[Childhood] [Complex] [Video] [Magic Phone] [Zhutian]
"He Qing, happy birthday!"
There were a lot of people at He Qing's birthday party. These people were dressed really strangely. Some were in ancient costumes, some were in armor, some were JKs, some were magical girls, and some looked exactly the same, but their temperaments were completely different. There were even some monsters and monsters. For those who didn't know, they thought they had entered a large comic exhibition by mistake.
He Qing smiled and said hello to everyone carelessly, "Hey, are you here enough? Are you all here?"
"Brother Ah Qing, happy birthday!"
A cake was slapped at He Qing. He Qing dodged sideways, looked at the girl and smiled helplessly, "Silly girl, you have learned so badly!"
Reader comments
The writing style of the previous author is quite good. It is above the Tomato qualifying line, and this book is the ceiling for Magic Phone fans, and even has signs of surpassing the original work.
The plot is different from other fan works that follow the original work. It is highly original and does not follow the disgusting lines of the original work. The sibling relationship between the protagonist and He Lan is also portrayed well.
Chapter 17 is the key to my rating. I have read Under One Person since its name was still called Yi Ren. It is the ceiling of Chinese comics in my heart. Although I have stopped reading comics due to various things, I am still very happy to see it here. I hope the author can write this book well.
This kind of fanfic that mixes multiple works without detailed description will cause reading difficulties for readers who have not read the corresponding works. Of all the worlds you have written about, I only know Magic Phone and Under One Person. The others are like reading from heaven. The span of your works is so vast that it is difficult for readers to follow you completely. If you don't understand it, you can only withdraw it [face covering]
There is one more person on the magic phone
Protector Xiao Gou——Guo Fengyang
If you become friends with Zhang Chulan, I will give you a heart.
The writing style of the previous author is quite good. It is above the Tomato qualifying line, and this book is the ceiling for Magic Phone fans, and even has signs of surpassing the original work. The plot is different from other fan works that follow the original work. It is highly original and does not follow the disgusting lines of the original work. The sibling relationship between the protagonist and He Lan is also portrayed well. Chapter 17 is the key to my rating. I have read Under One Person since its name was still called Yi Ren. It is the ceiling of Chinese comics in my heart. Although I have stopped reading comics due to various things, I am still very happy to see it here. I hope the author can write this book well. This kind of fanfic that mixes multiple works without detailed description will cause reading difficulties for readers who have not read the corresponding works. Of all the worlds you have written about, I only know Magic Phone and Under One Person. The others are like reading from heaven. The span of your works is so vast that it is difficult for readers to follow you completely. If you don't understand it, you can only withdraw it [face covering]
There is one more person on the magic phone Protector Xiao Gou——Guo Fengyang
If you become friends with Zhang Chulan, I will give you a heart.