Traveling Through Youth Pi, It's Not Like You're Wearing It Too Early!

The love line is too early. Secondly, I personally think this setting is a bit poisonous. I don't think it is necessary to write about the setting of time travel for the protagonist. The feeling when writing now is that the protagonist is incompatible with this world. It can be seen that you want to write the love line between the protagonist and Lin Miaomiao earlier. However, I personally feel that it is too early and conflicting and unnatural. If the love line is not written so early, it will be much better to write about daily life and slowly go to an elite middle school. Besides, how far ahead is the protagonist compared to Qian Sanyi? We have known each other since junior high school, so there is no need to write it like this. Secondly, I feel that it is not necessary to write about the interference of the main character's mother. It can be written about the parents teasing their son. After all, no one came here at that time, but everyone knows that the parents are joking. However, I feel that it is a bit too interfering to directly write about not liking Lin Miaomiao in that paragraph. . . . . .

I just went with the flow and hung out in school

Wonderful, wonderful, very wonderful, just like instant noodles poured on asphalt pavement, looking at a pot of things, but actually there is nowhere to eat. Absolute, truly amazing, simply amazing, like milk tea mixed with cement mortar, the taste is fragmented and the more you taste it, the more uncomfortable it becomes.

Very sweet, very sweet.

Not an assembly line

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