(Part of the plot in the early stage was rewritten with reference to the original work to make up for many regrets in the book... In the later stage, the rivers and lakes and the court are parallel, and the pure martial arts route is followed. It is not a brainless novel, and it rejects the harem. If you don't like it, don't enter.)
Who is Lu Zhanyuan?
He was the person that Li Mochou loved, hated and cared about all his life.
A background figure who died at a young age in order to describe Li Mochou, a big scumbag.
What should I do if I travel through time and become this guy?
Don't worry about whether Li Mochou is fragrant or not, and don't worry about whether a scumbag is a scumbag or not. I, Lu Zhanyuan, will never be a short-lived ghost in this life!
A hundred years later, Lu Zhanyuan shook his head helplessly while stroking his black hair.
"I'm just a health person. How come I became the savior of the Song Dynasty and the number one in the martial arts world? And what the hell are you trying to do to create a statue of me? I'm still alive. I don't need it, you bastard!"
Reader comments
The plot is compact and relaxed, and he is a very capable author. The protagonist is not dark, but a normal person (nowadays, many readers like protagonists with anti-moral instincts, and I really can't stand it). Normal people are very important! ! ! . Then the plot progresses very comfortably, without any sudden and silly supporting roles.
It's pretty good so far. I personally feel that the poisonous points in other comments can be rounded off. I hope that the author will rationalize the interpersonal relationship of the protagonist in the future. He gave snake blood and the blackening of the golden wheel was a bit deliberate. He licked the protagonist in the front and gained something in the secret room but did not immediately use the martial arts memorized. Then After the protagonist learns it after being taught (in fact, it can be said here that Jin Lun deliberately deceived the teaching), it is completely unnecessary to sneak attack the protagonist. It is greedy to hit half health or even residual health at full state. At this time, as long as you don't get close, you don't know how the protagonist will win, and Jin Lun's spider can also be effective at this time.
I hope the author can give Jin Lun an unexpected ending, and don't be obsessed with it or exercise restraint. I also look forward to the follow-up of Li Mochou's plot. The two save each other and have a love debt. It depends on the author how to deal with it. As long as they are not in the harem, it will be acceptable.
The three views in this book are as good as evil! A breath of fresh air of Jin Yong's literary works. It makes up for the regret of pursuing reading. It is very refreshing to read about the meeting between Yideng and Yinggu. Yes, why should honest people bear everything silently. I am looking forward to how the protagonist will balance the court and the world in the future, and what kind of ripples will be caused under the waves of the corrupt regime. [Like][Like][Like]
The writing style is natural, the protagonist's character is likeable, and the supporting characters have distinctive characteristics. As of now, it is a good book.
Not bad, not bad, not bad! My first impression was that it was a low-grade book, but I read it with a drug-testing mentality, but I didn't expect it to be a good book! Good stories are so scarce! Come on, author! I will keep reading again! I've seen too little and it's not enjoyable enough! [Laugh]
So far it seems to be artificial, and it's not a bad point if you don't dismantle the original work, but Destiny's big hand is really trying to persuade him to give up. Overall, it's not a big problem, at least it's pretty good at Tomato's level.
It's well written and doesn't smell like AI. It can be updated quickly.
The plot is coherent, the characters' personalities are not changed, and it's not brainless. It's a good book.
It looks pretty good so far
The pace of this book is neither impatient nor impatient, the foreshadowing is natural, the fighting is exciting, and there is no messy system that sucks. It is a rare and pure martial arts.
It's a rare masterpiece for a fan, and a bookworm of twenty years really thinks it's good.
Come on! Very pretty!
It's very beautifully written.
A very good book.
It's okay. There's nothing wrong with the system. It's just that the update is too slow.
This looks quite comfortable, but the changes are quite big.
It smells like old-school martial arts. Don't be so stubborn as to make Mochou go crazy.
Yes, it has the flavor of old-school martial arts.
