Quick Transmigration: Bro, Why Do You Like My Wife?

There's no plot control, so it's quite enjoyable to watch. There are no NPCs who make mindless remarks and treat readers as fools. The heroine did not let anyone down. At the end, there will be a side story with each male protagonist. If Jiang Yuan wants it, she can get it. The female protagonist is a master of dog training and has a strong sense of deservingness. She stands behind and lets the male protagonists charge into battle for her. I quite like how the second world makes the heroine look like a saint. She has divine compassion but cannot be seen from a distance, and makes the heroine look like a sewer rat.

It's okay for killing time, right? But there are a few things that don't feel good (note: the following shortcomings are some flaws based on the fact that other places are pretty good) The development pace of the novel is too fast, and the plot is relatively shallow. It feels like the story has just developed 30%, and suddenly it is completely successful, and it is already about to enter the ending. This kind of thing makes it easy to get bored. Secondly, there is female competition in almost every world. The routine of each world is basically to punish vicious female supporting characters. However, these female supporting characters are very thin and are purely bad for the sake of being bad. Then, the background of the small world is also very thin. For example, in the second world, there is a lot of cooperation between companies. Basically, the differences in the top few are not too big, especially since these people are family friends. The fourth in the world is bowing to the world's number one, and the world's 2, 3, and 4 are doing everything possible to the world's number one. To please is really a bit..., And the professional stuff is just mentioned in one stroke. For example, when someone is exposed in a scandal, he loses power inexplicably afterwards, and the inheritance thing is also a piece of cake. Holding a press conference, my son has grown up, and my position has been handed over to him. It is completely unreasonable. But there are also several outstanding advantages: Basically, most of the male characters have very positive views on love, and their characters are quite good. Especially when the author writes about love, it is really sweet. I feel that when the author writes about love, both the writing style and the atmosphere creation have improved a lot. In short, although there are some logical problems, there are still some things worth mentioning. Then there are some suggestions. I feel that the author's writing style is quite good and does not hold back at all. The author's own three views on love can actually be vaguely seen from the male protagonist as quite upright, but I feel that it is still deeply affected by society. I hope that in the future, not only girls will be the main targets of revenge in missions, but also the vicious supporting roles caused by love and love. It is also recommended that each world should be as detailed as possible when writing the outline. Even if it may not be used in the article, filling in the world lines as much as possible will make the world background and characters more vivid. For example, when you want to bring down someone in the second world, what is the goal (such as occupying more shares in the company, having more say in the company, etc.), And what are the process methods (even with the help of the male protagonists, such as quietly collecting enough retail shares, and then persuading certain board members to buy shares for themselves, or supporting their decisions) I hope I can write better

Wow, this novel is so shocking and delicious. Why is it so beautiful? It's so good that I wish the author would give me 1,000 chapters immediately. Although it's a bit exaggerated, I really want to read it. How come it's so good! The author, oh my god, our heroine baby is really shocking. She has a cute and cute character with a little pride, but she really feels so charming. She is like a succubus. My God, the author, you are really good at writing. I It's really good. I really want to read it now. I really want to read it now. Oh, it's really really good. I rarely see more than 50 pictures. I've finished reading this book in one breath. It's really good. I can't wait to give me another 100 chapters right now. Oh. My god is really beautiful, the author is great

The only thing I feel is that the author is really the mother of the heroine. She cares about the heroine. It is very comfortable to watch. The hero will not pull the heroine down just because he likes her. The system also feels that the heroine should have everything. Some of the female and male supporting characters are really outstanding, especially the second world is so beautiful.

A little bit, elementary school student? The emotional scenes are relatively childish, and there's some pulling and pulling. It's okay if it's a mindless sweet story, but forget it if it's just for the green tea character.

I like the male protagonist He Huaichuan in the first world very much. I feel that he is really gentle and very good. I really hope that the female protagonist can be separated from the other two people and be with him after completing the mission. When I read the male protagonists in other fast-traveling novels, I will only remember what kind of personality and type they belong to. Only he makes me remember, To be honest, when He Huaichuan discovered that the heroine had another person, the man named Zhou sent her a message. I really wanted the heroine to put aside her tasks and spend some time with him. Of course, the other two men were also very good, but it was probably because the heroine fell in love with him first, or maybe it was because of He Huaichuan's thoughts on women. , Compared to the other two male protagonists, I hope that He Huaichuan can be better. If in other fast-traveling stories, it is said that the female protagonist will be put aside temporarily because a certain man is doing a task, I will be very angry and hate the female protagonist because the man is delaying me. I will think that the mission is more important, and the female protagonist does not come to this world to complete the task. Is it a mission to avenge the heroine? I mentioned before that the male protagonists in the small world only hate certain male protagonists because they think their personalities are not good, and are very disgusted with certain behaviors of the female protagonist, or they have a little liking for those male protagonists who are average and think it is okay. But I digress. Anyway, I think He Huaichuan is a very good person.

It looks great. The heroine's character is described very well. The characters are also very full-bodied. The plot is also very interesting. Overall, it is quite healing. I am a well-deserved heartthrob! The description is not very exaggerated. I think it is more attractive than his appearance and personality! This is so pretty! I particularly like the fact that the female protagonist is more powerful and dazzling than the male protagonists!

Good. The system doesn't have much presence but is completely geared towards the female protagonist. Jiang Yuan is good at acting and dressing up, but the male protagonists basically fall in love at first sight. It's quite sweet but a bit slow. There are too many chapters in one world and it's cumbersome and a bit tiring to read. Otherwise, it's okay. Just read it as a sweet article.

The heroine is very beautiful, her personality is a bit sultry, and a little more tactile would have made her perfect, almost too hot. Add more descriptions of the heroine's figure, especially in some plots [laughing] Finally, I want to see the entertainment industry, the heroine, the plane on the university campus, the school grassroots and the school bully, the flower of the high mountain.

The second small world is really shocking and delicious. All the people who block the heroine's way will be cleared away by the heroine's admirers without the heroine taking action. The last few words in the second small world are even more exciting. My scalp is numb. We don't want to... Block the way of President Jiang Yuan. Great, finally it's not like everyone dislikes the female protagonist, only the male protagonist likes the female protagonist