Master Looks Cold on the Outside, but Secretly He Is a Yandere?

I haven't read many books, and the setting of this book is something I think the subject matter is interesting but not written by anyone. My personal feeling is as follows (before Chapter 73) Advantages: There are currently no obvious poison spots and no knife. The story progresses very quickly. The female protagonist is more charming than sick. She does not torture the male protagonist. Apart from their inherent flaws, the male and female protagonists are basically the same as normal people. Disadvantages: The heroine is a little yandere at best, with few daily parts and less desserts. The character changes a bit quickly, the relationship progresses too quickly, and there are too many supplementary narrations. It is not suitable for those who like slow pace and delicate inner descriptions. The descriptions are a bit repetitive. The intensity of cultivation is a bit strange (maybe because I don't often read articles on cultivating immortals) Overall, it's pretty good. At least I have the desire to continue watching. The male and female protagonists are normal people and have surpassed 95% of Tomato's works. You can still look forward to the next update.

It's a simple and sweet story about daily life, very good, but the heroine likes her very inexplicably and for no reason. When she picks up the hero, she takes him as her husband. Although I don't really care, it can still be improved. The handling of some plots is also quite new. The male protagonist meets the female protagonist and is a nymphomaniac. Instead of pretending that they don't know, they just go straight to it. I can't stand the kind of psychological speculation and conflicts and stupid eunuchs. The male protagonist has a weaker temperament, so it is more suitable. . . People see, you know The only thing I think is a little bad is that when my sister was kidnapped, why didn't she just run away after she was rescued? And he was obviously able to beat him, even if he dragged him to the sect leader, he was still knocked unconscious. After he woke up, he was able to beat him again? Isn't this just giving and motivated?

It's very beautiful, but I feel like Master is a little emotionally indifferent [laughing]

Updates are too slow and not enough to watch

It was really fun to watch, and I look forward to the character's growth later on.

Give yourself a good review [laughs], by the way, readers, I want to comment. Negative reviews that point out problems are also acceptable. I will read every comment [cry]

The writing is quite good, but I feel like the male and female protagonists talk like human-machine and there is no emotion in the questions and answers. I feel that the AI ​​writing is more emotional than this, but overall it is still good.

A mildly sick girl is great, pure love is so great [I'm about to cry], in reality, I can have a girlfriend like this, a mildly sick girl, even if I'm asked to drive a luxury car and live in a mansion, I'd be willing to [cry]

Good-looking, but short, not enough to watch [cry][cry][cry]

It's quite sweet, okay

It's beautiful, but it's a pity that I didn't come at the right time of spring.

It's good-looking. There are no surprises throughout. Although it's short, the emotional line is well laid out.

I have been a bookworm for eight years, and the writing is really good.

The writing is very brutal, the emotions are very delicate, and the writing style is also very good, but the heroine has to endure a lot of electric shock [laughs]

Looks good, give me some support

I'm not a newbie [shy]

So pretty, so pretty, so pretty

Good looking, lots of updates

It can look good

Good-looking, recommended, good-looking, recommended [shy][shy]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Good, good, good, good, good, look good

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

After reading it, my evaluation: The writing style and detailed description are the peak that I can't reach in my life [smile][smile] (I'm jealous (ᗒᗣᗕ)՞)

That's it. . Needless to say, it looks good.

Hee hee hee, what I want to see is this Kuu Ya. It's so well written. The author is awesome.

It's beautiful. It's the first time I've read it since I first started updating it. I think it's the first batch of readers. I must get a five-star review [laughs]

I feel that the role of cultivation has been weakened

It's beautiful. I really like this kind of subject matter, but no one has written it. The author has written it, and it's very beautiful. The author loves you so much. To be honest, the only flaw is that I really want to see the deleted parts [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]