The Magical Girl Is Overpowered, So the System Makes Me Train in Martial Arts to Become an Immortal

Yes, the author, you can go slower, you can push the protagonist a little harder. I hope that I will never see the protagonist cultivating immortality in my lifetime, let alone the sword immortal in the introduction. So readers, please be aware that the pace of this book is very slow, and the early stage is a bit frustrating. Originally it only had three stars, but for the sake of a new book, I reluctantly gave it five stars.

Admit it, you just can't stand those weird aliens. They are different from us. You can't stand the disrespect for the body, today it's eating the bodies of your family members. Tomorrow, it will use you as food. You can't bear to live surrounded by these creatures that are no different from the monsters of ancient legends. Our emotions are incompatible and our logics are very different. Coexistence? Absolutely impossible. Now is the time for us to take up the traditions of our ancestors. From the moment we first united as one and set foot outside our beautiful blue planet. That word has been lost in our culture for eons. But I know it never comes from our genes disappear. Our race has been inseparable from the tree branch moving to the ground, and our destiny has been inseparable from it. Listen, fellow citizens! The call of the ancestors, they called in Kadesh, in Between the Two Rivers, in Egypt, in Changping, in Red Cliff, in Verdun, in Normandy, in every piece of land and every ocean on this planet. Use Chinese, use English, German, Russian, lingua franca... Human languages converge into that cry: War! War! War! My compatriots! Now, it is time! Initiate the war protocol and send out the human legions! We will fight! We fight on the planet! We fight on the planet Nebula battle! We fight in hyperspace! We will Fight wherever needed in the universe! We fight for the future of mankind, even if it means burning up the sea of stars and burning down the galaxy! Send this message to all alien races that intend to resist! War is coming! @ Sodium citrate compound helped you complete the Bible of Stars😏😏😏

No, I have to tell him this. Admit it, you just can't stand those weird aliens. They are different from us. You can't stand the disrespect for the body. Today it eats the bodies of your family members, tomorrow it will use you as food. You can't bear to live surrounded by these creatures that are no different from the monsters of ancient legends. Our emotions are incompatible and our logics are very different. Coexist? Absolutely impossible. Now is the time for us to revive the traditions of our ancestors. That word has been lost in our culture for eons, from the moment we first united as one and set foot on our beautiful blue planet. But, I know, it will never disappear from our genes. Our race has been inseparable from the tree branch moving to the ground, and our destiny has been inseparable from it. Listen, fellow citizens! The call of the ancestors, they called in Kadesh, between the two rivers, in Egypt, in Changping, in Chibi, in Verdun, in Normandy, in every piece of land and every ocean on this planet. Use Chinese, use English, German, Russian, lingua franca... All human languages converge into that cry: War! War! War! Fellow citizens! Now, it's time! Initiate the war agreement and send out the human army! We will fight, we will fight on the planets, we will fight in the nebulae, we will fight in hyperspace, we will fight in every place of need in the universe! We fight for the future of mankind, even if we have to burn the sea of ​​stars and burn down the galaxy! Send this message to all alien races that intend to resist—— War is coming!

It's okay, it looks okay, that's why the dialogue can't be one line after another but all stuck together, it looks good.

I don't care about AI. The point is that you can't do it before and after it. I personally don't rule out AI, so I won't talk about AI issues (of course, if you don't talk about it before and after it) The shortcoming of this book is mainly that the pace is relatively slow. It takes more than 100 chapters to get close to the meridians. It is very late in cultivating immortals. What about the state of cultivating immortals? Isn't it slower? But consider deducting one star from the new book.

It's okay, it's still the same old routine, the pace is slow, just do it if you don't accept it, I feel like it takes more than 1 million words to achieve the goal of cultivating immortality

Praise 1. This chapter is so interesting to read! The protagonist's treatment is so cool, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Author, please update! 2. I didn't expect the reversal here. I was stunned when I saw it. The rhythm is great. 3. The character design is very good, the psychology of this period is very real, and the sense of substitution is very strong.

How can I put it this way? It's still possible, but in terms of combat power, the author has to be strict. The protagonist can't beat the lowest level magical girl who can kill a roadside person with just one hit until more than 80 chapters.

What does fake orange mean?

Very good, story and worldview It's just that the pace is slower Those who are used to this kind of subject can watch it