the character of the guardian father are relatively good. At the same time, some characters in the mirror world avoid some bad descriptions of the guardian father's character. It is very large among the current monthly articles. Cup, of course, because the number of words in the article is currently small and the protagonist is still young, so I recommend you to read it later. Of course, it will be changed to five stars when there are more words. If you are planning to read the book now, if you can accept that the protagonist is in a growth stage for a long time and pay more attention to the growth and the bond between the characters, it is recommended to watch. By the way, this book can be given a B+ at the moment, with the potential of an A+. Next is the bond and conflict between the protagonist and Yoshihide when he grows up, and the protagonist's future handling of the spider nest will be the key to whether the plot can go further in the future. I hope the author can break through himself

It's too good to watch, but just because the monthly diary part is so good, I'm very worried about whether my level will drop if I travel to the world of Curry Eagle Corner later, but for now I'd better enjoy the champagne.

No matter how good the art is, you are still afraid of revenge on the account book [laughs] Why remember me?  Let me remind you that many people from powerful gangs died because they were recorded [smile] Why remember me? I can already picture you being recorded and then blocked [angry]

Rated A+, the sentences are fluent.

This piece is rated... A+! Both in terms of color and performance, it is quite perfect. Over time, I will definitely become a rising star in the urban art world, and I look forward to producing more excellent works.

A+... Probably? I don't mean to say that the work is bad. If I want to evaluate it, I even need to open a separate category, but I don't know how to evaluate it internally. After all, I don't know many friends in it. As a "delicacy", reasonable plot arrangements, interesting writing, and plots that interest readers are cleverly combined, making people look forward to the appearance of the next new article. In terms of emotion alone, it is also a treasure in the world, fascinating, and exciting... It is not enough! Ah! I was so fascinated by it that the dishes almost lost their best flavor, and the ingredients almost lost their freshness... It's time to hunt for suitable ingredients again. It's hunting time again. See you next time (Ｔ▽Ｔ)

I feel that the characters are more like those in the original world, not so much like the mirror world, but the character creation, smooth sentences and plot are very good, A ten

I want the heroine Yoshihide (~￣▽￣)~ I clicked on this book, mainly searching it on Ark, but I didn't write about Ark. Um, then let's find out, so can it be Yoshihide? <(._.)>

It can be regarded as a combination of the mirror world and the main world. Most of the characters are from the mirror world, and the plot is from the main world.

Of the 2000 people who are still reading, 150 are following it. I was so scared that I cried [cry][cry][cry]

Update soon, I urgently need to see the Ark linkage and other mirror worlds [lick screen]

A+, most fans can only say "I participated in a major event", but the details are passed by, leaving only the grandeur. In fact, this kind of fans are just replicating official things. I still have high expectations for this book. After all, this is the story of the protagonist, and the bond and soul are written. I look forward to the day when the Blade of the Spider Nest is forged.

Very good, non-AI purely handmade