The writing is quite good, the protagonist has a good character, and he has not started a harem yet. He has also contacted Jin Yong's other works, please give it a try.
Good looking author, please give it a try
Very good looking very good looking
If you are short of books, you can read them. .
Good, good-looking, really good-looking~
Okay, quite interesting
It feels pretty good-looking
The character design of the protagonist is okay
Ok ok ok
It seems like something has changed, but nothing has changed. It feels like going through the plot all over again.
The plot is compact and relaxed, and he is a very capable author. The protagonist is not dark, but a normal person (nowadays, many readers like protagonists with anti-moral instincts, and I really can't stand it). Normal people are very important! ! ! . Then the plot progresses very comfortably, without any sudden and silly supporting roles.
It's pretty good so far. I personally feel that the poisonous points in other comments can be rounded off. I hope that the author will rationalize the interpersonal relationship of the protagonist in the future. He gave snake blood and the blackening of the golden wheel was a bit deliberate. He licked the protagonist in the front and gained something in the secret room but did not immediately use the martial arts memorized. Then After the protagonist learns it after being taught (in fact, it can be said here that Jin Lun deliberately deceived the teaching), it is completely unnecessary to sneak attack the protagonist. It is greedy to hit half health or even residual health at full state. At this time, as long as you don't get close, you don't know how the protagonist will win, and Jin Lun's spider can also be effective at this time. I hope the author can give Jin Lun an unexpected ending, and don't be obsessed with it or exercise restraint. I also look forward to the follow-up of Li Mochou's plot. The two save each other and have a love debt. It depends on the author how to deal with it. As long as they are not in the harem, it will be acceptable.
The three views in this book are as good as evil! A breath of fresh air of Jin Yong's literary works. It makes up for the regret of pursuing reading. It is very refreshing to read about the meeting between Yideng and Yinggu. Yes, why should honest people bear everything silently. I am looking forward to how the protagonist will balance the court and the world in the future, and what kind of ripples will be caused under the waves of the corrupt regime. [Like][Like][Like]
The writing style is natural, the protagonist's character is likeable, and the supporting characters have distinctive characteristics. As of now, it is a good book.
Not bad, not bad, not bad! My first impression was that it was a low-grade book, but I read it with a drug-testing mentality, but I didn't expect it to be a good book! Good stories are so scarce! Come on, author! I will keep reading again! I've seen too little and it's not enjoyable enough! [Laugh]
So far it seems to be artificial, and it's not a bad point if you don't dismantle the original work, but Destiny's big hand is really trying to persuade him to give up. Overall, it's not a big problem, at least it's pretty good at Tomato's level.
It's well written and doesn't smell like AI. It can be updated quickly.
The plot is coherent, the characters' personalities are not changed, and it's not brainless. It's a good book.
It looks pretty good so far
The pace of this book is neither impatient nor impatient, the foreshadowing is natural, the fighting is exciting, and there is no messy system that sucks. It is a rare and pure martial arts.
It's a rare masterpiece for a fan, and a bookworm of twenty years really thinks it's good.
Come on! Very pretty!
It's very beautifully written.
A very good book.
It's okay. There's nothing wrong with the system. It's just that the update is too slow.
This looks quite comfortable, but the changes are quite big.
It smells like old-school martial arts. Don't be so stubborn as to make Mochou go crazy.
Yes, it has the flavor of old-school martial arts.
The writing is quite good, the protagonist has a good character, and he has not started a harem yet. He has also contacted Jin Yong's other works, please give it a try.
Good looking author, please give it a try
Very good looking very good looking
If you are short of books, you can read them. .
Good, good-looking, really good-looking~
Okay, quite interesting
It feels pretty good-looking
The character design of the protagonist is okay
Ok ok ok
It seems like something has changed, but nothing has changed. It feels like going through the plot all over again.
The overall rhythm is good Rating is low
It's okay, give it five stars.