[Mortal’s Journey] [Beast Taming] [No artificial power caps] [Cautious] [Decisive and ruthless]
Lin Yue unexpectedly becomes a rogue cultivator in the cultivation world. His life is precarious, and he can’t even afford the rent, but then he awakens a Beast Taming panel.
[Beast Master: Lin Yue]
[Beast: Redflame Snake (Mortal Demon)]
[Demon Art: Fire-Leaving Technique (Beginner: 1/100)]
[Can evolve into: Redflame Python (Mortal Demon), Redflame Flood Dragon (Greater Demon)]
[You have gained a minor affinity for fire-element spiritual energy]
[You have gained the full essence, energy, and spirit of the Redflame Snake]
He can train his beasts to improve their demon-art proficiency, see their evolution paths, and receive a boost from their full essence, energy, and spirit.
Even a stray dog by the roadside can evolve into the Sun-Swallowing Divine Lord. Even a chicken in the mud can evolve into a Heaven-Burning True Phoenix.
One day, a True Demon descends into the mortal realm.
After the True Demon defeats one divine beast after another with all its might, it believes itself invincible in the cultivation world. Then Lin Yue steps out of the void, empowered by the forces of the nine great divine beasts.
“True Demon, let’s see if you can withstand my Innate Yin-Yang Five-Element Void-Shattering Divine Light!”
This book is okay. I can only say that it is readable. It is not very attractive. I feel a little frustrated. I am not cautious enough. I am cautious and a little easy to trust others.
These authors will never understand whether the protagonist in the story is trying to save the little girl without even thinking about it. Does he think readers like to watch this kind of classic and cliche plot? Or is it because it is a little girl playing with your broken snake when there are all demon cultivators outside?
Fellow Taoists, this post is a discussion post for this book. Criticisms about the plot can be posted in this post and I will watch it. In addition, if you have any characters or plots you want to see, you can submit them here and I will add them as appropriate. In addition, those who want to be a supporting role can also come here (name, personality, cultivation, setting)
When I saw Chapter 7, it was really cliche. You start off by talking nonsense, saying that you will have a million words in three months. You update so much in one day. Where do you get the million words? And the character portrayal is also very templated. Basically, they are ancient style characters. Pets are also speechless.
The protagonist, who lives only by the author's food, savors it carefully
The book is okay, but Chapter 20 is too boring. Can't you just collect all your things after reading and leave, and then talk in a safe place? He immediately said that other demon cultivators were fools and would not come to see such a big move. I was really convinced.
How to put it, the summary is that he is a good old guy without strength, and then he is moved in various ways emmm, it feels like after everyone learned that the protagonist has a great opportunity, all they think about is how to kill the protagonist. It feels like everyone treats the protagonist's talisman as a decoration🤦
Just so-so, tasteless🍉
The writing is very general and the content is bland and boring. The protagonist has no obvious personality traits, and after watching it once, I didn't have much impression. There is nothing novel about the plot, there are basically no innovative elements, and there is not even any obvious excitement. Tomato's novels are free, there is no such thing as sunk costs, and everyone has too many choices. If the novel does not have any features, it will be difficult to retain readers. The emotional scenes are barely written, which makes it a bit awkward to read and lacks a sense of empathy. If you want the protagonist to be deeply rooted in people's hearts, he must have characteristics, whether they are good or bad. I have read thousands of novels over the past ten years or so, including some that are completed, some that have been discontinued, and some that are unfinished. But there are not many that I can remember. Xiao Yan's sentence "Thirty years in the east of Hedong, thirty years in the west of Hexi, don't bully young people into poverty" describes the youth's high spirits. The ruthless emperor "not to become an immortal, just to wait for your return in the world of mortals" reflects his persistence in feelings. So what are your characteristics? Finally, I hope the author will continue to work hard and write good works.
That Immortal Ascension Order can only be sold for a maximum of 5,000? Even if he is just a threshold, I don't think 50,000 can be exchanged for a second-level bloodline monster to build its foundation in 20 years. For an immortal cultivator, 20 years is nothing. Not to mention the various skills and privileges. The protagonist can now earn hundreds or even thousands a month. Is there something wrong with the prices?