[Slow pace] [Slowly building]
Chen Yang traveled through Marvel and obtained the system of refining falsehood into reality.
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Reader comments
Give a four-star review as an encouragement.
The author must work hard to integrate Naruto's setting with Marvel. I hope it will receive good reviews as soon as possible.
But personally I think there are still many things that should be improved.
For example, the author did not explain why the Book of Lies only focuses on the content of the ninja world. According to the current development of the church, lies about other extraordinary abilities can already be believed.
Another example is that the protagonist can be shaped into a character who is both good and evil, but there is not enough goal to support the development of the main plot. The purpose of relying on constant design to make the lie come true and gradually become stronger seems unclear. It seems to be powerful for the sake of being strong. With the protagonist's ability, there is no shortage of money and women, and he can make all the changes in the world. So what is the purpose of supporting the protagonist to continue to be strong? In the character of the protagonist created by the author, the reader cannot see a trace of the will to become a savior, so what is the point of continuing to become stronger? How is being the first person in the universe different from now?
The writing is good, but I don't know if the author has arranged the realistic settings well.
Let me give you some advice
The first is about the realization points of ordinary people and the protagonists and supporting characters of American comics. In the early stage, capital needs to be accumulated to avoid big events. It is understandable that the realization points of the protagonists and supporting characters of American comics are higher, hundreds or thousands at a time, but when the base of ordinary people increases, they will be overwhelmed. Ordinary people can use it now, and the hero group can use it at a discount, so both sides can use it.
The second is that the actual price needs to have a benchmark, such as 10,000 genin, 20,000 chunin, 30,000 jounin, 50,000 jounin, etc. The single price is expensive, but there are discounts for one-time purchases of multiple items. For example, one-time purchase of nine Chunins costs 100,000, which is almost half and half. If the quantity is larger, the discount can be even greater. Combined with the discounts certified by American comic protagonists, the price-performance ratio can be maximized.
Not bad, not bad, a bit new, is the lie real? Well, it's not so illegal to show it step by step, and gradually learn the intelligence (lies) to deceive the local forces in the Marvel world! [Facepalm] It's more interesting than the Twelve Talisman, Dark Legion, Admiral, etc. I've seen before. I'll give it four stars for now. I personally recommend it and it's worth watching.
Super pretty! The world view is full, the characters are flesh-and-blood, the plot progresses layer by layer, and the suspense setting is very attractive. The writing is comfortable and the reading experience is excellent. The more I read, the more I can't stop. It is a rare masterpiece that is not clichéd or perfunctory, full of sincerity and decisive five stars!
The writing is good, and it has that flavor. The only drawback is that there are too few updates in 2. If you continue to keep up, there is a high probability that you will read less and less. In the end, the author's mentality will explode and he will stop updating [laughing and crying]
Unbelievable, I saw a big poison suddenly released in the middle, but the rest are pretty good. As for which chapter you choose, you can judge for yourself😘
Chapter 43 started to poison, but overall it is still very good. I hope I can continue writing. Come on💪, author
It looks good, I love reading it. The author will update it soon. Two updates a day is still too little.
Quite an interesting setting. Apart from the small number of words, it's almost impossible to find fault with it.
Average, but for the harem, give me a five-star encouragement
There is nothing wrong with the overall plot, it's just that the protagonist has a bit of a bad taste...
After reading more than ninety chapters, the setting is okay. At present, the only thing to consider is the collapse of combat power.
Surprisingly yes. Good
It looks good, more updates would be great
I don't have much of a problem with the first few pictures. I have the same etiquette for the virtuous people from Guangdong.
Come on, come on, come on
A novel angle, good
Very imaginative
Update soon. Cows and horses can't rest for so long.
Not bad. The protagonist is not the Holy Mother. She is decisive in killing without causing internal friction. She is also cautious enough. When something happens, the shadow clone will first feel like a ninja.
It's okay, but I don't know how to expand it in the future. I feel like it won't be very good in the future.
A very thoughtful book, I hope the author can finish it
Okay. At least it looks pretty.
Yes, the rhythm is controlled just right.
