
Naruto: Critical Hits from Word Tags, Guaranteed the Mangekyo from the Start
火影:词条暴击,开局保送万花筒
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 314k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 28d ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
151Chapters
1.4kReads
139Shelves
343Listens
41.7kReads · all time
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Reader comments 5
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It's not bad. It's best to keep the harem around three people. I feel like it's just right or too little. If there are more, it will feel like a stallion. There are also civilian ninjas. It's not like there are no powerful ninjas. Logically speaking, it is impossible for a big family in Konoha to have a bad attitude towards talented people. After all, the first two are Jiraiya and Minato. Even Hatake Sakumo and Kakashi can be regarded as civilian ninjas. After all, there are only two of them appearing from beginning to end. There is no such thing as a family.
The helix wheel Yu with numb face is handsome, right?
Although there are some minor flaws, overall it looks very good, especially the emotional scenes, which are well described. I hope the author can work hard to update them so that they don't end up unfinished.
It's a little bit toxic, but it doesn't have much impact. The key is that it feels good.
Please give me a five-star support first!