Overtime in Warhammer, Extra-Hard Mode!!!!

I lied to you, you and your character will get over it. As for the Emperor's promise, hehe, do you think why he stayed on the Golden Throne for ten thousand years?

Yes, very good. Fans should reject despair, instead of sticking to the original atmosphere of despair, saying that this is the original flavor and authentic. Fans themselves are to bring hope, to make the story become what they want, rather than to insist on the despair they should be. If I have to be desperate, can't I read the original? Why do you have to read fanfiction?

There are flaws in the narrative logic in some places, and there are a few places that I can't understand at all, but it doesn't affect the reading experience very much. There are no complicated wranglings. The protagonist tries to repair the core of the cesspit of the empire with a kind of "surgical" efficiency and logic. He has a very practical spirit. Some readers have reported that they feel like AI. I can only say that it is true, but some of the jokes and humorous plots do not seem to be designed by AI. The overall rhythm is fast and the efficiency is clear. The protagonist himself does not have much emotional portrayal. The narrative is concise and concise. There may be some setting errors.

So far it looks pretty good, but the dialogue is too AI-heavy. It has the unique question-and-answer flavor of an AI short drama. It seems to be funny occasionally, but it can be accepted in other places.

Although there are traces of AI assistance, it can be seen that the author has his own ideas. I really like the explanations of thousands of people and faces. The descriptions of various emperors in the Emperor's Own Pantheon are very eye-catching. I always feel that the author has smooth communication with the auxiliary tools. We are chatting so much that we don't know what the world is about. 🍅The few articles in the Warhammer fandom that are really friendly to the Emperor are here with the purpose of solving the big 💩 pitfall of Warhammer, so the big cheating only adds to the fun (what will we eat if you don't cheat. Jpg) ps: But I always feel that the small head controls the big head from time to time, why do I suddenly become an angel? Pss: Anyway, I'm looking forward to the completion and more updates every day.

It's a good read. The reviews say that although it has a bit of an AI flavor, I think it's much better than most novels. Besides, it's a very filling book. It took me a while to read it until I reached the fifth chapter. The subject matter is good, there is nothing wrong with the plot, the writing is decent, I would like to support it! (Parentheses, I don't recommend writing a love line in this kind of novel, of course this is just my own opinion) I can feel the decaying atmosphere of Iron Man... The overall plot is okay, right?

It's very nice, and the main character in the leather case (the one that covers the Emperor and the Primarch) is very nice! Speaking of whether there is a female protagonist, the interaction with the emperor's images (life and girl) is mainly interesting, but it is okay if there is not, after all, it is really good-looking!!

Well written, with a bit of AI flavor but not too much Children, I found that the protagonist has been wearing those glasses for a long time, and I suspect that the author's xp is a glasses girl

So pretty! Spoiler in advance, the old horse is back and yes, he has been brought back (in the physical sense). Although it is a bit AI, I can feel that the author is revising it carefully. There is also a real yellow leather version of the emperor... By the way, when the time comes, won't Lao Ma really say something sinister when he sees it? 🤦 Specifically, I don't know how to tell you guys, it's pretty good if you read it yourself. 🤦

It's okay, but it's better to use less AI The AI flavor in the back is so strong that the protagonist's name has become the protagonist 🤦