HP: Hogwarts Game Designer

It's a good read and recommended. I think the plot of this book is still very novel so far, especially his role as the director. Several events are organized to reduce prejudice between the four major colleges. I have read the original work and watched the movie, and I feel that whether it is the original work, the movie, or even the fan fiction, there will be prejudice, and it is still very deep. But this book uses some activities organized by the author to weaken prejudices, which I think is good. The main reason is that the character creation of Lorne is very good so far, and his character is also very distinct, especially as he seems to have really traveled to the world of Harry Potter. Instead of following a specific direction like many fan fictions, he seems to have really traveled to this world and lived according to his own personal wishes (of course, I can't guarantee that it will change in the future, after all, there are relatively few chapters updated now). Overall, I highly recommend it.

I must recommend this novel to you immediately. After reading it in one go, I was scratching my head and wanted to pick up the author and shake it to see if there was any stock. Both men and women can watch it because it is a human channel. (Ahem, just kidding) Although it can be regarded as a "professorial text" to a certain extent, the protagonist still has his own arrangements. I liked the protagonist's event planning very much, and I almost watched it over and over again several times. I am also amused and admired by his investment in another business, "mobile phones". It's funny because he calls many people to "work", but he treats them with respect and no prejudice. This is a good point. The protagonist saves Quirrell partly because of his kind nature, and partly because I find it interesting that Quirrell helps the protagonist look after the store. And we all know that Quirrell has done a good job, which adds a vivid color to such fan fiction. (Of course when we read novels, we prefer the characters to be more vivid and lifelike, don't we?) Whether it is Quirrell or other people who serve as negative or even villainous figures in fan fiction, the funny sense of "being saved" and "working for capitalists" here dilutes the possible audience's view of whether the protagonist is "too kind". (Although I am a little unclear in my expression, this is indeed my intention. In my opinion, the protagonist is kind but not virginal, and the others are vivid and not too stereotyped.) Os: Mobile phones are really fun, not to mention the magical world, hahahahaha, anyway, I am very happy watching it🥳 The three little ones don't make too many comments, everyone is very good. But what is surprising is that the latest chapter does not have to bring the three people together like traditional fan fiction, but each has different activities and experiences. This is really good! Appropriate dispersion will not actually destroy everyone's emotions, but just because you have seen other people, your field of vision will expand and your emotions will increase, right? As for Xiaolong, the transformation is relatively natural. Although he is as addicted to mobile phones as a child, being born as a pureblood still gives him better things, such as some vision. It was really fun to watch the game duel with other people in the magic world in the store. After all, he is still a child, and he will teach anyone who asks. And the subsequent transformation was all natural. After all, education is the basis. Some people may ask whether this is OOC, but I would say, fans, just enjoy watching it. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it and must give the author good reviews. And I can't wait to travel back in time to see the finale. Come on, author!

It's very interesting, the setting is very novel, and the protagonist's character is pretty good, but I just missed it for more than 10 years and didn't enter school until I was 21. In fact, there is no special reason for this, it is a little poisonous point. If there is any foreshadowing later, just pretend that I didn't say it. But it's still pretty

How will the technology and business methods of the Muggle world collide with the wizarding world? Can the four colleges break the ice through extracurricular activities? The protagonist is a teacher at the beginning, and the main plot revolves around business development and rescuing key figures. I think rescuing Quirrell is a good point. Many HP Happy Reunion fans patronize Cedric and Sirius in the later period. Quirrell, a miserable person who appeared in the early stage, was ignored. Even if it was written that Voldemort was eliminated, it did not tell what happened to Quirrell after Voldemort disappeared. There are logic problems in some places and some characters are a bit OOC, but overall the flaws are not outweighed. The character of the protagonist is also a highlight. Maybe because he is a teacher, he does not always surround the three little ones. He takes action when it is time to take action. He is a responsible, courageous and mentally healthy adult. The impression is quite good.

The idea is very good. The story is very novel and does not stick to the original plot. The protagonist has his own story line. I am looking forward to the future development. It just seems like the protagonist has to do a lot of things every day. Apart from Quirrell and the Centaur, he hasn't found any helpers yet. I wonder if we can add some collaborators in the future. Also, does the Magic Phone have its own production principle? Can it be mass-produced by itself instead of just relying on the system to redeem it? Big cheers and more [love]

I really like this article [Blowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses]. The author describes Lorne as a very, very good protagonist, a very secure and charming character. He is calm and calm when facing difficulties, can think of many ways to solve them, and has his own ideas and understanding. Originally, when I first read the introduction, I didn't think this novel was particularly attractive, but when I gradually read the novel in depth, I found that it is completely delicious, I love to eat it [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] The author really describes it very well, the plot in the article is very reasonable, and the characters are not OOC so far. So, the author kindly invites you for more updates! ! ! ! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

