Quick Transmigration: The Female Lead Gave the Male Lead to the Supporting Female, Then Regretted It

It's okay. It's just that I don't have a double that I like. The male and female protagonists are not sweet enough. I was a little sad at the end of the first world. I want them to be sweet together for the rest of their lives. Also, it would be nice if they don't get noticed when they are acting. If someone notices when they are acting, they feel like clowns.

At first, I thought that the heroine was the one who controlled the emotions and was in a superior position. The description of the heroine at the beginning was quite awesome. Then I didn't expect that I fell in love very quickly. I didn't understand the speed of the relationship. Then there is the original heroine. Looking at the previous description, I thought she was a tough girl. Because she was a little scared by the male protagonist in her previous life, I felt very guilty for not telling the heroine what kind of person the hero was. Then the heroine could understand what she did. I thought the original heroine would have a good ending. Then later, I wrote that the original heroine was jealous. , The heroine felt that she was unfair in her previous life, and then wrote a lot about the original heroine, and also wrote about the original heroine getting married, and then having a concubine, and then trying to kill the child and so on. I couldn't do it anymore. I stopped reading after more than 20 chapters. When writing about the heroine, write about the heroine well, and write more about the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists. Why write so much about the original heroine. Mark mark.

There are too many descriptions. I wrote 7 pictures for a banquet, all describing how the heroine should be yandere, how the hero should criticize the original heroine, and how she should escape. Is this really necessary? Everyone knows what he is written about and has already read it, so why do we keep repeating it?

What about the plot? It's so long-winded, I don't know what I'm talking about. The male and female protagonists haven't met each other for a few times, but they were kissing each other. Do you know how helpless I felt when I saw them kissing each other? Each one was more arrogant than the other, trying to show that the heroine is thoughtful, but ended up writing a lot of nonsense. Most of the chapter was full of nonsense, saying: "I want to win this man" and "I am very yandere", but in the end it was nothing. There are more and more new books recently. Have you really thought about writing a novel? Let me ask you this🌚

Written by AI. Evidence 1: The prince asked the heroine: "The daughter of the prime minister's family?" He clearly knew the heroine's identity, but later asked the eunuch who the heroine was. Evidence 2: The bastard of the second female lead can still draw red on her front and ask eloquently, "Are you unhappy, ma'am?" Later she degenerates into a three-month-old baby. The timeline is inconsistent, so why don't you proofread it when writing an article using AI?

So delicately written

It's pretty cool, but it still has shortcomings, that is, the system is too noisy, too stupid, and too active. The frequency of the system's appearance is a bit too high, and it can cause dramas.

It's so beautiful. I hope your book will be on the top list.

The writing is very good and looks very comfortable.