My Archenemy Has Become an Immortal, What Should I Do? !

I definitely recommend such a good-looking book. This book is definitely a masterpiece. From the sense of the senses, it is "Love Before the Melody" is super sweet. It is really sweet. The author's character design is also full of ingenuity. The male and female protagonists are gods among gods (I mean they are powerful) and at the same time show the true nature of the male protagonist - completely depressing. Because this book is not The Three-Body Problem, there is no logic at all. The plot is even more moving, the pace is very slack, the foreshadowing is far away, and it feels completely boring. What do you think after watching it? I will definitely recite a poem. The ups and downs of worldly fate eventually become a drama, The years are full of ups and downs. What is the meaning of all the turmoil? The path ahead contains both joy and sorrow, Look at the world indifferently and savor the aftertaste.

Overall, it's a pretty good book. Don't believe other reviews that say it's toxic. It's pretty good to see it for yourself. The transition of the plot and the speed of the rhythm. The transition of the plot is quite good, but there are obviously some flaws. Because some plot transitions are a bit abrupt (such as the part where the marriage is given by Heaven), which makes me feel that there is no foreshadowing and a bit uncomfortable. I feel that some plot foreshadowing can be added before this chapter to do some foreshadowing, so that I feel more natural. Also, um, it is a relatively new chapter. I feel that the transition of thirty years and three hundred years is a bit fast. Secondly, in terms of emotional description, this is more related to character creation. I think that when writing about the inner demons of the male protagonist (I think the focus is on unfilial piety and homesickness), I feel a little... A little embarrassed. I can change it. I hope that the emotional resonance between the male and female protagonists can be improved. I watch male videos, but I feel a little uncomfortable (ᗜ ˰ ᗜ) , as well as the latest chapter. I think the interaction between the male and female protagonists is a bit... It feels a bit old-fashioned to me, and it is still a bit lacking. I hope the author can add something eye-catching. Finally, in summary, it is a book with a very good setting. Some plots are a bit abrupt, but the overall impression is not bad. I look forward to the follow-up development. I leave a five-star rating and hope the author will work hard￣￣ (Typing in the middle of the night, I am a little unconscious, there may be some typos and some logical problems (*^^*))

A novel that is similar to a short video about fast-paced love life. I've read the first thirty chapters so far. On the plus side, the portrayal of the heroine's tsundere is better. The interaction between the male and female protagonists also has the feel of a romantic comedy. The shortcomings are also obvious. First of all, the background of the world of cultivating immortals is obviously for love. There are many plots in it that somewhat weaken the setting of the world of cultivating immortals. For example, there is a scene where the male protagonist forcibly kisses the female protagonist, but a maid actually sees it. Not to mention that the female protagonist is of a higher level than the male protagonist and can be forcibly kissed. Let's just say that the female protagonist's divine consciousness is higher than the Mahayana and cannot detect the maid. However, there are mixed flaws. The advantages of this book are still very obvious. It is worth reading just to see the daily love life of the male and female protagonists.

It's a good read, and I read the latest chapters in one go. This kind of love and murder theme is very fresh. The last time I read these types of novels was two years ago. Come on, author, I want to see more daily sugar sprinkles! [Laughs] I think my writing started to get a lot better after Chapter 40 of God's Gift of Marriage. (I write more about daily life. I read these novels just to talk about the sweets.) As long as I keep updating, I will see the finale [laughs]

It looks good, I love to see it, I want to see it, I recommend all Taoist friends to come and take a look [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][micro laugh][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][vomit]

The content is very exciting, I read it in one sitting. [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua] The arrogant character of the heroine is very well portrayed and perfectly expressed, unlike some books that are only arrogant but not coquettish. [Eat melon][Eat melon][Eat melon] is very sweet. I hope the author will not imitate others and send out a knife when he writes the sweetest part🔪[Smile][Smile][Smile]

There is nothing poisonous about this book, the author is very detailed, the writing is top-notch, the love and friendship are well written, the plot has ups and downs, and you will not feel bored, the male protagonist has an online IQ, and the supporting characters do not act like tools. I like the character of Ling Xuzi very much, he is affectionate and righteous, and he is not serious. It's a pity that this book has little traffic, and it feels like a treasure has been buried. [You taste carefully]

