Conan******************

It's much better than expected. Although the cover is a bit hesitant, after I clicked in and took a look, I found it to be very good-looking. The various interactions are very interesting, and I didn't say anything about belittling any of the original characters. It's good-looking and I love watching it [][][]

It's an unexpectedly delicious book. The writing style is very unique. It brought me back to the feeling of reading old novels in my early years. . I was a bit confused when I read it at the beginning. It's not just another book that is wrapped in the skin of the original characters. It's actually a OC-style literature. But as you continue reading, you can feel the author's love for the original characters. So far, both the protagonist and the original characters are very vivid. It's a delicious book! 😋😋😋 The last few chapters have been a bit weird, but there's nothing wrong with the plot. . But, boss, do we really want to talk like this? . . . The first chapters can be said to create the feeling of a light novel, but in recent chapters, too many commas have been used, making it difficult to read.

Gosh, I've almost never seen this setting! Although, I feel that this Zero is delicious. The Zeros in other articles are all very serious and serious, and the characters are also very three-dimensional. It can be seen that the author has a unique understanding of the characters.

It's much better than expected. Maybe it's because of the broken cover that I initially lowered my desire to read it, because the cover gives people a very AI feeling👉👈 but very delicious One person writes in blood and kneels down to beg to watch the movie😋😋😋😋 So delicious

No, I have been saving for several days, but when I came back, I found that the book was gone?

I finished reading it quickly. The author's writing is very good. The interaction between Bourbon and Fang Gu is also very interesting. There is not much OOC. If possible, I hope the author will change the cover. Author, you must finish this book.

I have read Chapter 13 so far. Please forgive me for taking such a short time to comment. Demining and recommendations. 1. The creativity is very interesting, but the author's writing style cannot support the creativity, and the pace of the story is a bit too fast (other parts of the logic are different (we still don't know how long it has been since the beginning of the first chapter) 2. Next, it can be seen that the author wants to add his own creativity to the characterization of the original work, but it is still a bit OOC. Due to the weak writing style, the plot highlights the emotional changes of both Fang Gurei and "Bourbon", causing the protagonist to feel a little aggrieved in Chapters 10-13. ( 3. The creativity is really good. The protagonist seems to have his own thoughts at present. He is worthy of being a person who has traveled two years and survived undercover. However, his character does not have the sharpness that he should have after traveling two years. Instead, he looks like he has just traveled through time. Summary, five stars for creativity, two stars for writing, and two stars for rhythm The author is most likely a newbie, so please give me a good review. (Stacked Armor: It's a purely subjective feeling, you are right)

The writing style of Japanese light novel is very good, and the plot arrangement is excellent. For example, I thought that Rei Fangtani would sleep until the finale, but I didn't expect to wake up soon. This arrangement surprised me. I like the character of the male protagonist and the good and bad dog aspect. I feel very good pua (? I'm very satisfied with being a solid protagonist. To sum up, I like this book

🥺Very delicious. . . This misunderstanding of being mistaken for a sub-personality by the main body is particularly fragrant... The most fragrant thing is that Scotland firmly denied it... Judging from the misunderstanding, it is probably like a "sub-personality" that combines emotions stripped away from the "main personality" and some assumptions. And the most rare thing is that this article is easy to complain about! Usually when it comes to settings like this dual personality, many tend to be serious, but not this one. This one is a very misunderstanding. It also has a bit of the ancient style of Conan's early days, and we sincerely invite everyone to taste it.

It's pretty good-looking, I don't think it's too cowardly, it's a bit tougher, a bit more arrogant!

Ah? ! I have been working on it for a few days, but why am I confused when I read the book today? ! !

It looks good. The bond between bourbon and Mr. Furitani in the dog niche of the distillery (bushi) is really good. Zero's state after 5-4 in the original work is really distressing. Fortunately, he has a close partner to accompany him (by the way, when are you going to replace this completely irrelevant boss on the cover?)

