Tsk, I'm Really Not a Lolicon

This comment is based on the fact that I have read Chapter 30 so far, and the novel has been updated to Chapter 34, with a total of 118,400 words. There are no obvious surprises or poisonous points in this novel. The writing is smooth, the language is humorous, and the characterization is okay. It is a type that can be read and watched, but has no highlights. I can give it 8 points, based on new authors, so I give a lot of support to newcomers. The following are lightning protection regulations (I think some points may cause discomfort to some people, or there is room for improvement) to avoid wasting time. 1. The title of this article contains certain elements of fraud. Although there is a Loli heroine in this book, the Loli content is not high. Except for the height of the two Loli characters that have appeared so far, except for the height that matches the Loli label, the other words and deeds are not consistent with the Loli label, as well as the plot that is focused on the description. 2. The pace of this article is relatively slow. 110,000 Words have been updated so far, and the plot is close to 120,000. The relationship between the male protagonist and the first female protagonist is only slightly good. He has just met the second female protagonist not long ago, and the way to promote the relationship so far is not normal dating, but dealing with political affairs. As a result, almost 30 chapters of the previous article are all about how to solve the political troubles that other people bring to you? There is nothing too novel, and the methods are ordinary, just normal throwing dirty water, hating others and so on. As a result, the emotional progress is extremely slow, and most of the space is taken up by political politeness. (Suitable for readers who are used to a slow pace) 3. The meaning of some settings is unclear, and the world view related to the plot is not fully developed. For example, the protagonist is a time traveler. Nowadays, many people have opinions about soul travel. Moreover, the protagonist's behavior is consistent with the original owner and completely inherits the original owner's memory. There is no mention of the original owner's previous personality or what the protagonist did before time travel. So why write about him traveling through time? The current plot does not reflect the characteristics of the protagonist being a time traveler. The words spoken are local, there are no plug-ins and nothing else. I don't know why this setting is added? There is currently no explanation for the protagonist's parents, the history of Demon King City, the origin of the two races, the role of authority, the power system of the world, etc. There is only political game, but it does not talk about history, development, extraordinary systems, or the origin of contradictions. It's a bit like everyday writing, but everyday writing doesn't use political games as the subject of description. If it mainly involves politics, it must involve history and the system of governance, including the system of power. This has led to many labels that have no actual effect. As for the plot of the current article, the nouns can be changed to two countries. The duke of one country marries the princess of another country, and then the plot so far is applied. There is no sense of violation. When writing about devils, saints, and Western fantasy, you must have a corresponding world system. The development of the current article can be placed in any article with political content, and it has not made good use of its own setting. Of course, I just put forward the shortcomings that I think, and hope that the author will improve them in subsequent articles. They are not particularly serious, and the overall content does not appear boring. The author's writing is okay, and the dialogue in the middle is quite interesting, but well, the processing and content are a bit too long.

From what I have seen so far, I can personally get T1, which is pretty good [Chigua] Advantages: humorous, pure battle of wits, and relatively clear analysis and deconstruction. There are currently no major poisonous points, but there is hope for the future. Disadvantages: The current feeling is not very exciting, and the title is a bit deceptive (you can tell that the author is laying out the emotional line, but after more than 50,000 words, it seems to be close to slightly favorable). If the author wants to write a long story, it is suitable for those who like a slow pace (although it seems that the events are connected very quickly) Special: Loli heroine, but obviously far away from the loli label, more of a saint label (especially the part with the child) Okay, I'm used to reading fast-paced and refreshing articles, and I can't stand this kind of thing anymore, so I'm going to leave now.

Generally no surprises

There is an obvious AI smell, and there are also artificial traces.

Judging from the few chapters I have read so far, it is indeed very interesting. The writing style is quite humorous, and the people's over-understanding. Oh, it's so exciting.