The Mortal World’s Giant Serpent: A God from the Start!

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So far, they are all very good articles, and the protagonist is very humane so far, making people feel very comfortable. The cute little pet rat that appears in the latest chapter is also very exciting.

It's okay. There's no process of killing monsters and upgrading. You can recover 20 meters at the beginning, and then absorb the accumulated knowledge accumulated over thousands of years to directly exceed the 120 meters at the peak and become 300 meters. It's okay to write in front of people.

This book is so good, don't miss it if you pass by it. The new book has been published for many years and is worth reading.

The sea, you are all water

The novel is well written and the subject matter is very novel. But can we not always rewrite the plot from two perspectives? This has happened many times. It affects the viewing experience too much and the timeline is inconsistent. The first time this happened was the battle between a big snake and a machine. Later, I wrote about the purification of the moon from the perspective of humans and the purification of the moon from the perspective of Orochi. Can't you write about Orochi controlling the purification of the moon first, and then write about the human reaction? In this way, the word count will not feel too low, and the plot timeline will be coherent. What you write feels like you are writing completely randomly, a mess, as if you write whatever comes to mind, and it always feels repetitive and unfocused. One chapter is about the battle of gods, and the next chapter is about humans. It is too uncomfortable to read.

Except for the lack of writing, it is really good, but I hope that the God of Machines will not use any black technology to oppose the protagonist, or that the protagonist can crush him.

Rowan, who just squatted on the toilet and squinted for a while, traveled through time. He became an ancient giant snake and created his own kingdom of faith in ancient times. At the end of the Dharma, the age of Shenyin came, causing him to fall into a deep sleep, and his kingdom became a myth and legend for more than a thousand years. But the end of the world will eventually pass, and the ancient mysterious beasts 'gods' will naturally revive one after another. This is the age of steam, and it is also a strange age of madness among the gods. Let's take a look at the story of Luo Wen relying on the Ouroboros rune to gradually become a worldly python that surrounds the world, and travel across the star sea to fight against foreign civilizations and 'evil gods'. (I'm too lazy to comment, so I'll send you an introduction)

For now, this book can still be followed. Although the author's descriptions in some chapters are too verbose, you can skip reading. Overall, it is a late-stage novel with self-consistent logic. It's not completely overwhelming, it's just that the situations encountered are different depending on the realm.

It can be said that it is very beautiful, but there is a pitfall, it is the God of Machinery. In other words, is this an alien god? Or is it similar to the gods born from industry, or if you think about it more grandly, is it a god conquering the world?