It's very interesting. The setting of Bourbon and Rei Furitani sharing the same body is very novel, and the plot also has my favorite Lupine III [Adoration] [Adoration]. It's so cool to meet and communicate with each other in the novel. I like it. I will always support the author. As a follow-up review, now that I have read so much, I still like the plot very much, and the description is also good, but I don't know why the author's punctuation marks in this article are so strange. Normally, if you write down one sentence, you can break the sentence into three or four paragraphs. It was okay at first, but now that I've watched it more, it's getting a little bit more awkward [laughing and crying] [what]

The writing style is very distinctive, the words are concise and neat, a bit like "I am a Cat", relaxed and humorous. It can be seen that the author is very careful to restore the characters' personalities, and also conceives of the possibility of a completely different interpersonal development. The descriptions of some details of life, such as staying in bed, cooking, and interpersonal interactions, are also very interesting. Just watching the daily life is very enjoyable. Fangtani and bourbon are two sides of the same coin. If there is anyone who can make Fangtani Zero temporarily put down his stress and rest peacefully in the dark, it would be him. The author's design is also very clever. Just spending time with each other and supporting each other makes me feel very relieved, at least I don't have to be alone. In addition, this time Bourbon's strength and abnormality values ​​have been greatly improved, and he has been promoted to a large-scale group pet breeding dog in the winery. He has also gained the full trust of the model worker. At least Gin should not be able to do anything with it...

It's unexpectedly good-looking, and the writing style is quite unique. It's written a bit like a fanfic from a few years ago, with a sense of the past, and the author is also very productive! It's just that more and more commas are used in the later stages. I hope it can be improved. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the follow-up development!

Although I have only read 1/2 of it, I rushed over to comment because I have a very important thing to say to the author, Aite. Please, please change the cover. I obviously discovered this book a month ago, but because I was blown away by the cover, I never considered clicking on it. Obviously the writing and plot are all online, but it was dragged down by the cover like this. I don't mind the issue of AI pictures the least. Even if I use a bean bag to generate a more normal one, I guess the number of viewers will skyrocket now. As for the introduction, I can actually write it in more detail. Finally, author, what you write is really beautiful, please be sure to finish it [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

It was much better than the introduction. I came to read it because the book reviews said it was better than expected and there were no OOCs. Then I found that it was really good. The interaction with Fang Gu is very loving, and it feels like they are now a family that will go on together. But it's really heartbreaking to see a protagonist who has just entered the organization undercover and has no memory of growing up on his own.

It's good-looking, with the style of a comprehensive comic from a few years ago. It's eloquent and has a clear rhythm, making people want to keep reading. No, Chapter 42 has already covered a lot of things. Although it is a dissociated personality setting, the plot development is unconventional. Boss... Boss... Why are the books gone...[Almost crying]

It's really pretty! If you don't want to read it because of the introduction and cover, feel free to read it. If you like Conan fanfiction, you won't hate this one.

The writing is quite good, but as "I" this guy is so pitiful. It's a good thing for the original characters of the anime, but the time traveler who doesn't even exist is so miserable. From a person to a sub-personality, goals, hopes, pursuits, efforts, everything becomes subordinate to others, everything about oneself is not important anymore, and one is completely working hard for others. Liluche can be himself after leaving the draft, and the protagonist will never have a self. It's so miserable.

The sky is falling. It's already 100 chapters and I realize that I only gave it five stars and didn't leave a comment [face covering] The subject matter of this book is novel and the protagonist is realistic. The changes in the mentality of ordinary people and their rejection of themselves are very consistent with what will happen in theory (but my dear, what do you think of me being such a scumbag? [Laughs]) Moreover, this book is rare to have a Lupine plot! (Fox race high!) There are also new friends who need to pay attention. (In the following, the protagonist will be called Bourbon, the original Rei Fukutani will be called Rei Fukutani, and the two common overall systems will be called Toru Amuro. The "theoretical evolution" below refers to "theoretically, under the premise of this plot, the character will indeed evolve into such a character.") Due to the arrival of Bourbon, Rei Fukutani's character has changed a lot. At the same time, the character of Toru Amuro shown to the outside world is also very different from the original work. Scotland will also show his undercover side in the early stages. But rest assured, these changes are in line with theoretical evolution. However, this book still has shortcomings. Although it is harmless to the whole, I still have to remind new friends to pay attention: (I am following the update status in real time, so I am not sure whether the previous chapters have been changed) 1. Gin's character in this book seems to be controversial, and as far as I can see so far, there is no plot that can explain this unreasonable theoretical evolution. 2. Starting from the end of the first page of "Dark Tracker", the author's writing style has changed slightly, which is directly reflected in the addition of many commas, causing many readers to feel uncomfortable when encountering such sentence breaks. I do understand the writing style that the author wants to imitate, but I can't give any guidance, so I can only wish the author good luck (actually I quite like this writing style, but I don't seem to have mastered it well, and I can't give suggestions for modifications, so I can only wish you good luck) In short, the novel subject matter makes this book well worth reading, and now it has reached 100 chapters, so you don't have to worry about not having enough [Send Heart] Forgot to mention: The author's cover scam is too cruel. Both covers did not make people want to read [face covering] If it weren't for the fact that I mainly judged whether to read this book based on the introduction, I would have missed it! [Cover face] If I'm pushed into a hurry, I'll have no choice but to get commissioned or teach myself how to draw [laughs] (Although I think it is unlikely, if this cover was drawn by the author himself, I am very sorry! Sorry for the offense!) (I still want to say that it doesn't look like the author drew it himself)