It's so good to read, it's so powerful. It feels like a later version of "Nine Worlds of Evil". The pace is a bit fast. In more than 50-60 chapters, you're almost ready to get married. Although it's a little jerky during the transition period, the whole text is smooth and the writing is great and very interesting. It's sweet and I won't get tired of it at the moment. I feel like the articles written by Doubao are all copied from the author, but the author just scratches his head at first glance. It's so amazing that AI can't write it. By the way, the content of Chapter 91 can be saved. It's so cultured bro. I am also a book writer myself, and the author's writing style can be said to be in the top 10% of what I have seen (let's be honest: I rarely read high scores of 9.8/9.9, My taste is very average, and many of these super high scores are not to my liking) Also, I can understand what the author meant when he said that he felt stuck. Sometimes when it comes to key plot points, it's not that he really deliberately stutters, but because he doesn't know how to write, how to describe, and how to develop the plot. It's all a problem.

It's a very interesting book with delicate emotions. Don't stop reading it.

Not bad, but why did the author suddenly stop updating?

The cow pulls the roller to grind the cow material, and after grinding the cow material, the cow material is left.

Not bad, nothing bad, not bad, the heroine is so tsundere and cute

I'll give it four stars first. After all, I don't know what will happen next. I'm scared of being fooled by many novels with gold rims. This novel Dan Shi has potential (after all, I came from Douyin, which has AI comics) [Like]

It's very beautiful. Please update more often. Please update quickly. Don't stop updating.

Good looking. More soon. More more. More hard.

The author is good at writing plots, high-quality but not popular. The character of the male protagonist reminds me of Pineapple Fubuki in "Fruit Punch", a childhood male idol with high IQ, good looks, mean-spirited and funny character.

It's very beautiful, I hope you won't stop updating it and keep updating it [Sending my heart]

My mother was beside me, heard his voice, saw his pictures, got very angry, handed over my mobile phone, and gave me a slap in the face, so she wrote this article to warn netizens not to speak loudly. I hope netizens will take my warning, so I wrote 😭😭😭😭

Just watch it. I didn't say a word when I watched it. I opened it for the first time. I'm still reading it in the middle of the night. To be honest, the corner of my mouth didn't go down. It's really smooth and smooth. It doesn't drag out, 🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆 emphasizes that this is the biggest advantage of this book, it doesn't drag out the plot. , It's so sweet that I'm overwhelmed😋😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 Now, uh uh uh (⊙⊙), this, this, forget it

It's so beautiful, it's simply the most indescribably beautiful book in the universe.

It's a good, very funny book. It's very comfortable to read. It's suitable for reading when relaxing. I hope the author will continue to do so [laughs]

The emotional description of this book is quite good. It is a masterpiece that can make people's eyes brighten at a glance. I also read a long chapter. I think this book can definitely be ranked among my favorite books. I think this book has very delicate emotions in the description and is also humorous. It is worth recommending. Come on, author! I hope one of your novels will be on the list! Come on! Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on!

It's pretty good-looking, not toxic (in my opinion) and the author's soul is back. The soul is back. The soul is back. The soul is back. The soul is back. Ran away, died in Chapter 160

This book is well written by the author! But I think I can write some content about the emperor's uncle. After all, I like to read this kind of [smirk] [snicker] Also, the author must not write a sloppy article! Finally, the author can write more about the daily life of the male protagonist and the female protagonist.

A very good novel. It is a light comedy romance novel with the appearance of a cultivator. The advantage of a female author is that she writes well and portrays characters well. Nowadays, most of the Tomato male videos are written by fast food novices or brainless system writers. Most of them are 88, but the concept or creativity is better. This kind of light comedy romance novel is pretty good.

Awesome, I'm Ah Hum

Such a wonderful book, I must take out the five-star [cool] that I have treasured for many years

A little bit female, not many girls, bold, not bad

Not bad, not bad, very much to my liking

No matter where you are, don't forget to cherish the people who love you [Chigua]