Fantasy Is Coming, Sharing a Hundredfold Increase at the Beginning

It's rare. Finally, I have someone with a normal atmosphere. This type of talent is most suitable for leaders or retired leaders, but it is really difficult to write, [blowing kiss]

It feels okay. It can be regarded as a relatively innovative survival novel. The main focus is on the golden finger of the protagonist. The increase can be selected at will, which gives a relatively large room for manipulation and highlights. Moreover, the author's arrangement of the plot is also quite good. From the initial arrival with nothing to the latest chapter, one step to immortality, interspersed with plots such as subduing subordinates, ruling the whole area behind the scenes, learning about the future, etc. It can be said that the early stage is quite interesting [eating melon] The protagonist is not brainless, and some of the operations are still eye-catching. In addition, he is stubborn but not cowardly (he has been in the safe house, and the only one who saw the protagonist's true face is a subordinate who signed the agreement, but the legend of the protagonist is everywhere), and the style of revenge on the spot is quite comfortable to watch [Chigua] As for AI, I personally think it's okay. Maybe I'm focusing on the plot and not paying too much attention to the writing style. However, the author also admits that it uses polish. This aspect depends on the individual.

It's beautiful, the theme and creativity are very new It started to get watery later.

It looks very comfortable, but it disappears in a blink of an eye. There are still few words, and the quality is not like that of a tomato. The numerical value is still not that clear and can basically be ignored, 🧡85+3🧡Perfect feeling (high-quality product), I personally like +3.

The plot and creativity are okay. I also quite like the development direction and way of doing things of the protagonist. This is the first time I have seen this kind of survival game that is not mainly about fighting and killing. However, it should be noted that the reward items are a bit messy and the setting feels a bit like a slap on the head. It feels that there is no very unified item setting. I don't have much feeling about the AI ​​problems they mentioned. After all, I read quickly and only focus on the plot, hahahahaha. Overall, it should have a score of 7.8-8. If the author grasps the rhythm better, polishes the promotion system and item system, and if there are no characters with copyright disputes, this book should have the opportunity to be adapted into a comic book drama. Now it depends on how you develop in the future. I don't feel that it is very popular or popular. It should be controversial and poisonous. At present, I see these few- First, some brothers don't understand why they don't have anything to eat and show their strength on the spot. I can understand this aspect. If it were me, I would still wait for the best. After all, it is safe. Second, there are three bad fairies at the beginning. It would be very dangerous if there are no newcomers to avoid harming the protagonist. I don't think this is right. After all, the protagonist is so lucky. However, judging from the author's previous books, the protagonist is either Xu Xian or Xu Xuan. I highly doubt that Li Huang is also the same person, so I will wait and see. The third one is the issue of AI polishing. In this case, I think the shortcomings outweigh the flaws. The author will pay attention to it later. After polishing the AI, he polishes it himself. Some brothers really don't like the writing style and look of AI. As for me, just don't feed me pure AI. It can be seen that this book has put a lot of thought into it. If the author wants to do better, he will have to review it more and don't let the tool belt go astray.

Overall it looks very good, but I suggest the author let AI polish it and then polish it again. Because the plot behind it seems to be getting more and more AI flavor, especially the expansion marks. I wonder if you have discovered that writing with AI, they especially like to use the expansion marks. For example, let me give you an example. Normal people would write like this: Because he is surfing the Internet more and more, Zhao Jianguo also understands how young people like to read, so he writes concise and clear descriptions with clear titles. Written by the author—— original text - original text - original text That's what it means. If you understand what I mean, just change it. If you don't want to understand what I mean, then there's no need to change it.

Why are there all book reviews and no paragraph reviews? I'm stuck in a tomato cocoon and you're not allowed to read it [crying][crying][crying]

It can be regarded as a breath of fresh air in the survival genre, and it can be regarded as a master who can help the world. Although there are some minor flaws, it is still good overall. It would be better if there were more updates.

It's very comfortable to read the latest chapter in one go. When it's time to be high-profile, just expose your cheats and take off with your left foot and right foot. It was low-key when it was time to keep a low profile and was cautious enough, never showing up in public from beginning to end. The background setting is also quite large, and the peak combat powers of various novels are vaguely visible. If the author has an outline and can keep writing at this pace, he should be able to get a score of 9.2 (I can't stand anything above 9.4 Or below 8.8🥲) I still don't know how many updates the author has made. It's quite fun to read them in a coherent manner at the moment, but it won't necessarily be true if I keep up with the updates. If the update volume is too low, it will be difficult to keep up.

I have a suggestion for the author. Isn't it fantasy? In other words, basically all novels, games, and anime have it. It would be good to create something like a collapsed civilization or something where the stronger the power, the stronger one is, and then the overall development will be good. In this way, the protagonist's strength will always be the strongest, and then some sexual skills and the like can be incarnated to be tested in the world of mortals, or the opportunity of reincarnation can also greatly improve the mind.

This is how cool articles should be written! Let the hanging be more intense! [Laughs] Sometimes it's a group portrait, but the description is pretty good [Like]

[Chapter 71] The overall style is: straightforward and joyful, a hundred times the favorability guarantees immortality at the same level, the gods fight with all things as the background of the chess pieces. However, due to the different opinions of the high-level officials of the same camp, the sense of manipulation of the chess pieces is not obvious.

There is an obvious AI smell, but it's not overpowering. It's okay and can be seen.

No need to say, it is indeed possible

A very nice book. Highly recommended. Highly recommended.

Come on, author, it's quite good. It's different from the common survival in all worlds. It has created a new way. Chapter 58 is the turning point of World War II. I enjoyed reading it. Go ahead [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]

The writing style is very familiar. Is he an old author who came from Qidian? I have written a similar book, and the organizer of the competition in it is called Ledall Entertainment Company or something like that.

The premise that the protagonist can continue to play this game is that his freedom will always be controlled by himself, and he will never be caught and controlled by others. After all, if you control the protagonist, you will control countless materials and wealth, and you can even control the world. After all, there will never be a shortage of careerists in this world who like to exploit others.

It's okay to read Chapter 60,

Good-looking, good-looking, good, good

The package looks good, looks good

Very good, cheers for the author⛽

No hair, keep up the good work

People who are not like tomatoes have no shortcomings except that they have few words.

Slow to suit your appetite, update soon!

The author is very good. He insists on hand-picking and good advice.

A good book worth reading,

It's pretty good, please give the author more updates.

Absolutely a great book, thank you to the author!

The author's plug-in setting is a bit old-fashioned, but the usage is very novel. After such a long time of laying the groundwork, everything has been done with the left foot and the right foot. The update speed is very slow.