Transmigrated as a Fierce General of Xiliang, Recruiting Pang De and Jia Xu from the Start

Two stars for the subject matter. Xiliang's background is very good. One star for the team. I think the generals and counselors are good. However, the two stars are deducted because the plot is not smooth and the ia is too strong. You should change it. This Xiliang nine and ten guards have people in front and behind. The officers are all different. I don't know where you got Li Jue and Zhang Ji, and I don't know that Ma Chao of yours can surrender twice. The good commander of the first guard has become Ma Teng's deputy commander. Even if it's an AI article, it's okay to read it, revise it, and have some snacks.

It was quite enjoyable to read at first, but in Chapter 84, "His subordinate Ju Shou said: "My lord, Dong Zhuo is cruel, and the whole world will attack him. Yuan Benchu ​​was an unparalleled hero. He raised his arms and called for help, and many people responded. Jizhou is the granary of the world, with abundant money and grain, so we should send troops to respond and support the Han Dynasty. ""Isn't Jushou under the command of the protagonist? Why is he here with Han Fu?

Chapter 9: I was directly persuaded to leave Dongchangwen Ha tui Say goodbye

If the protagonist's loot does not automatically multiply a thousand times, it will not be enough to reward him.

AI writing, and the author is not very good at using it, and the writing feels fragmented

The writing is good, but the writing is off track, or the splicing is not well connected.

They are colluding again. Isn't Cao Cao awesome?

What's wrong with killing Han Sui before and then resurrecting Han Sui to rebel after going to Chang'an?

You started in Xiliang, and later you wanted to conquer Xiliang, and the Eastern Han Dynasty and Xiliang?

Here, Ma Chao and Ma Teng are written as passers-by, and Ma Chao is asked to chase Ma Teng. It is a bloody novel.