[Wuxia Setting] [Online Game Interface] [Original Martial Arts] [War Between Nations] [Many Women]
Lin Yu transmigrates to Blue Star and enters a wuxia game called Land Immortals. This game also takes players into all kinds of worlds: The Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber, Demi-Gods and Semi-Devils, The Legend of the Condor Heroes, and even anime worlds!
Game abilities and items can manifest in reality, so the rivalry between nations shifts entirely into the game.
Players have to create their own martial arts from the start. But this world is constantly at war, entertainment is scarce, and there are none of the wuxia novels from his previous life.
Most players come up with low-grade Yellow-class techniques like the Early-to-Bed Qi-Nurturing Method, the Stress-Relieving Inner Meditation Sutra, and the Theory of Qi and Blood Conservation. They can only practice one technique at a time.
But Lin Yu creates the Yi Jin Jing from the start, then stacks the Nine Yang Divine Skill, Nine Yin Divine Skill, and Beiming Divine Skill on top of it... Add the Eighteen Dragon-Subduing Palms, Six Meridians Divine Sword, Dugu Nine Swords, Tai Chi, and Great Shift of the Universe...
Lin Yu takes a job power-leveling for a war between nations: "If they can still breathe after I land one move, you can call it a failed order."
In this life, I will ascend to become a Land Immortal, take control and survey the world, and roam with beauties at my side.
Objective evaluation, novice author, writing style is average. But the battle scenes took a lot of thought, and each character has his or her own characteristics. The characters involved in the original work are not OOC, and although the writing style is a bit poor, it is not unacceptable in Tomato. Furthermore, the combination of online games and mixed martial arts is relatively novel, but the online game feel is a bit weak, so readers who treat it purely as an online game article can write it off. The part about recruiting girls is where the author pays the most attention. There is no ink in the collection, and there is no delay in eating meat. There are emotional lines and story lines, but it is not a mindless collection. Unlike ordinary martial arts novels, you have to accept a woman. This is very praiseworthy. There is no inexplicable love at first sight, but it is obvious that the author wanted to write more delicately, but it was just a little bit inferior due to the power of his writing. The author obviously read the comments and made many changes, giving him five stars to give him a chance to grow.
Pure turtle boy, team up to fight monsters and let the school girl take a break to fight on her own
The taste of online gaming articles written by a novice 20 years ago...
The modification of the secret realm is very good. After all, the original work is the original work. This is the secret realm in the game. Zhang Wuji will have a wonderful childhood.
The story attracts me, and there is nothing disgusting about it. It is just right for my taste.
The author's writing style is amazing, and the plot setting is very good.
The Sacred Heart Art, Shen Zhao Jing, Tai Xuan Jing, Longevity Art, and the Four Symbols of Heaven's Will are all so awesome that they have no friends.
The storyline is exciting and very interesting!
The author has a clever idea and the rhythm of the story is well controlled.
The plot is compact and orderly without being procrastinating, and it has the charm that makes people reluctant to put it down after picking it up. Very nice to look at.