Open Starships, Blast Knights, and Capture Oversized Female Elves

It's okay, but there are too many meaningless female names. When writing about a harem, you should focus on a few main characters. I feel that the characters are still not well established at the moment. However, you can divide those elves by type or occupation and directly label them with the simplest labels. This will make it easier to remember, but it will affect the interaction. This still depends on the author's choice, but the author's completeness is still very good, at least it is quite relaxed and funny.

In Chapter 17, is it too tricky for the male protagonist to blow himself up all over again 😂

It's a super invincible and beautiful ride on a big car. Currently, the world view setting and so on are all online, and the plot is also very exciting. It is the type of cool article that I like. I hope the author will work hard and try to write 1 million words. Come on, author, I hope you can add more, but I personally don't really like this kind of narrative where curses are everywhere, or illusions are everywhere. Some inexplicable enemies have been added to the new chapter. It feels very strange to oppose the protagonist for no reason. There is basically no description of the villain, and no one knows the enemies. The author's current outline feels okay, but it feels like it will be finished soon. I also hope that this is a longer story, and I hope the author can calm down and write it.

It's cool, there's nothing to say, it's just cool. There is also DaChe nb. DaChe is correct. The more detailed the world view is, the better it will be. The author only has 50 chapters now. It is normal that too few people will read it. But as long as there are no problems with the plot, what is supposed to come will always come.

The writing style is a bit like Lao Ga, I would like to write more interesting things [smile][smile][smile]

There are not many words, but the writing is interesting. The characters are generally neutral and confusing. There is a problem with the overall coherence of the narrative, but it should be good as long as it is written. If you can read it at the beginning, the whole article will generally become smoother and smoother. The story line moves relatively quickly, and what Golden Finger gives is quite reasonable, but if there are too many drawings, there may be things you forget.

There are so few, enough for anyone to see? Hurry up and add a healing buff to yourself, whip yourself with a whip and write

It's very interesting, but the name puts you off the book.

It looks good. Please update more. I hope the protagonist will be strengthened later, for example, ikun will become adaptive.

I recommend everyone to read Chapter 67. It's like a Family Guy from another world. The whole family is a god, and the author is so funny. Although I don't understand why the rating of this book is so low, I think it's very interesting. It often makes me laugh so hard that my stomach hurts.

How come no one reads such a cool article?

I can only say that xp is right, the writing is straight from the heart, the writing is smooth, the style is relaxed and humorous, and the physical examination is excellent.

It's very interesting. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

Although I still have more than thirty chapters waiting for my favor, I want to say to the author: "Work hard in sunny days, work skillfully in cloudy days, persist in light rain, and grit your teeth in heavy rain." Please be sure to update 5 times a day [Hold][Hold]

Personally I think it's very beautiful.

Make up for the author [smile]

The big car is right. The author will update soon [angry]

It's awesome and looks good. It looks like a human writing, not AI. It's bad-mouthed and looks good.

In order for the author to update six times

It's good-looking, but it's still too little.

Woohoo! The little train is setting off! Dirty! Dirty! ! !

It looks pretty good so far, it's not poisonous, feel free to eat it The only possibility is Yurna. I don't know what kind of skill the protagonist has. After all, the description is quite lustful and she has traveled a lot.

Sure enough, it was written by you. The more I read it, the more familiar it becomes, the big car and the eagle-like language system.

Good book recommendation, I suggest the author read more.

Yes, jiejiejiejie

Six updates a day, you deserve it.

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Very good western fantasy novel

Great, vivid description

Five stars, good looking, quite interesting