To Stay Alive, I Have to Keep Lying to Her Today

This is my first book on Tomato 😘

As one of the few wasteland development novels, the character setting and overall narrative rhythm are very good, and the novel subject matter is also a highlight to attract more readers. At present, the world view described by the author is relatively complete, and there are not many loopholes in the plot advancement. Although the relatively bland narrative in the early stage can increase the relationship between Yuluo and Hattie, it also delays the advancement of the main story line and will reduce some readers' interest in reading to a certain extent (leading to book addiction). At the same time, how Yuluo's strength should be improved in the mid-to-late stage (currently we only know that the potion is the most direct way at present), whether it will be numerical expansion after the major version update or a slow and steady upgrade, as well as the relationship between the two after Hattie's memory is restored, can become more interesting points to watch, and are also directions that the author can consider. What is worthy of praise is the author's grasp of the emotional part and the foreshadowing of the main plot. It can be seen that the author himself has designed a relatively complete outline and has better writing style. Looking forward to the next plot unfold.

The plot is smooth, with casual daily life and no lack of incident conflicts. There are some ingenious ideas in the setting. However, the length is currently short, the core conflict has not been fully developed, and the branch plots have not been fully written. We are waiting for the author to complete it. Most of the characters are flat characters. The title is fair In terms of readers' experience, this genre is acceptable. In terms of combat, the protagonist is weak (in my personal opinion, it should not be too weak), and the author is highly active. In summary, it's worth watching (The article is too short and the opinions are inevitably wrong. The above is only my current personal opinion) In fact, the most important thing is that the author asked for book reviews several times at the end of the chapter🙃

Very novel content. It tells the story of a time-traveler who travels back to the wasteland game he played before, and picks up the Boss's sister to raise up in order to survive! The title is vivid and summarizes the content of the first part of the novel. The plot explains the causes and consequences at night. At the same time, the detailed description of the content is also handled well, vividly showing the warm daily life in the wasteland before the readers' eyes. It also vividly describes the human nature in the wasteland. Although the description is sparse, it vividly depicts each of the distinct characters. At the same time, the language is vivid and interesting, which can bring unexpected happiness to readers, allowing them to immerse themselves in the world of the novel and relax their body and mind! As a new author, it is very rare to be able to write such a novel and deserves our deep praise. I hope that the author can maintain the current level and continue to improve in his subsequent creations. Make a good setting for this wasteland world, depict a larger world, and vivid and interesting events, and continue to work hard to portray characters with profound meanings! Come on! ! !

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Mountain 108: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good! A masterpiece! My favorite is that Wu Song fought fiercely with Erlang Shen for hundreds of rounds in the mountains and forests for revenge against his brother. However, Pan Jinlian's secret technique was too powerful. Fortunately, Jie fired the holy spear in time, otherwise the M249 fire suppression would not be able to withstand it. The scene that poked me the most was when Tang Seng faced the monsters and shouted loudly: "Don't play tricks in front of the poor monk", which perfectly showed Tang Seng's grief and anger when he saw all his apprentices defeated. The overall plot is interlocking, the power system is clear, there are many hidden lines, the fighting is hearty, and the personalities of each character are just right!

The subject matter is quite attractive, and the main plot is okay, but I think the writing style is a bit weak, and the battles are quite sloppy, but some settings are actually quite good. Let's see what happens later. Come on, author.

The Year of the Dove Holding the Branch The eternal throne of heaven has arrived, and the world has been transformed. Then the True King, the original one, began to wage war against the seven terrible kings, the masters of the old world. The terrifying kings are dragons. The Original One created His own luminous shadow. And the number of shadows is four. [Phanes, or the original one] The original one may have been Phanes. It has wings and a crown. It is born from an egg. It is difficult to distinguish between male and female. I want this day. Can't cover my eyes anymore I want this land I can't bury my heart anymore I want these living beings Everyone knows what I mean I want your book Have a good result!!!

🍅The unique low scores are better than the high scores. I have read more than 100 chapters so far. Overall, it looks good. It is one of the few novels that I can put on my bookshelf. The plot is quite interesting. But I still feel it's a little bit worse. Maybe I've read too much about Akaishi. This book may not be very good. It's quite interesting among a bunch of average works by Akaishi.

Except that the description of the wasteland is a bit strange and jerky 🤔 because if such a wasteland world really existed in reality [fear] it would be very desperate [fear], the other parts are quite detailed 💕 The feelings of the pseudo-sisters are very novel! I like... 🤭 The development of the plot so far has been very smooth, which is good (*σ´∀`)σ It is that the plot so far is not long enough. After all, he is the author of a new book (⋟⋞) [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

In wasteland development novels, the wasteland is a bit unprominent. The setting of the wasteland is like a background version for the plot. When you need it, it is the wasteland. When you don't need it, it doesn't matter if you buy groceries or trade water bills. There is no introduction at all about the points in the currency, and the credit points are a bit untenable as a currency. But these are not important. What is important is that the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine is so sweet😋