I Really Am Not Your Beloved White Moonlight

Let me talk about the conclusion first: it is very strategic and versatile, and overall it is a super cup. The first double "extremely strong" rating since the review, the advantage range of this article lies in: the author's strong rhythm control, and the very attractive protagonist setting lays a solid foundation. The emotional lines are silky smooth, the origin is reasonable and profound, and the combination of plot lines and emotional lines is deep enough, making the overall viewing experience very immersive. The writing is excellent, the style transitions smoothly, the insertion style is smooth, the details of the words and sentences are carefully considered, and there are many touching chapters. It is the most complete work that I have ever seen that interprets the theme of redemption first and then departure. Up to now, the update is stable and there is no disadvantage range! It is recommended for players who have high requirements for writing skills and high requirements for the delicacy of emotional lines.

Brother, just one more chapter. I'm dying. Please. Brother, just one more chapter. I'll never touch it again. Please. Brother, really, just one chapter. I swear I'll never touch this thing again. I really can't stand it anymore. Brother, I'm tossing and turning now. Brother, I'm begging you. Just one more chapter. Brother, please add one more chapter. I'm about to die. Please, brother. I feel like there are ants on me. Climbing, I feel like my whole body is shaking and I can't breathe. Please, bro, just update, just one more chapter. I won't touch it again. Please, bro, really, just one chapter. I swear I will never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore. I can't sleep now. I beg you, bro. Just one more chapter. I can't do it anymore. Please, bro, I can't stand it. I feel like there are ants crawling on my body. I really can't bear it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep. Brother, please update another chapter! ! ! !

It's very delicious, very delicious. Whether it's the extremely novel narrative angle and background (actually I have to say that Yashe has a little bit of a sense of déjà vu), or the past and present life of the protagonist and the children, it makes people very touching and expectant. The only uncomfortable thing is that it is still being serialized. I really want to... Arrest the author and torture him for 25 hours to keep writing... I will add another chapter. Please, I will do anything, oh the inner cover! ! Please update another chapter. Please, I will do anything, oh Naigai! ! Please update another chapter. Please, I will do anything, oh Naigai! ! [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

I like this kind of villainous protagonist who has everything under control. Surprisingly better than other similar novels (◦˙▽˙◦)

Some paragraphs are very well written, and Yanxing's writing and arrangement have improved significantly. It is still worth reading, so I will write the overall evaluation first to avoid talking about the shortcomings first, which will scare away some readers. By the way, I recommend that you start reading this book from the end of the story of Blazing Moon. Next is the detailed discussion. The first paragraph is relatively ordinary. The most important thing is that the time span is too short, half a year at full, and the description of the plot with time component is only one or two weeks. There is no representative summary of the daily time skipped in the middle. It feels like it is only a short period of time. How can Chiyue have such deep feelings, especially when she leaves the scene before she even starts, and she is still just out of the tower. Do you think this state will untie the knot of Long's heart? I don't think so. At the very least, she should be able to completely untie the knot in her heart through companionship after leaving, and then die before a good life comes, such as before ascending to the throne, before laying down the last city, which would complete the story line and deepen the pain. Moreover, it only takes more than two years of simulation time to add to this level. It will not affect the ending and rewards, but it can improve a lot of perception. The second story progressed significantly, extending the time, especially the time the two spent together. The two of them worked together for a transition to a future life (in order to cure Yu, the eldest lady was also growing up). In the end, it was reasonable for the two to worry about each other. Only then did they have the foundation of their relationship when they were in danger together. Finally, through separation, the relationship was sublimated and persisted for a hundred years. The writing style, emotional description, and detailed description have also improved a lot. If this book currently only has the second paragraph, I would give it five stars, which is good enough to write a short story on its own. At present, the author has not updated for two days. I think it may be the same as what was said above. The second paragraph is too complete. The most important thing is to make Yu and the eldest daughter recognize each other. How to unfold it next without affecting the previous shaping is difficult. Finally, I personally feel that I can add a second dream to Chi Yue. It is best to edit the first paragraph. It does not matter if the subject does not move, but it needs to add emotional description and time perception, because many people do not read book reviews and may give up after reading the beginning.

After nearly seventeen years, I would like to thank the author for allowing me to see and successfully experience the ancient fairy tale. I will remember "The Favor of the Sea" with four hours of tears. My personal empathy ability is very strong. I can rely on words to feel as if I have experienced it personally. Maybe it is because I had such a fondness for this article when I was a child. The paranoia of knowing similar fairy tales in advance makes me feel that some of the stories in this novel are very positive. As someone who has experienced the severe cold in the world, this kind of fairy tale can fill my inner trauma very well. It can be seen that the second story is already very complete. If the following story has a very different meaning from the first two stories, I still hope it will remind me that my appreciation of this book will end here, and I hope to say goodbye.

Author, I give you a limit of 10,000 words per day, otherwise I will notify my subordinates to hurt your scales. I am not bragging to you. I have more subordinates than you can count. There are 100,000 Belials, and 10,000 pregnant Godzillas. 1,000 Sun Wukong, 5,000 T7 thermal imaging, 3,000 Chengdu Superman, 500,000 Ultra Mothers, and a gang of 10 billion aliens, if you don't update your scales, they will all be injured by my own hands ヽ(#`Д´)ノ┌┛

Tasty! My evaluation is: ⚡️⚡️⚡️The Great Flame Tianshi Mansion is frightened and will continue to disturb us from now on⚡️😠⚡️Be careful and then think far away⚡️😡⚡️When there is a gap in the sword, there is a dark thunder⚡️⚡️⚡️This is unreasonable! ⚡️😠⚡️When you hear the rumbling thunder, where can you not hear it and where can it not come? ⚡️😡⚡️My experience is not over yet⚡️⚡️⚡️Thunder has broken through the clouds, and the road ahead is clear! ⚡️😠⚡️Use the sword as your command! ⚡️😡⚡️Shameless and incurable! ⚡️⚡️⚡️There is skill but no way, it is beyond foolishness! ⚡️😠⚡️A flash of lightning is about to break out! ⚡️😡⚡️Five thunders shake the evil spirit and break it! ⚡️⚡️⚡️Three elements return to the enemy, one sword penetrates the evil spirit, and a little heroic spirit attacks the evil spirits! ⚡️😠⚡️Slay demons and evildoers, and thunder will move the world! ⚡️😡⚡️The thunder is rolling, where do you want to run! ⚡️⚡️⚡️

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