I, Jizhou Shepherd, Will Help the Big Man Again

It's okay. Anyway, now that I've read Chapter 5, I think the writing in Chapter 5 is okay. The routine is very cliche, but at least it's very smooth to read. It shouldn't be that kind of AI writing, it should be purely hand-written. I'll look at it later and see how many stars I can give it. I'll give you an evaluation after reading it.

There is nothing wrong with the logic of the book. I think it is quite reasonable. I have been following it since chapter 13, but it only lasts two chapters a day. When can I update more? It is so slow that I have forgotten about it. I don't know why I can't reply to you, but 1. The system of filial piety and integrity usually does not appear in meritorious generals. Do you understand if you don't obey the system of etiquette? 2. I don't want to talk about 3 you said. You didn't read the author's explanation of the process at the end. He was promoted to general through the merits of pacifying the border, bribing Xiyuan, bribing the ten permanent servants, bribing He Jin, and finally pacifying the Yellow Turban. You didn't read the bribes to Lingdi Xiyuan one by one. You didn't see these interpersonal relationships at all. Also, the position of governor is not limited to civilian officials. Does Tao Qian know him? What about Zhang Huan if you don't know him? Where is Gongsun Zan? When will you become wise? When reading a novel, you have to care about it but don't know how to pretend to understand. Also mention Xiaolian, people make comments without even looking at the author's content, that's you people

I think the process and origins explained by the author are clear, and the logic is at least clear. There are no problems that I can see at the moment. Of course, this is my opinion. I will comment on any problems later.

It's pretty good, but it's a pity it's discontinued.