The Son of Villain, Master and Senior Sister Are Reborn

It's a female channel that you can watch, it feels like a sex change, and it feels okay. The logic is there. It's a rebirth story of a group of handsome guys and beauties who have no desires, and a big enemy who only knows how to give. There are no conflicts and no explosive points. The emotions are delicate, and everyone has no lust (at least not yet). Two words: light.

As of Chapter 100, my personal feeling is just like what a book friend in the comment section said: It's light, without the big ups and downs or big action scenes like traditional male fantasy. The protagonist is almost at the starting point and develops steadily throughout the whole process. The relationship aspect is quite middle-level, and there are some "love to hear and see" links, like normal masters and apprentices, siblings, and even It's probably a relationship between mother and son. The settings for cultivating immortals are quite interesting, like Duan Xuanjin, Zhanchen Jin, etc. I don't know how the protagonist loses at the moment. Duan Xuanjin and Zhanchen Jinyin are terrible. In short, I don't have any personal feelings or big poisonous points. I can watch it (personal feeling, for reference only. I am right for you without thinking, mainly because I don't have time to face you) By the way, I hope there will be more plots about Hakisu in the future. As the first heroine to appear in the whole novel, she is still practicing swordsmanship after 100 chapters, treating children like fools.

Overall it's okay, but it's not like a villain story. And what does it mean to let the protagonist and the heroine have contact [face covering]

The first few chapters are still more emotional, but I feel they are well written. I haven't updated the later chapters yet. There are no obvious bad points. I hope this book will get better and better. The last time I followed such a new book was The Age of the Machine Girl, which was blocked. This time, I feel that this book has great potential. In fact, this book is not very heavy on villains. In the first few dozen chapters, there is no intersection or conflict with the senior brother (the fake protagonist). The protagonist has always developed his own and cultivated emotional lines. If the follow-up develops like this, I feel that the author can change the introduction [face covering] (Lu Guiyun realized on the spot. Since sooner or later you will be slapped in the face by the protagonist, then why bother trying? Therefore, he, who was crazy and involved in the past life, decided to give up the struggle and enjoy life. ) I feel that this introduction can be changed. The protagonist is obviously not lying flat, but he is less interested in seeking the truth than in his previous life, and he is not afraid of the so-called protagonists. The original introduction looks a bit awkward with the main text.

I feel like it's an AI text, One reason is the unclear meaning of paragraphs. Many words actually do not need to be divided into two paragraphs, but articles output by AI just like to be divided into paragraphs. Moreover, AI itself likes to segment questions when answering questions, and each paragraph is a point of view. In this article, each paragraph is a small piece of content. I found that removing a few paragraphs does not affect reading at all. Another reason is that the dialogues between the characters are easy to alternate, and there is no such thing as who is talking in the middle, and a sentence must be divided into two paragraphs. Normal human writers will not write a sentence in two quotation marks. Another reason is some minor details, such as the shuriken that is light in hand but heavy in the heart, and the small parallel sentences when comparing previous and previous lives. And the whole article is very light and has a very profound feeling, because the things answered by the AI ​​have no emotion. The characters haven't changed much either. In short, this article is very much like it was written directly by AI. Some small places may have been changed, but generally not much has been changed. It is recommended that the author feed the AI ​​a few books so that it can learn how humans write novels. Or add some prompt words and ask him to rewrite each chapter that comes out. At least don't look like an AI at first glance

It's rammed and bursting, unlike Tomato's works. Not brainless, logical, and meat-eating, the first one to eat in Chapter 32. The writing style is like a light novel, mixed with daily plots, interactions between male and female protagonists, etc. It feels pretty good. The main plot is enjoyable, but there are too few now, and many plots are not fully laid out. But if the author can maintain this level, this book can definitely be a male-friendly novel with a score of 9 or above. Women's writing is cool, men's writing is cool. It's fast to eat, no stains, and it's a good tomato. To be honest, the score was too low after six o'clock, and I suspected that I was being cheated [eating melon]

Very good. The writing style may make the impression a bit bland, but the sweetness should be sweet and the fighting should be fought. The logic is reasonable. The mentality of the protagonist does have the feeling of reaching the peak. The most important thing is that they are basically normal people. There is no bloody betrayal or brainless supporting characters. This is already better than 90% of the cool articles. In addition, I hope that I won't write the senior brother badly in the future. In the last life, there was no one who was right and who was wrong. There shouldn't be any inexplicable harshness. In this life, when you wake up, you can just fight for the road ahead.

So far, it's pretty good. It's the type I like. Everyone speaks like gold.