OK, now I have also finished reading the latest chapter. Well, the author's writing style is very good, it has that kind of literary feel, and the plot is also very interesting. But there are too many commas,,,,,,,,,,,,, and this thunder cover, what the hell is my mother? At first, it was one person with half the face, and then the weird face wore a black mask, and I didn't know whose face it was. The faces were misaligned, which scared me away. Then the author said he was going to change the cover. I was also looking forward to it, and then he directly produced a short-legged and short-legged Falling Valley Zero, and the golden title next to it directly made me dream back to the 1980s. I saw such a sinister thing in the bookshelf, so I took out the yellow talisman from my collection to ward off evil spirits. Boss, why don't you take a look in the book circle? An adult drew a particularly beautiful cover. It would be great to use that.

Boss... Boss... Do we never have a future? Meow (Silly Cat Cries)

No, boss, why are your books gone?

It's so beautiful. The character design of Bourbon really impressed me. I immediately tied it.

There's not much reasoning, it's just bad writing every day, it's so delicious! Wearing books, one body and two souls, this setting is difficult to write, but the author handles it very well!

The writing is very good and the update speed is very fast. Overall, it is a book worth reading. But for me personally, in fact, this book is very difficult for me to accept, because my heart is Jiang Gu Zero, and I can't accept a stranger invading Zero's body and using Zero's identity. This will make me very sick. But this book is really not OOC, which gave me a sense of instant recognition. The protagonist of this book is Rei Fangtani. This book is really good. In order to continue reading, I deceived myself into thinking that the protagonist is Rei from another world. The interaction between Zero and Bourbon is really sweet. In the subsequent plot, Zero regards Bourbon as his best friend, someone who can never be lost like Matsuda and the others. I am looking forward to the follow-up when Bourbon confesses to Zero that he is not actually his sub-personality. Really, if it is said that people in the real world have traveled through Zero's body and become Bourbon, judging from the plot, it is better to say that Zero from another world has traveled into Zero's body. There is no specific description of the protagonist's name or his previous life in the plot. There is only the word "otaku", so there is no sense that the protagonist is an independent and clear personality. And as the protagonist of the plot becomes more and more like Zero, he no longer has the sense of sight of another independent person. He is called "Bourbon" and "Mr. Amuro" and so on. (Zero is taking bourbon more and more seriously. Why do I feel so narcissistic...

Please keep writing! Super pretty! In short, I somehow felt like I was watching Narcissus, and I could see that Zero was really afraid that "Bourbon" would disappear. . The interaction between the two in the new chapter is very cute and I like it. . .

Nice! ! The characters are not particularly OOC and are still funny. They are also very friendly to the original characters, and I especially like the portrayal of Conan. He is no longer a reckless and impulsive child, but is full of youthful spirit, but occasionally Kudo Shinichi is a little impatient due to lack of experience. The big setting is very attractive, with "fake" dual personalities, no body snatching, and no meal replacement (when I read the novel, I really didn't regard the protagonist as the original owner👀) It's just that the cover is a bit uninteresting. When I saw it, I thought it was because I have a bad pen and a lack of food, so I run away from time to time (you don't know that, right? 🥺🙏), So I clicked in when I saw Zero.

It looks good, the writing style is very strange, the more you read, the more you read. There are a lot of commas in the latest chapters. If you listen to the book, you will get stuck. There should be more bourbon shining moments~ But the cover can be replaced with the one in the book circle (a_a) It really looks good and can attract more readers.