[Double heroines]+[Chongbai]+[Japanese-style campus]+[Relaxed and funny]+[Sweet text]+[First person]
I, Su Li.
When I transferred to Japan, I thought I would become a lonely transfer student.
But, I got to know them.
"Xiao Li, can I... Hold your hand?"
"Little Li Xiaoli! Look at this pillow, it looks like you!"
"Su Li, thank you."
...
Most importantly, I got to know her.
Asaha Shaxue.
She seemed cold on the surface, but she was unexpectedly warm to me.
I completed the light novel that I entered into the competition with her, won awards with her, and went on trips with her.
Finally, on that snowy night,
I finally heard that sentence.
That sentence has been hidden in my heart for a long time.
...
"Hey Shaxue, the tip of her nose is so red, like a porcelain doll."
"Stupid... Stupid little carp..."
Reader comments
Please give me your advice as a newbie.
Although it has just begun, the setting of the book has already deeply attracted me. The narration is based on the transfer student Su Li, whose relaxed daily life dilutes the blandness of the campus novel. The contrast between the character of a double academic master and the setting of a cool literary girl is full of contrast. The current update is not long, but the characters are very lovable. The interactions between the protagonists are delicate and gentle, and the rhythm of getting along is just right. There are no bloody conflicts. It is a light campus story that is full of healing. I look forward to the follow-up plot. And with the first-person narration, readers can directly feel the transfer students' awkwardness and curiosity when they first arrive, as well as the uncontrollable heartbeat when facing the cold girl. The description of psychological activities is delicate, the small thoughts, casual glances, and small interactions are all amplified, the green and sweet feeling is naturally revealed, and the tone of the story is clean and healing. The work follows a purely campus light and sweet approach, and the Japanese-style campus scenes are described with a strong sense of atmosphere. In this harem, where industrial saccharine is flying around, it is rare to find such a slow-paced and lighthearted book like porridge simmered over a low fire. In addition, the author's writing style is like writing poetry, which can be seen from the title and between the lines. Although the story has not yet fully unfolded, I believe that the subsequent plot will definitely not disappoint. There is a high probability that this book will have more than one story line. If I am not wrong, I hope the author can keep a slow pace and write down the emotions and personalities of the characters clearly. It can be diverse but not complicated. All in all, I am still looking forward to the subsequent development of the plot! Come on, author! ! ! !
I like it so much! Xiaoli in the early days of school is a little different from the Xiaoli that everyone has become familiar with. You will know it when you see the campus festival, not much else to say. Xiao Li is very considerate and likes getting along with everyone.
Slowly Shaxue became different in front of Xiaoli! It can be seen from the small details that there are stories of other protagonists in it!
The writing is good, and the character creation and plot control are also good. It is strange that there is a gap between the two at the end of Volume Zero.
Please give me your advice as a newbie.
Although it has just begun, the setting of the book has already deeply attracted me. The narration is based on the transfer student Su Li, whose relaxed daily life dilutes the blandness of the campus novel. The contrast between the character of a double academic master and the setting of a cool literary girl is full of contrast. The current update is not long, but the characters are very lovable. The interactions between the protagonists are delicate and gentle, and the rhythm of getting along is just right. There are no bloody conflicts. It is a light campus story that is full of healing. I look forward to the follow-up plot. And with the first-person narration, readers can directly feel the transfer students' awkwardness and curiosity when they first arrive, as well as the uncontrollable heartbeat when facing the cold girl. The description of psychological activities is delicate, the small thoughts, casual glances, and small interactions are all amplified, the green and sweet feeling is naturally revealed, and the tone of the story is clean and healing. The work follows a purely campus light and sweet approach, and the Japanese-style campus scenes are described with a strong sense of atmosphere. In this harem, where industrial saccharine is flying around, it is rare to find such a slow-paced and lighthearted book like porridge simmered over a low fire. In addition, the author's writing style is like writing poetry, which can be seen from the title and between the lines. Although the story has not yet fully unfolded, I believe that the subsequent plot will definitely not disappoint. There is a high probability that this book will have more than one story line. If I am not wrong, I hope the author can keep a slow pace and write down the emotions and personalities of the characters clearly. It can be diverse but not complicated. All in all, I am still looking forward to the subsequent development of the plot! Come on, author! ! ! !
I like it so much! Xiaoli in the early days of school is a little different from the Xiaoli that everyone has become familiar with. You will know it when you see the campus festival, not much else to say. Xiao Li is very considerate and likes getting along with everyone. Slowly Shaxue became different in front of Xiaoli! It can be seen from the small details that there are stories of other protagonists in it!
The writing is good, and the character creation and plot control are also good. It is strange that there is a gap between the two at the end of Volume Zero.