Honkai: Star Rail: How Is Handcrafting a Rider Belt Not Genius?

From my personal point of view, I think this book is very good, and the preliminary preparation is a bit long, but at least it seems to have written a relatively complete story for the protagonist to join the protagonist group later, and the opening n is arranged in the Black Tower Space Station, which also feels very reasonable. After all, the Black Tower Space Station can also be regarded as a semi- It is a huge research base with a lot of research resources, which is very suitable for the early development of the protagonist. There are very few articles on this subject, which are much better than those AI articles. Although there are some small flaws in the article, it is generally good (it only represents my personal opinion, please do not criticize)

Won the Easter match

No matter how you say it, it is a new humanities, so putting too much pressure is not good, and I think it looks good overall, at least there is no obvious explosion, but the description of the knight system's combat power is wrong. The Dangerous Rabbit Tank should not be able to fight the Doomsday Beast. If it is based on the combat power of the Chuangqi series The danger level of using Danger Rabbit to violently beat the protagonist of Doommon is at least 5.5 (Although it is out of control). However, the author does not seem to mention the danger level, but he also brought out a heaven-defying prop like Pandora's Box. Pandora's Box is a cosmic-level power. If it is not handled well, it will collapse.

He helped the space station and was treated like half a slave by the Black Tower... Oita

What did the collapse of iron and the resulting knight teach you about writing? Taihao saw it, Haochi! [Full] [full] [full]

The problem in the early stage is not very small. I only read about the first four chapters, and the reading time is relatively low. I'm sorry, but I only read four chapters. I can't help it. These four chapters are more persuasive. I skipped a chapter and then looked at the back. Well, for example, the author failed to summarize the most important points in the summary at the end of the first volume, so the character's personality is not quite right, and there are problems with the setting. , But it's okay, after all, there are explanations, but the previous part of the problem is still easy to persuade people to quit, such as combat power and the like. In fact, it can be explained, such as the danger level, etc., Otherwise some readers will be persuaded to quit. There is also the character of the Black Tower. I feel that it is partly OOC. The most important thing is that it is a little bit Micro-expression is to make the protagonist behave like a genius. After all, it is obvious from your profile that some people will come here for the title of genius. If the protagonist behaves too much, it will be very discouraging. This is also something to be noted, so it is also necessary to change it slightly. As for the dialogue between the protagonist and the Black Tower, it does not need to be changed too much. After all, just It's normal to not be able to adapt to time travel, but it's okay to change it a little. Then, I read the comments later and mentioned the issue of female staff. I haven't read more about this. If it can be changed, let's change it a little. The character should be changed a little better. It's okay to change the dialogue a little. It should be because I haven't read much. If I see more in the future, I will continue to comment. Because I talk a lot, there may be typos, but it shouldn't affect reading very much.

Although the progress is slow at present, unlike other novels that have various systems at the beginning, it will definitely be exciting in the later stages, and the future can be looked forward to

It looks good, I love watching it, hey hey [smile][smile][smile]

After reading it, I felt that the author should compensate me. After working on so many things for a long time, I was immediately put down.

After reading the comments, I realized that there are a lot of problems. However, I came to see the combination of knights and iron collapse. I gave the author 4 stars for the sentiment. I am afraid that I will make the author proud. I hope the author can write better in the future.