Hogg*************

It's a very interesting novel. I was worried that it would be so strong since I entered school, and I was afraid that it would be another nanny novel. For now, it seems to be about Lezi people pursuing the mysteries of magic. The character is more power-oriented, and it is used for exploration. It is very interesting. I have Harry Potter groups on my bookshelf, and various types of fan fiction. There are all of them. It is rare to see good-looking writing in this kind of magic pill type. Some of them are slowly improved through the system, and they still pass the main plot of the original novel. This one is quite interesting. It starts with Quirrell with the Cruciatus Curse and the robbery of Gringotts. It is a bit unscrupulous but not too excessive. The writing rhythm is very well controlled so far.

So far, it looks really good. At first, I thought making Horcruxes was a poisonous point, but the author bridged the gap very well. Similar to the dual protagonists, it added fun and safety endorsement. At the beginning, I was really surprised by the direct attack on Diagon Alley. It was also quite interesting on the way to school. Delicious. The author keeps updating and quality. It is a masterpiece.

In my opinion, this book is still very good. Give it a good review and support it However, the author would like you to write the name of the protagonist correctly and correct the previous name errors. Finally, please tell me about the love direction of Narcissus between the two protagonists. I also wish the author will get better and better no matter what.

I think the bad reviews are all about the clones, but yes, these clones are twins of destiny. Their fates are tied together and their interests are the same. It is impossible for one to cheat the other. Their minds are connected and cannot be hidden. Their thoughts are basically the same, just one is kind and the other is evil. As for the plot, the beginning is different. After entering school, it becomes a little more normal, but it also has its own characteristics.

It was very enjoyable to write. I went to grab Gringotts at the beginning, and at the end of the line I hit Quirrell who was possessed by Voldemort (Crucia Crusader). Make a fortune by robbing the pureblood family's treasury, including the Philosopher's Stone in your hands. The God of Time Travel did not treat the protagonist badly. There are HPs in magic books that are not found in the world. I feel so good that I didn't lick Hermione or another woman. I think this is good. Even if I play Narcissus (Jason), I won't be at a disadvantage. Jason's appearance is not ugly. The plot is progressing well now. But I think the only thing that I personally think needs to be discussed is point 1. The protagonist and his doppelgänger Jason work together to push the Hogwarts train forward rapidly. Point 2: Originally, the protagonist on the boat was very flamboyant and turned into a sword to go to the dock. In full view of the public, weren't you afraid that the professors would doubt you? The third point is that during the sorting, the sorting hat was suddenly cleaned, including transforming into a sofa. Then web games, web games are okay, but I think these points can be discussed. However, I, an ordinary person, feel that you, a little wizard, have such great magic power. No one in this HP world is a fool.

It's okay, brother, it's really cool to have so many explosive points at the beginning. There are some small flaws, but the flaws can't be concealed. Overall, as long as you ignore some of the protagonist's gallant behavior, it's still very good to watch.

So far, it seems that the author has written seriously. Very cool, very funny. According to the current plot setting, the follow-up should also be a rule breaker, funny, and very enjoyable.

It's beautiful and the subject matter is very novel (*^ω^*)

Give me a five-star support

Chapter 24: The clone is indeed poisonous, but the front is actually pretty Both the front and back are good, but the latter brings Chapter 24 back a bit.

This book is the most perfect one I have ever read in Harry Potter. The plot has ups and downs, and there is not a long and irrelevant daily routine. This is such a great book.

The author writes people in a very three-dimensional and beautiful way

It's so pretty, so cool! The overall content is lively and interesting, the language is fluent, and the author updates it daily!

Very pure evil, perfect score Personally, I think you can jump directly to Chapter 135 after you are optimistic about Chapter 55. [Smile]

It's beautiful. It's really beautiful.

Interesting novel

How many stars are there in the sky and how many girls are there in the world. . . But there is only one moon in the sky, and there is only one you in the world. . . . The last one is for you, I hope you are happy. . .

Has the protagonist's doppelganger changed his name? Jason in the front becomes Jamie, does it turn into Jerry in the back? [What]

Not bad, the main character is great👍

It looks great, and apart from being a little high-profile, there really aren't any flaws. Finally, can the author do some narcissus? Narcissus is really delicious [lick screen] ? ? ? Why change the name of another protagonist? Why? Why?