Westeros, with the War of the Five Kings raging.
A veteran sandbox-war player transmigrates to the world of "A Song of Ice and Fire". When Ai Qing wakes up, he's become Edmure Tully, Lord of Riverrun, the spineless, errand-running “Fool Trout” from the original story, despised by everyone.
Luckily, he has a Conqueror's interface:
[War Map]: See the whole realm and track enemy movements at a glance.
[All-Seeing Surveillance]: Uncover conspiracies and know exactly who's stabbing you in the back.
[Tactical Simulations]: See the outcome before a battle even begins.
[Daily Strategies]: Rapid fortifications, surprise-attack banners, fog to seal off territory...
So he immediately takes action, establishes his own power, and puts an end to trouble at home.
From Riverrun to Harrenhal;
From the Ruby Ford to the Iron Throne in King's Landing...
He catches the Freys' plot and takes them hostage on the spot;
At the foot of the Golden Tooth, he's the first to charge with sword drawn;
On the walls of The Twins, he personally sends old Walder to his end;
On the field of Daisies, the Kingslayer falls beneath Valyrian steel.
“Have you ever seen a fifth Tully?”
“I have. He's the last one.”
Old Walder Frey, his last words
The latest chapters are written in semi-classical Chinese? Game of Thrones is a Western setting, so don't write classical Chinese. The writing is not good and the feeling of fragmentation is serious. I suggest you change it. The plot progresses slowly and could be sped up a little. The hooks are a bit small. Currently, the role of hooks is to provide information and are not very helpful in increasing strength. After several wars, the population, food, productivity, etc. Of the Riverlands have been severely weakened. If this aspect is not strengthened through plug-ins, then the Riverlands will not have enough strength to participate in the subsequent plots. There are also some places that are a bit repetitive, but there are still few and they can be revised, especially the latest chapters in classical Chinese. However, in general, the writing is okay, and it starts well. If there are no big problems later, if it adds a little more fun, it will basically be more than half of the Game of Thrones novels. Come on, author!
Four stars for the creativity and conflict arrangement at the beginning. The young master of the original Wolf family really deserves it, and he can really do it. It's a very endearing beginning, and probably the most conflicting beginning among the Game of Thrones fanfics I've read recently. But the translation problem is serious, and the description method that DP likes to use is too typical. I don't object to the author using software to assist, but you can at least go through it manually later and revise it before sending it out, right? Chapter 5 begins with paragraph after paragraph, describing one thing repeatedly. Taking the Frey family's twenty-man cavalry as an example, within one chapter, their armament is described three times in almost the same way. My opinion is to make full use of AI, add manual review steps, and significantly delete repeated description paragraphs.
The best Game of Thrones book I've seen recently, with engaging writing
I think it's well written, although it's not my favorite harem, and I don't know what I'm going to do with the dragon later on. It's a business-focused novel