It's very well written. I read Chapter 43 and had no problems with it. It scored 9 or above. Keep up the good work.
Give a four-star review as an encouragement. The author must work hard to integrate Naruto's setting with Marvel. I hope it will receive good reviews as soon as possible. But personally I think there are still many things that should be improved. For example, the author did not explain why the Book of Lies only focuses on the content of the ninja world. According to the current development of the church, lies about other extraordinary abilities can already be believed. Another example is that the protagonist can be shaped into a character who is both good and evil, but there is not enough goal to support the development of the main plot. The purpose of relying on constant design to make the lie come true and gradually become stronger seems unclear. It seems to be powerful for the sake of being strong. With the protagonist's ability, there is no shortage of money and women, and he can make all the changes in the world. So what is the purpose of supporting the protagonist to continue to be strong? In the character of the protagonist created by the author, the reader cannot see a trace of the will to become a savior, so what is the point of continuing to become stronger? How is being the first person in the universe different from now?
The writing is good, but I don't know if the author has arranged the realistic settings well. Let me give you some advice The first is about the realization points of ordinary people and the protagonists and supporting characters of American comics. In the early stage, capital needs to be accumulated to avoid big events. It is understandable that the realization points of the protagonists and supporting characters of American comics are higher, hundreds or thousands at a time, but when the base of ordinary people increases, they will be overwhelmed. Ordinary people can use it now, and the hero group can use it at a discount, so both sides can use it. The second is that the actual price needs to have a benchmark, such as 10,000 genin, 20,000 chunin, 30,000 jounin, 50,000 jounin, etc. The single price is expensive, but there are discounts for one-time purchases of multiple items. For example, one-time purchase of nine Chunins costs 100,000, which is almost half and half. If the quantity is larger, the discount can be even greater. Combined with the discounts certified by American comic protagonists, the price-performance ratio can be maximized.
Not bad, not bad, a bit new, is the lie real? Well, it's not so illegal to show it step by step, and gradually learn the intelligence (lies) to deceive the local forces in the Marvel world! [Facepalm] It's more interesting than the Twelve Talisman, Dark Legion, Admiral, etc. I've seen before. I'll give it four stars for now. I personally recommend it and it's worth watching.
Super pretty! The world view is full, the characters are flesh-and-blood, the plot progresses layer by layer, and the suspense setting is very attractive. The writing is comfortable and the reading experience is excellent. The more I read, the more I can't stop. It is a rare masterpiece that is not clichéd or perfunctory, full of sincerity and decisive five stars!
The writing is good, and it has that flavor. The only drawback is that there are too few updates in 2. If you continue to keep up, there is a high probability that you will read less and less. In the end, the author's mentality will explode and he will stop updating [laughing and crying]
Unbelievable, I saw a big poison suddenly released in the middle, but the rest are pretty good. As for which chapter you choose, you can judge for yourself😘
Chapter 43 started to poison, but overall it is still very good. I hope I can continue writing. Come on💪, author It looks good, I love reading it. The author will update it soon. Two updates a day is still too little.
Quite an interesting setting. Apart from the small number of words, it's almost impossible to find fault with it.
Average, but for the harem, give me a five-star encouragement
There is nothing wrong with the overall plot, it's just that the protagonist has a bit of a bad taste...
After reading more than ninety chapters, the setting is okay. At present, the only thing to consider is the collapse of combat power.
Surprisingly yes. Good
It looks good, more updates would be great
I don't have much of a problem with the first few pictures. I have the same etiquette for the virtuous people from Guangdong.
Come on, come on, come on
A novel angle, good
Very imaginative
Update soon. Cows and horses can't rest for so long.
Not bad. The protagonist is not the Holy Mother. She is decisive in killing without causing internal friction. She is also cautious enough. When something happens, the shadow clone will first feel like a ninja.
It's okay, but I don't know how to expand it in the future. I feel like it won't be very good in the future.
A very thoughtful book, I hope the author can finish it
Okay. At least it looks pretty.
Yes, the rhythm is controlled just right.
It's very well written. I read Chapter 43 and had no problems with it. It scored 9 or above. Keep up the good work.
Very creative Naruto + Marvel text