In Westeros, the War of the Five Kings is raging.
A veteran Sandbox War player travels through the world of ice and fire. Ai Qing wakes up and becomes Edmure Tully, Duke of Riverrun, the coward, errand boy and "Fool Trout" who is despised by everyone in the original novel.
Fortunately, he has a conqueror panel——
[Map Sandbox]: The entire territory is visible, and the enemy's movements are clear at a glance.
World-wide reconnaissance: See through the conspiracy and find out who is stabbing you in the back.
[Tactical Deduction]: You can see the outcome before the battle.
[Daily advice]: Build fortifications quickly, attack the flag quickly, seal the territory in thick fog...
So he took action decisively, established his own business, and quelled internal troubles.
From Riverrun to Harrenhal;
From the ruby to the Iron Throne of King's Landing...
He held Frey's plot hostage on the spot;
Under the Golden Tooth City, he was the first to draw his sword and charge;
At the head of Twin River City, he personally sent Old Wade on his way;
On the Daisy Field, the Kingslayer fell beneath Valyrian steel.
"Have you seen the fifth Tully?"
"I've seen him, he's the last one."
——Walder Frey Sr. (Last words)
Reader comments
The latest chapters are written in semi-classical Chinese? Game of Thrones is a Western setting, so don't write in classical Chinese. It's not written well, and it feels very fragmented. I suggest you change it. The plot progresses slowly and can be sped up a little. The hooks are a bit small. The function of the hooks at present is to provide information, which does not help to increase the strength. After several wars, the population, food, productivity, etc. Of the Riverlands have been greatly weakened. If this aspect is not strengthened through plug-ins, then the Riverlands will not have enough strength to participate in the subsequent plots. There are also some places that are a bit repetitive, but there are still few and they can be revised, especially the latest chapters in classical Chinese.
However, in general, the writing is okay, and it starts well. If there are no big problems later, if it adds a little more fun, it will basically be more than half of the Game of Thrones novels. Come on, author!
Four stars for the creativity and conflict arrangement at the beginning. The young master of the original Wolf family really deserves it, and he can really do it.
It's a very endearing beginning, and probably the most conflicting beginning among the Game of Thrones fanfics I've read recently.
But the translation problem is serious, and the description method that DP likes to use is too typical.
I don't object to the author using software to assist, but you can at least go through it manually later and revise it before sending it out, right?
Chapter 5 begins with paragraph after paragraph, describing one thing repeatedly.
Taking the Frey family's twenty-man cavalry as an example, within one chapter, their armament is described three times in almost the same way.
My opinion is to make full use of AI, add manual review steps, and significantly delete repeated description paragraphs.
I think it's well written, although it's not my favorite harem, and I don't know what I'm going to do with the dragon later on. It's a business-focused novel
The best Game of Thrones book I've seen recently, with engaging writing
The latest chapters are written in semi-classical Chinese? Game of Thrones is a Western setting, so don't write in classical Chinese. It's not written well, and it feels very fragmented. I suggest you change it. The plot progresses slowly and can be sped up a little. The hooks are a bit small. The function of the hooks at present is to provide information, which does not help to increase the strength. After several wars, the population, food, productivity, etc. Of the Riverlands have been greatly weakened. If this aspect is not strengthened through plug-ins, then the Riverlands will not have enough strength to participate in the subsequent plots. There are also some places that are a bit repetitive, but there are still few and they can be revised, especially the latest chapters in classical Chinese. However, in general, the writing is okay, and it starts well. If there are no big problems later, if it adds a little more fun, it will basically be more than half of the Game of Thrones novels. Come on, author!
Four stars for the creativity and conflict arrangement at the beginning. The young master of the original Wolf family really deserves it, and he can really do it. It's a very endearing beginning, and probably the most conflicting beginning among the Game of Thrones fanfics I've read recently. But the translation problem is serious, and the description method that DP likes to use is too typical. I don't object to the author using software to assist, but you can at least go through it manually later and revise it before sending it out, right? Chapter 5 begins with paragraph after paragraph, describing one thing repeatedly. Taking the Frey family's twenty-man cavalry as an example, within one chapter, their armament is described three times in almost the same way. My opinion is to make full use of AI, add manual review steps, and significantly delete repeated description paragraphs.
I think it's well written, although it's not my favorite harem, and I don't know what I'm going to do with the dragon later on. It's a business-focused novel
The best Game of Thrones book I've seen recently, with engaging writing