Deadly Appointment: Start by Telling Zhenzhen a Story

The writing is very good, but the number of words is too few. In addition, I don't know how the author will solve the problem of the first reboot. Personally, I think it's best not to restart, but if I don't restart, the connection between the first and second parts will not be easy to write. For a reboot, many people write it according to the reboot, but after the reboot, only the protagonist knows what happened before the reboot. It feels like it was written in vain before, and there is no change at all. Personally, I feel that if it is rebooted, it would be better to either let Ma Xiaoling and Wang Zhenzhen carry the memories before the reboot, or bring the Ma Xiaoling and Wang Zhenzhen before the reboot and integrate them after the reboot. The second best is the two Ma Xiaoling and Wang Zhenzhen. What happened before the restart can be hidden behind the scenes after the restart. Of course, everything depends on how the author writes it, but at least so far it seems to be pretty good.

Saving Miyuki Nakayama was the first regret to make up for. Later, catching Uiharu turned into catching a bunch of ghosts. It changed the plot a bit. The writing is okay. I look forward to the follow-up. It's pretty good on a daily basis, and it's quite fun to watch. It's more realistic than those other fandoms with outrageous bloodline settings, and it's not embarrassing to watch. Come on, author.

This is the most beautiful fanfic I have ever read. I never comment on the novel. This is the first time. Thank you to the author.