Hungry******

The writing is quite good, the author is also very handsome, and the content is bitter at first and then sweet. I hope the author will continue to write @ sunset desolate forest dark A very good author, every time he updates, he also updates in large quantities. The plot should be compact and sweet, so come on.

From my point of view, the plot of this work is reasonable and the characters are well grasped. The detailed description in the article is quite good, which almost makes up for my desire to imagine the scene at that time. The scenes of blood and fighting are even more exciting (maybe it is an illusion, I always feel that the author writes this aspect more smoothly) Secondly, the plot. So far, the ups and downs of the plot are reasonable and well-founded. There are no obvious flaws in reading, and it plays a very important role in shaping the characters. I look forward to the author's future arrangements. Starting from the characters, the author has worked hard on the characters. I didn't feel disgusted or abnormal when reading it (if I insist on it, Lao Liang's emotional intelligence seems to have increased more than a little🤓). The original characters in the article are also b-grams, which actually made me think a lot🤓🤓🤓 All in all, the development prospects of this work are undoubtedly broad. I hope the author will continue to update. I believe the author will have a good return🥰 Also, I always feel that the feelings between Lao Sui and Lao Liang are getting more and more wrong with each other. Is this really a pure love-hate intertwining? Why do I feel that Lao Sui is going to become a 🧊🦶lie🥰 Should Lao Liang's emotional intelligence be weakened a little more so that the relationship between the two can be upgraded? We, this group of readers, just want to see the blood flowing into Hekou Ya😋😋😋 @ sunset wilderness forest dark

The writing is excellent, the character creation, plot arrangement and writing skills are all excellent, and the logic is also very smooth. Except for the line of missing each other, the ending of dying together is my biggest disappointment. In my opinion, in the ending of Shared Death, the two of them join forces to kill the dolphin demon, which is the beginning of Ryo and Sui completely letting go of their grudge against each other. This is my favorite second work, and I look forward to the author updating it as soon as possible! [Send heart][Send heart]

Has a sickly smell

Book reviews that are true and objective, with multi-dimensional descriptions, clear structure, and substantial content can help more book lovers: D

The story has twists and turns, is vivid and fascinating, and Xiaosui, who is jealous, enjoys it [Adoration] Also, don't break your teeth [blow a kiss]