At the Beginning, He Set up a Stall and Sold Dali: Call Me Monkey King!

It's beautiful, but it's so hard to wait. I want to keep reading but I'm afraid of dying [face covering]! I really like the character of the protagonist, he is not slutty, and his outlook on life is very much in line with what I have developed through years of education! Come on, big brother who writes about the great sage💪

When I read a book that I find good, I don't comment on it. If I really can't stand it, I'll give it one star. But I really want to give this book a good review. Although the main character in it looks stupid, it's pretty good among Dali fans. The subject matter is also very novel, and it's no longer Kazuki. The Southern system is similar to Jiangnan or is basically completely dependent on Jiangnan. I feel that if this is written down, there will be a new team independent of Jiangnan with the theme of Journey to the West. Let's see if the author can design the mechanics of Nezha and Yang Jian according to their abilities.

It is a relatively novel way of writing in earth fan fiction. It is well written and has great potential. The plot is also very good, neither too fast nor too slow. It is considered a well-written fanfic. I don't like writing reviews when reading books, but this book is well-written and it is a new book. It needs some popularity. Just write it and you can recharge it.

To be honest, it can be said that there are basically no fanfics about Dali. Compared with other books, you can't find them at all. And because it is a dual timeline, it is more difficult to write. So when it comes to Dali's fanfics, some of them are good to read, and the writing is not bad. Basically, there are no poisonous points to read. I have read them on the recommendation list before. When I came up with this name, I thought it was just putting the Monkey King directly into the world view of Dali, and then beating him randomly, so I wasn't interested. But after I came in, I found out that it was a superpower, not directly invincible. Maybe it's because I prefer to watch that kind of development process, and I think it's okay [Thinking]

After reading Chapter 44, I feel pretty good so far. It has an original plot and its own setting. The protagonist's talents need to be resolved, and other characters similar to Journey to the West will join in the future to maximize the talents. In the original book, the global war, the moon chapter, and the starry sky chapter all have top-notch talents, otherwise the combat power would be somewhat unexplainable. Also, the main character is made to be handsome. The Ai life picture is a bit crazy for me. It's comparable to the yellow and purple color scheme. Otherwise, if I really want a baby, I'll go for it. I'll fall in love with Thor instantly.

So beautiful! This is my favorite among the Dali fanfics I have read. The character of the protagonist is also very good, and the original settings are also great. Tianyin is so cute! Chen Yang is also a reliable big sister, Zhu Meng is also great, but her dressing style makes me want to fall in love with Thor.

My suggestion is that the Great Sage now has his own original line, which intersects and overlaps with Jiangnan's line, because their current Great Sage's character is too straight, and he will definitely grow up in the future, so I hope that after the author finishes writing Xiaomi La, readers can feel that the Great Sage is different

It's very good. The protagonist's outlook is very upright and there are no big problems with the plot.

Although I gave it five stars, I have to complain about the title of the book. I feel that the title of the book is just like a mindless white text mass-produced by AI (no malice, just a complaint). As for the content, I have to say it's quite interesting. Although it's not as funny as Dali's book, it tells some stories from another angle. It's still very good. I just need to add more emojis. I really like the emojis in Dali's book, which is quite interesting [laughs]

This doujin is one of the few Dali doujins that I find good-looking, and it's very good. I just want to ask if there is a cp? Is it single or multiple? I feel that both Chenyang and Tianyin are possible [Thinking][Has been planted][Bookshelf plus one]

Yes, I'm shameless੭ ᐕ)੭*⁾⁾hi~

1. It's quite good-looking. Compared with other Dali fan fiction, the protagonist doesn't have much personal heroism. He also reads it from the third person and complains about the original text of Dali, which is unreasonable. 2. There is no absolute distinction between the protagonist and Jiang Nan in the article who is stronger and who is weaker. The two call each other brothers and sisters, and both of them also have their moments of failure. It is not like other fanfics where Jiang Nan is regarded as a younger brother and the original readers are disgusted. 3. In terms of cp, cp is probably Chen Yang in the original plot. I personally think this is good.

It's good to watch, but the author is a bit slow in updating, and I don't know if the plot behind it is good. I finished reading the first one in one go, hoping that the author won't send out the knife, otherwise, it's good to read, but the author is a bit slow in updating, and I don't know if the plot in the back is good. I finished reading the first one in one go, hoping that the author won't send out the knife. Originally, the original knife was enough. If the author doesn't change it, then it's true... And can the protagonist's strength be improved? Don't you think it's too slow to absorb a golden spirit ball to upgrade from Bronze Level 1 to Bronze Level 6 or 7? And ask the author, does this book have a female protagonist?

I can point out in the most direct, truthful, thorough, naked, realistic, sharp, unvarnished, hard-core, straightforward, crisp, decisive, least pretentious, least foreshadowing, least procrastinating, most to the point, least vain way: Read it and that's it

This subject is quite new

Good! It's great that no one died because of bobcat fishing for white sharks.

I'll give you a full star [laugh][laugh][laugh]

Good books support me

I know why your rating is relatively low, because most of the people who come to see Dali Fans want to see Jiangnan instead of starting a line yourself. Your writing is not bad, but it just doesn't match the situation they came for, so they gave you a low score. Come on!

It fits my impression of the Great Sage very well. I hope the author can keep writing and this book will achieve good results.

It's a good book. I want to read it, but I'm afraid of it. Yours is the only book of this type that I can read. It's so good-looking. I personally feel that it doesn't even have the original text. This book is good-looking (I don't like it personally, so don't criticize it).

It's so beautiful, especially the setting of the Red Star Army [Adoration]

The rare Dali Tongwen tastes very sweet and makes me full.

It's a very interesting book, and the protagonist really has the style of a great sage. But I seem to know whether there will be Yang Jian and Nezha later, making up the three most rebellious guys in heaven. Or come to a Westward Journey team, with four masters and apprentices in it.

So beautiful

Compared with other Dali fans, it is good. The protagonist does not steal the limelight of Jiangnan too much. I wonder if the Dream Chaser team will form a Journey to the West team.

Very good-looking. The main character has a good outlook on life and can bear the title of Monkey King.

The writing by Dali fan is very good. The original characters are not OOC, the original content is also very novel and interesting, and the protagonist has a very positive outlook on life.

It's great. I'll love to read more. It's been a long time since I've seen such a correct outlook on life, but I can guarantee that the main character is enough to be alive.

This is the best Dali fan I have ever seen! ! ! A wave of support. [Original party][top post]