As a Vitrum orphan, Nolan, a Vitrum boy with the same name as the Almighty Man of the old world, survived alone on the ruined earth after the world was destroyed. In a force that tore the multiverse apart, he was forced to be involved in the rifts of the multiverse and experienced a strange multiverse journey.
Reader comments
It looks pretty good so far, and the characters don't always sound bitter and hateful, and they don't have the air of artificial intelligence. I hope this can be longer, starting with 1.5 Million words.
Not bad, is there a female protagonist? [Like][Like][Like]
The AI flavor is very light and the plot is okay so far. I hope it can keep it up.
It's okay so far, but I couldn't stand it in Chapter 8
How did you know you were going to take out the sonic weapon to fight the Vikrum people? You've only been here a few days.
A sound wave device suppressed the protagonist from dozens or hundreds of meters away
It looks pretty good so far, and the characters don't always sound bitter and hateful, and they don't have the air of artificial intelligence. I hope this can be longer, starting with 1.5 Million words.
Not bad, is there a female protagonist? [Like][Like][Like]
The AI flavor is very light and the plot is okay so far. I hope it can keep it up.
It's okay so far, but I couldn't stand it in Chapter 8 How did you know you were going to take out the sonic weapon to fight the Vikrum people? You've only been here a few days.
A sound wave device suppressed the protagonist from dozens or hundreds of meters away