I Hit the Jackpot with One Extra Commission

Comment after seeing Chapter 100, Infinite Stream which has great potential? The overall setting can be regarded as a selection game in another world. The description of the main world and the hell world looks good so far, and the level and power system are also very clear. Although the first two missions I have written so far feel a bit like being hit by mistake and being taken away, I am still looking forward to the follow-up development. At present, it seems that extra tasks give some rewards beyond the current level. It would be great if the information on extra tasks could give the protagonist more advantages or explore more plots. Personally, I think there are many areas where the existing settings can be written in depth, whether it is about the extraordinary recovery of the main world or the deep secrets of the underworld, or there is a lot to be done with a bigger picture and some reversal of the entire background setting. Come on, author, please update quickly.

The writing is good. It can be seen that the author has ideas. The setting is very attractive and the plot avoids clichés. However, those who read this book should pay attention. This is not a good book. If you don't mind this, I still recommend it. It is a potential stock.

It's not toxic at the moment, the plot is fascinating, the twists are smooth, and the subject matter is novel. The author is a veteran at first glance. He writes people's emotions very carefully, and the most important thing is the details and action descriptions. He has a strong sense of space. The protagonist's IQ is online (there is a battle of wits but not boring). It is not a saint but also has emotions. It is very measured and the plot is not cliched. An example of the description in the article: His eyes were blazing, and he was about to take a step... But then he retracted his foot; the heel of his foot was always facing the door. I gave him four stars first, and one more star for subsequent performance and speed updates, which is not enough!!!

Good book, the little invincible flow of mortals cultivating immortals is not the kind of direct takeoff, but a traceable left foot stepping on the right foot to start, making you invincible at the same level. Moreover, the setting is very interesting, the writing is also very strong, the protagonist Lao Yinbi is very enjoyable to watch, the plot is also strong and anti-routine, and I was blinded by many things. The shortcomings are obvious. In order to expand the world view and enhance the sense of immersion, there are many more supporting roles and explanations of skills and treasures. The biggest drawback is the small quantity. Two chapters a day, then this is a plot with a lot of words. 10 Chapters a day, that's perfection, a grand world view. Keep writing, author

At present, it can be regarded as a good two-world, unlimited-flow book. There are many kinds of abilities and paths, which are dizzying and traceable. The author's imagination has always been good in this aspect, and the plot is not sluggish. The golden finger is neither too big nor too small, and there will be no overpowering situation. It can be regarded as a type that serves the plot. I hope it can be stabilized in the future. Then the only thing that is criticized is the inexplicable original family of Pig's Foot. To be honest, apart from ruining the reader's perception, I can't think of any use for this kind of forcibly created conflict. Or is it just the author venting his own resentment towards his relatives?!

Overall, the writing is pretty good. If the author wants to write a long novel, this progress is good. The main reason is that the understanding of the world view and the cultivation system has been advanced too slowly. Of course, if you write a long novel, these are not problems. The character portrayal and plot creation are good, and there is no routine like that of ancient novels. The author's division of Dao Tu is not chaotic. He extends it based on these 10 root systems. No matter how many Dao Tu are involved, as long as they are related to these 10, they belong to which root system. From the perspective of an old reader like me, the author still has some traces of AI cleaning, especially in the early part. There are obvious traces of AI cleaning, but later on, these traces gradually weakened, but the overall plot of the novel is still very good.

Overall OK The person who listened to the book felt a bit like complaining, but ended up forgetting which one it was about. Nothing poisonous If we can continue to maintain this level The next score should be 80 or 90 points. It's just a bit short, I might consider writing a few thousand chapters. But don't use water, you can polish it slowly, please don't feed it. Write your own style, don't follow the popular clichés, I'm tired of them

It's quite good. I remember that when I read it, the rating was only 7.0. At that time, I felt that the rating of this book was definitely more than one. Now that the rating has finally come up, I feel that among the infinite books I have read, only Li Risheng can beat him. But some people say that there is a poisonous point. The first two times the protagonist was entrusted, he did not use his strength. He mainly judged the situation, but I think it is acceptable. It needs to be developed.

It's very interesting and has a sense of logic. It's similar to a dungeon but has its own characteristics. The protagonist can have one more hidden commission than others. The tasks are difficult and the rewards are high. The protagonist is weak in the early stage, but he grows up very quickly and can take charge of his own role. I recommend it and give it a good review (#^.^#)👍🏻

I have read 136 chapters so far. Overall it is okay. It has its own content and the plot is okay. I recommend reading it. Of course there are problems. AI is definitely used in it. Some of the content seems stiff. Then the writing style is a little immature. I like to touch my nose when describing expressions. It is considered excellent in Tomato.