With One More Commission, I Win.

Comment after seeing Chapter 100, Infinite Stream which has great potential? The overall setting can be regarded as a selection game in another world. The description of the main world and the hell world looks good so far, and the level and power system are also very clear. Although the first two missions I have written so far feel a bit like being hit by mistake and being taken away, I am still looking forward to the follow-up development. At present, it seems that extra tasks give some rewards beyond the current level. It would be great if the information on extra tasks could give the protagonist more advantages or explore more plots. Personally, I think there are many areas where the existing settings can be written in depth, whether it is about the extraordinary recovery of the main world or the deep secrets of the underworld, or there is a lot to be done with a bigger picture and some reversal of the entire background setting. Come on, author, please update quickly.

It's not toxic at the moment, the plot is fascinating, the twists are smooth, and the subject matter is novel. The author is a veteran at first glance. He writes people's emotions very carefully, and the most important thing is the details and action descriptions. He has a strong sense of space. The protagonist's IQ is online (there is a battle of wits but not boring). It is not a saint but also has emotions. It is very measured and the plot is not cliched. An example of the description in the article: His eyes were blazing, and he was about to take a step... But then he retracted his foot; the heel of his foot was always facing the door. I gave him four stars first, and one more star for subsequent performance and speed updates, which is not enough! ! !

At present, except for the beginning, which is a bit cliche, the rest of the content is considered high-quality or above on Tomato. The protagonist, Goldfinger, is not too cool and has his own thoughts. The only problem is the handling of the family members. Overall, it can be given 9.5 Points. The 5-star praise should give the author some motivation [laughing]

Overall OK The person who listened to the book wanted to complain a little bit, but in the end I forgot which one it was about. Nothing poisonous If we can continue to maintain this level The next score should be 80 or 90 points. It's just a bit short, I might consider writing a few thousand chapters. But don't use water, you can polish it slowly, please don't feed it. Write your own style, don't follow the popular clichés, I'm tired of them

When I saw the beginning of the second commission, I felt that it was okay. First of all, the progress of the plot was very slow, but it seemed to take off the second time (I saw him doing additional commissions). Secondly, I was not very satisfied with the character of the male protagonist, but given the background of the male protagonist, I can only say that I accept it. In addition, there is currently no female protagonist appearing

It currently has 130,000 words, which is almost non-toxic. The author has written new ideas for some classic old plots, which is eye-catching. I hope this book will get better results. At present, it has 270,000 words. The plot content is reasonable and the reading experience is not disappointing.

So far, it's okay, there's nothing serious about it. The protagonist is not the kind of person who slaps Long Aotian in the face. He's not invincible at the same level. He will be taken away when he encounters a krypton gold boss, and the hangup is not big. The reason why the protagonist is very smooth is because he met a good teammate, and the NPC only helps the protagonist out of respect for his thighs.

I have read 136 chapters so far. Overall it is okay. It has its own content and the plot is okay. I recommend reading it. Of course there are problems. AI is definitely used in it. Some of the content seems stiff. Then the writing style is a little immature. I like to touch my nose when describing expressions. It is considered excellent in Tomato.

It's quite good [face covering] but there is no traffic. I feel that the biggest shortcoming of this book so far is the low traffic and slow updates.

At present, there is no poison at all. In the early stage, the protagonist's image was obviously affected by the cheating and was simply flying. After entering the dungeon, the negative effects disappeared, and the protagonist lived like a god until he became the last player on the field. It looks pretty good so far. Recommendation index five stars☆☆☆☆☆

The setting is quite good, and the writing is very novel. I look forward to the update. I also hope that the protagonist can resolve family matters as soon as possible.

The author knows how to write [Like], I feel so tired and unhappy after reading this [Like]

It's not toxic at the moment, the world view is novel, and the plot advancement is okay (ignoring the slow updates). You can watch it.

There are some flaws, but overall it's good. Good luck to the author. The girl I contacted in the bank was also good. She really doesn't have anything to say about relationships. She threw herself into her arms until she found someone better than her boyfriend. She has her own principles in doing things. Her boyfriend is a trap. I don't know if the ending will be good or not. Will he return to the protagonist and train him to be his helper? There is also that guy named Wen who always causes trouble. I see that he is unhappy. Get him.

First give me a five-star review. Please update more often.

The writing is good. It can be seen that the author has ideas. The setting is very attractive and the plot avoids clichés. However, those who read this book should pay attention. This is not a good book. If you don't mind this, I still recommend it. It is a potential stock.

It's a very standard Tomato writing style. The shortcomings are all within the big system of Tomato cool writing routines and can be ignored. On the other hand, the author's design and creativity are very clear. The veteran author makes people feel at ease and updates quickly.

It's a good book, and there are books that can be read. Although I can always find books that I can read on Tomato, it is also very tiring. This book is actually written by the author of The Evil World of Five Turbidities. Not bad, not bad.

Yes, the system settings are relatively novel and attractive, and the plot is not bad. After the initial stage, when the combat power increases, the more you watch, the more addictive you become.

Not bad, quite interesting

It looks good but the name is not good. I suggest you change it.

The writing is very good, but is the task too difficult?

Great book, meow. Actually, I am a cat, meow. The cat said it looks good, meow. At this time, he caught up with the big group. Meow.

Let me give it 4 stars first. The key point is that apart from being a little slow to warm up, everything else is good. It's watchable. It's just that I discovered it too early, so it's not enough to watch.

So far, the writing is okay, not routine.

At present, it is about 8 points, grain and grass +, self-created path, Chinese sequence, the writing is OK, but the plot design can be more compact and tortuous, the upgrade can be slower, and the AI ​​flavor is not strong.

So far it's great, the description is okay, it's better than Tomato by many people, as long as you keep the rhythm and don't create poisonous points, this is the setting, it will definitely be good [eating melon]

The rating is not high, but I think it is better than some movies rated 9. If there are not too many emotional scenes added in the later stage, I think I can continue to follow it.

No major poisonous spots so far. The worldview and power system are also relatively reasonable and complete. I think the plot and the protagonist's combat capabilities are quite reasonable.

Yes, although it is a classic subject, it is well written and there is nothing poisonous about it.