A Swordmaster’s Days at School

The daily interactions are good. The protagonist has his own life and does not keep writing the same plot as other novels. The content is interesting and interesting. Writing a novel means that you can't live without it, even if it is a bad life. The protagonist starts to show his expertise in solving survival problems. For example, forming a band and being a copycat are good plot routes, which can not only protect his own survival but also enrich the content and interaction. The author controls his emotions very well. The protagonist has her own principles and morals, but I still recommend that the female protagonist not accept too much. No more than 3-5 would be good, because relationships need to be cultivated, and interactions can be slowly improved to give the character a soul. Too many emotional scenes assigned to the heroine will be difficult to write. Every time I see multiple heroines in the harem, it is a brainless stallion story, and there is no emotional basis for who to fall in love with. In the end, the front heroine will be forgotten in order to write the scenes of the new heroine. Some viewers watch multiple heroines to relax by watching daily love posts, interactive Shura fields, and to add rich plot content and reasonable content [sneaky laugh]

The writing is quite good, and the characters are well drawn, especially the protagonist. I just feel that the plot of the story may be very small, because the pace is very slow, and I basically spend one day at a time. If there is only a day in school plot, the story of this novel is not long. It would be nice if the author had plans to expand the world, either through stitching or writing the story after the plot, but this will have to be considered after the campus plot is finished. The suggestion is to expand the world. There are some stories with similar worldviews that should be able to be seamlessly stitched together after magic modification. Another key point is that the author should have prepared a story of pure love at the beginning, but then he found that if he wanted to completely change the story line, other heroines could not be arranged at all, and it gradually turned into a story with multiple heroines. This will definitely turn off a group of readers, but this kind of plot cannot be said to be a problem. I just hope that the ending can be arranged better.

As this is my first time writing a book, the author's writing style is indeed very good. I hope that the following chapters will show the male protagonist from being unfettered to the world to being attracted to the characters of multiple female protagonists (Konoha, World, Setsuna, etc.) In the later period, and slowly forming bonds. His mentality has also changed from pure love to being unable to let go (inner struggle to slowly recognizing his heart). In addition, he has an inner monologue. He has traveled through time and is very powerful. If he does not open a harem, time travel will not be in vain. I hope the author can maintain his status and don't update constantly, and the results will definitely not be bad.

Good-looking, very good-looking. ❶The male protagonist COS Rurouni Kenshin ended up traveling to Japan on campus, and the COS came true. He has extraordinary qualities and kendo skills, red hair, and is only 158cm tall now, but because he is a freshman in high school, he will definitely grow taller, right? And she is a pure love warrior who insists on being in love and rushing to get married. She is very upright, and she is also very optimistic, cheerful, and interesting. ❷Now the male protagonist, because he was helped by Gui Yanye at the beginning, so he wants to change her destiny. Now it is in progress. The male protagonist has no intention of falling in love. [Note][Note][Note] The heroine's words: The hero is Gui Yanye's first friend, and he is so cheerful, lively and gentle. Gui Yanye already likes the hero 💕 💕 💕; Saionji World also fell in love with the male protagonist because of his "rooftop pure love concept speech" and his heart-to-heart talks with his mother about his family's past; As for other female supporting characters, they also have a lot of roles, such as Setsuna Kiyura (thought Saionji still likes Brother Cheng, so she planned to help Gui Yanye get the male lead and make Brother Cheng sad, so that Saionji would take advantage of the opportunity, but it was not the case), Nanami Kanroji (had a bit of a role. Although she had a boyfriend, she didn't have any close interaction with her boyfriend. She found that love was not what she thought. She questioned herself. She was sincerely praised by the male protagonist. She should also have some feelings for the male protagonist now) ❸Brother Cheng is just on the side of the road now. He looks like a tortoise and is timid. ❹The male protagonist only has a student ID card and a bad gym, and his source of income depends on working in women's clothing in Xiyuanji's mother's shop (I personally can accept it, the second dimension, the COS circle, and the author's writing is really beautiful and full of flavor), so he wants to make money by writing a novel with Gui Yanye (Gui Yanye likes literature, and the male protagonist's novel is based on Re+Gu), and the time now is the school festival. To sum up [Note] [Note] [Note], it is really beautiful. The author also attached pictures (comment area). Everyone's emotional and psychological changes are written out, and there is no OOC. I look forward to the follow-up. The weekend weekend I have finished writing now (four people watch a movie → multiple people eat → beach fireworks → take pictures) is written very smoothly. I hope the quality will be maintained in the follow-up. I have only seen the clips of Japan on campus, so it is very interesting to watch.

I like this work very much. It is considered the best of the same type that I have seen this year. The overall rhythm and writing style are very comfortable, and the interaction of the characters is also well grasped. I personally like the creation of the protagonist. The other characters are also described with flesh and blood, and some parts can also be seen that the author has carefully researched it. The daily life is very good, but I can't tell that the author used to write in that style. I still hope to be more pure love. The rhythm now is very good. According to the next rhythm, it will probably be the same as Setsuna. (I still hope it won't have the kind of divine performance and final ending that happened in the original work.) I like the author's attitude towards women. The descriptions and interactions of the characters' words, deeds, and other behaviors are very interesting. Although the author's immaturity can be seen in some places, the wonderful parts are really beautiful. It should be said that some similar situations just inspired me. I hope the quality can be maintained. Come on, the author [ask for more updates] [please update] [add one to the bookshelf] Come on, come on, I hope you can land safely. As for multiple female protagonists, I personally feel that the current rhythm is good. I hope that the protagonist can continue to maintain the same style and not be subjective, otherwise the portrayal will feel a bit contrary to the previous one. The one-sided gravity scene is unexpectedly sweet. I hope you won't run out of talents later, keep up the good work [I also strongly recommend]

The plot is innovative and interesting, worth reading. The only negative point in the reviews is being a tomboy. But this book is just a lack of money, so dressing up as a woman as a waiter and not having a bad fall is nothing. The only thing that bothers me is probably the protagonist's single-minded declaration. It says that one person will live forever, but the introduction seems to have multiple women. It depends on the author's roundness.

I've finished reading it now, reaching chapter 35. I think it's pretty good, but I have a question, is this a harem or a single heroine? It's very satisfying to torture Brother Chen right now, but when the time comes that I can't see myself openly, I'll feel very screwed 🤦

This is a very good book in the comic book world, especially as a Virgo. It is very emotional and can make people come here to seek solace after reading the original work. While perfectly adapting School Days, the added Kenshin elements are not obtrusive and also have characteristics. It is a very good comic book, highly recommended!!! The only problem is that I hope there will be only one female protagonist, Yan Ye. After all, Yozao's pure love character and the story line with Yan Ye are obviously more and more in the same frequency. At the same time, I like Yan Ye very much after watching Shool Days and feel sorry for her. I hope it can make up for the regrets of the original work 🥺

I am very interested in Japanese urban swordsman novels because I teach swordsmanship in Tokyo, but this is not what I thought. Starting from chapter 12, the male protagonist supports himself by dressing up as a waiter. In chapter 47, he becomes extremely disgusted with himself because two women put their arms around him while watching a movie. There is no trace of a time traveler in his behavior and psychology. A higher moral bottom line than the aborigines. Look at the novelty

I will publish the most honest and objective, most descriptive, most clearly structured, and most informative book reviews This book is good and deserves five stars, but the update is too slow. He even stopped reading one day. It feels like tomorrow someone will suddenly tell me that the author has run out of inspiration to write a novel and will kill the novel in one fell swoop. I won't be surprised.