The First Filial Daughter of Pirates

Overall it's well written There are a lot of typos and words with unclear meanings. It is recommended that you modify them. It affects the perception very much! Some can even guess what they want to express, and some can't even guess. The front is good-looking, the logic is rigorous, and the plot is compact! It doesn't work well in the back! Has AI replaced the brain? What kind of lift takes more than an hour to operate? Why, do you need to enter the secondary password first? ! Your elevator is more difficult to open than the door of justice in the Hall of Justice. It's just funny! So what's the point of the invasion and arson? Who was held back? Not a single one was held back!

Very good, I like it very much. It has a funny and passionate comic style. The plot arrangement is also very organized. The current three views are also very normal. It is an excellent work.

It looks good so far, and makes me want to read it. However, the combat power increases a bit quickly. I just went to sea and defeated the emperor's deputy. With the protagonist's talent, I hope the author can control the combat power well. Currently worth 5 stars [like]

It feels very good. I hope I can write it down.

Okay, okay, okay, I hope there will be Nami and Empress Robin

Will the protagonist eat devil fruits? What the protagonist lacks now is physical fitness. Let's get a fantasy beast or a thunder fruit. By the way, Kidd seems to be in Xihai, and the gangster seems to be there too. They both have pretty good fruit abilities, especially the magnetic fruit. I don't know if they ate the fruit during this period, but I feel like they can grab some. Kuina should probably be on board. After all, I can't think of a reason why she shouldn't be on board other than age.

When should I be more "filial"? I feel like the protagonist is still too gentle [laughter]

It's not enough, I want more [Adoration]

Because it's too short, I can't give a rating for the time being. It started well, and I saw the update deadline in one breath.

It's so beautiful and well written. I give it a 5-star rating. I highly recommend it [like] [like] [like] [like] [like]

It looks good, just don't stop updating it.

The author is finally back [crying][crying]

Very well written [Like] [Like] I hope it won't stop updating

Have your own plan, a true second-creation fan

I personally think it's quite good-looking, and it doesn't deviate from the original setting. Except for the protagonist as a variable, other characters don't appear OOC. The writing is also smooth and there are no bad sentences that affect the perception. It is very good.

It's okay, it feels good [laughs evilly]

It's pretty, I think

It's delicious, but it's a bit slow. Two or three chapters a day is almost one chapter a day, which is a bit less.

Please give me more! They can do anything [crying]

Please, can you update a few hundred chapters? They can do anything😭😭😭

So far, the author's handling has been pretty good. I have just gone overseas and there are hundreds of labels. I don't know who will be the first to enter the dunk space (

So far it doesn't look lazy, it looks good, and there's nothing poisonous about it, to me

It's well written and reads very smoothly, but the number of words is too small.

It's quite novel for me to start talking about Wano Country from Hiyori's point of view. The author's last book also caught up to the end. I hope you can write this one for a longer time.

Very good, the plot is very smooth

It looks great. I'm really looking forward to the follow-up development. However, there are too few updates and it's not enough. I hope it can be completed.

Not bad, I think it's watchable at the moment.

The writing is good, the plot is compact, and I have a strong desire to read it.

Not bad, support me

It's warm-blooded and looks very comfortable.