I really enjoyed watching it. The male protagonist came to Hogwarts to be a professor and do business. Magic phones and games directly brought new experiences to the wizarding world. And I personally quite like the protagonist taking care of the children. I don't think the nanny is the same. Originally, Harry Potter and the others were the protagonists of the story. Being able to write about them made me feel very familiar and immersed in it. This is what it means to be a fan. On the contrary, I don't like that kind of story. I just borrow the general background setting of HP and make up a lot of them myself. Then the content I write is basically irrelevant to the characters and stories in HP, which is boring. The ones that can combine the original story with your own design very naturally, with alternating fat and thin, are the most beautiful. I liked this book recently, I recommend it!

So far, I've read Chapter 57 and it's still very interesting. No matter how hard things fall into your hands, you need the cooperation of others.

It was very interesting to read. Many HP articles on Tomato feel a bit samey, but this one is not at all the same. It reads very smoothly, and the descriptions of certain places are very personal and interesting. This incense author [smiles] Does he think that because the writing is so beautiful, no one will read it? Just wait for it to become a big hit [awkward laugh] (viciously) He even said that good reviews and bad reviews are fine, but I don't want to, I will give good reviews [sending heartfelt thanks], Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie

New readers, already tied, super interesting, the plot is progressing very smoothly at present, but I am very curious that Dumbledore will not be confused after the male protagonist has done so much research: How could he suddenly do so much research and equipment in all aspects when he has never been exposed to magic before? Apart from this, maybe the author will patch it later, but it's pretty cool! Highly recommended! I don't know if there will be cyber characters in the follow-up. I want to see them cry for the characters on their mobile phones. Hahahaha. It's a great idea. I will give it a five-star recommendation.

It looks good. I especially like to read game articles. I didn't expect the hp+ game effect to be so good, and the characters are also very well created. I hope there will be more updates [Please update more] [Please update more] [Please update more]

My family's book shortage is saved! The theme is novel! Get your phone into the wizarding world! Colleges break the ice!

It's very good. It's super good-looking. It solves the disputes and conflicts between students. The subject matter is quite novel and there is nothing poisonous about it. The only thing is that it is too little, too little, too little. Please update, please update, please update! ! !

Very, very beautiful! ! The writing is smooth and comfortable to watch, and the plot makes people smile and is fascinating! "Harvesting the emotional value of the entire magic world starting from the magic mobile phone" (), a very novel plot! This seems to be the first fanfic I have read that cares about entertainment activities in the magical world (?) And takes action. The plot of guiding the little wizard to correct values ​​is also great! (Wait a minute, am I spoiling it?) In short, I hope the author will write quickly and express his words quickly, and I want to see more follow-ups!

Five stars without a doubt. The subject matter is novel, the protagonist is humorous, and the writing is good. There are also some mutual help activities in the article. I have read Chapter 65 so far. My only suggestion is that I hope the author can find ways to arrange some offline activities in Hogwarts, such as garden parties and art festivals. Otherwise, I feel that everyone will become an Internet addicted boy and girl [laughs]

Difficulty: I saw a HP fan with a good idea. Good reviews.

This is an article with a very novel angle, and it's hard to feel that the author is really attentive to writing and portraying the characters! However, there are still some minor flaws in the plot, and in the "Test Your Second House" activity, Hufflepuff's house activities are slightly unreasonable. Eating food and herbalism have nothing to do with Hufflepuff's honest and kind house standards. But overall, it's an article well worth reading! I hope this book becomes more and more popular ((

Judging from the current plot and direction, it's okay. If the author can continue to perform stably, it will be very good. I hope it won't be unfinished.

I like it very much. I just love career-oriented protagonists. The protagonist is very human and a beauty.

Rare, good grass level

Please update quickly, why is there not enough for me to see?

Very nice and very thoughtful

Love watching it, highly recommended! More updates from the author!

It's good-looking, the plot is novel, and it's not a nanny story. I'm looking forward to the next plot. Come on, the author, don't be a eunuch!

It's a novel subject matter and quite interesting. It's just a pity that there are too few. I finished it in a while. I'm really looking forward to the development of the plot later. Good luck to the author. It's very well written. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Very nice! ! Finally I found a hand-written article. The author worked very hard to research [Blow a kiss]

My brain is great, but my logic cannot be scrutinized

This is a wonderful Harry Potter fanfic. Some parts are particularly eye-catching and very comfortable to read. [Praise]

Excellent food, read it in half a day, no need to say more

The author of the last series of Harry Potter fan fiction has already made a million dollars a month. The author is great. I am optimistic about you and will make money soon.