After reading the comment area, many people said something about AI writing. I can only say that AI is a good thing and you need to use it well. I have read less than a hundred chapters of the novel, and there are no problems with logic or characters. These are not things that AI can output. As long as there is an outline and the character module can grasp the direction of the plot, AI is really a very good tool. The output content can be published as long as it is modified. No need to spend energy on coming up with words, put most of your energy on building the outline and characters. I would give Tomato's novel environment an 8 points, and the normal novel text a 6 points. Tomato really says that the ratings are true and have no reference value. The shortcoming of this novel is that it is too flat. This is not caused by AI, but the author's writing style. But the advantage is also because it is too flat, and flat means plain. It's a bit like being used to eating mountain delicacies and wanting to eat some home-cooked food.

It's not bad, it's not soul-traveling, and it's not as cowardly to the protagonist as the cliche villain stories, so I'll give it five stars. It is still a bit of a surprise. There is a son of luck in the imperial capital who has many children and many blessings. In addition, the setting of the past life is not detailed in the article. It is a surprise that there is no detailed explanation of how far this son of luck has developed in the harem in the past life.

It has a bit of AI flavor, and the ideas are good, which can arouse people's interest. The writing style is a little dull, but the logic is still online. Personally, I feel that it is just food, but I hope that the freshness of the ideas can be maintained after it wears off. Judging from the current progress, it is still very good.

The writing style and content are both good. The score is at least 8 points. You can understand everything you know. There are no poisonous points and it is not as impetuous as a novice. It makes people feel comfortable after reading it. It has a relatively slow pace and pays attention to the details of life. Recommended for book lovers and those who like sweet stories. The main point of cultivating immortality is that the background does not occupy the main body.

I read the first few chapters. The subject matter is novel and there is no big hatred. After the male protagonist is reborn, he wants to slow down his practice and spend more time with the people around him, instead of focusing on his practice to seize the opportunities of his previous life. There is no intrigue, everyone has an above-average IQ, there is no pure villain, there is no righteous person who talks about righteousness, there is just a warm home (except for the senior brother), which gives me a feeling of reading like a pure pond growing immortal lotus. Come on, the author. [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Like posts]

The emotional line is good, and there is nothing wrong with it except that it feels a bit too fast for me personally. The main plot rhythm is okay. The number of female protagonists is up to the author. Don't do that kind of bad job of not appearing much in the early stage and then finding out that this person is missing in the later stage.

It's okay, but the plot is too slow

His writing style doesn't look like a newbie, it feels like he is the reincarnation of another website guru. The diction and sentences feel a bit literary and youthful, and the author must not be very young. So far, it seems that the writing and conception are quite smooth. It should be a female author. The driving speed is also very fast, and I personally like the invincible flow. All in all five stars for encouragement.

It's very nice to watch. So far, except for Shen Shuyun's possibly toxic points (because the author hasn't updated the details yet, but it's unlikely based on the author's style), it's very comfortable to watch. Does Shen Shuyun have to give birth to the child conceived by the royal secret method? If so, I feel that Xu Yanzhou's part is the poisonous point.

Very well described

This is the first time I have seen this worldview. Is it the author's own imagination? Needless to say, this world view is quite suitable for the "villain" of the protagonist. After all, there are only so many positions, and whoever goes up is the so-called "villain". It's a pity that I discovered this book too early. It would be nice to have more than a million words now [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

I can't think of anything to praise it, it's just beautiful.

I can see it, but it doesn't seem to be poisonous at the moment. At least there is no plot involving the original male protagonist having close contact and hugging each other, and the male protagonist is a human being, a normal person, which is not easy. This kind of subject finally has a normal male protagonist.

An urban novel with a fantasy garb. There are no battle scenes. It's more about daily life. It's skewed toward women. It's okay.

I was almost poisoned by the introduction. I was so bored later that I wanted to see how poisonous it was. The result was unexpectedly good. Can the author change the introduction [laughs]

It's a very interesting way of writing. It's essentially the villain of a story with multiple protagonists, but it doesn't say to hide or suppress it because it's the protagonist. It can only be said that it is on the way forward, responding to the heroine and clearing obstacles. At least on a moral level, there are not many shortcomings.

It's very good, the protagonist's character is very palatable, and the writing is very good and relaxed.

Female videos, romance. A very dull emotional catharsis, but not as explosive as those classics. I can see it, but I haven't seen anything clowny yet.

I want to ask if Shen Shuyun will be accepted in the end. After all, they are not related by blood [laughter]

It has been polished by AI. It's well written like this. It's the author's skill. It's pretty. It's a straight shot. It's not 🐢 watchable.

It's okay, but the plot is slow.

Very good, no problems so far.