About My Adopted Sister Is the Final BOSS

This is my first book on Tomato [Blow a Kiss]

As one of the few wasteland development novels, the character setting and overall narrative rhythm are very good, and the novel subject matter is also a highlight to attract more readers. At present, the world view described by the author is relatively complete, and there are not many loopholes in the plot advancement. Although the relatively bland narrative in the early stage can increase the relationship between Yuluo and Hattie, it also delays the advancement of the main story line and will reduce some readers' interest in reading to a certain extent (leading to book addiction). At the same time, how Yuluo's strength should be improved in the mid-to-late stage (currently we only know that the potion is the most direct way at present), whether it will be numerical expansion after the major version update or a slow and steady upgrade, as well as the relationship between the two after Hattie's memory is restored, can become more interesting points to watch, and are also directions that the author can consider. What is worthy of praise is the author's grasp of the emotional part and the foreshadowing of the main plot. It can be seen that the author himself has designed a relatively complete outline and has better writing style. Looking forward to the next plot unfold.

The plot is smooth, with casual daily life and no lack of incident conflicts. There are some ingenious ideas in the setting. However, the length is currently short, the core conflict has not been fully developed, and the branch plots have not been fully written. We are waiting for the author to complete it. Most of the characters are flat characters. The title is fair In terms of readers' experience, this genre is acceptable. In terms of combat, the protagonist is weak (in my personal opinion, it should not be too weak), and the author is highly active. In summary, it's worth watching (The article is too short and the opinions are inevitably wrong. The above is only my current personal opinion) In fact, the most important thing is that the author asked for book reviews several times at the end of the chapter🙃

Very novel content. It tells the story of a time-traveler who travels back to the wasteland game he played before, and picks up the Boss's sister to raise up in order to survive! The title is vivid and summarizes the content of the first part of the novel. The plot explains the causes and consequences at night. At the same time, the detailed description of the content is also handled well, vividly showing the warm daily life in the wasteland before the readers' eyes. It also vividly describes the human nature in the wasteland. Although the description is sparse, it vividly depicts each of the distinct characters. At the same time, the language is vivid and interesting, which can bring unexpected happiness to readers, allowing them to immerse themselves in the world of the novel and relax their body and mind! As a new author, it is very rare to be able to write such a novel and deserves our deep praise. I hope that the author can maintain the current level and continue to improve in his subsequent creations. Make a good setting for this wasteland world, depict a larger world, and vivid and interesting events, and continue to work hard to portray characters with profound meanings! Come on! ! !

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Mountain 108: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good! A masterpiece! My favorite is that Wu Song fought fiercely with Erlang Shen for hundreds of rounds in the mountains and forests for revenge against his brother. However, Pan Jinlian's secret technique was too powerful. Fortunately, Jie fired the holy spear in time, otherwise the M249 fire suppression would not be able to withstand it. The scene that poked me the most was when Tang Seng faced the monsters and shouted loudly: "Don't play tricks in front of the poor monk", which perfectly showed Tang Seng's grief and anger when he saw all his apprentices defeated. The overall plot is interlocking, the power system is clear, there are many hidden lines, the fighting is hearty, and the personalities of each character are just right!

The Year of the Dove Holding the Branch The eternal throne of heaven has arrived, and the world has been transformed. Then the True King, the original one, began to wage war against the seven terrible kings, the masters of the old world. The terrifying kings are dragons. The Original One created His own luminous shadow. And the number of shadows is four. [Phanes, or the original one] The original one may have been Phanes. It has wings and a crown. It is born from an egg. It is difficult to distinguish between male and female. I want this day. Can't cover my eyes anymore I want this land I can't bury my heart anymore I want these living beings Everyone knows what I mean I want your book Have a good result!!!

🍅The unique low scores are better than the high scores. I have read more than 100 chapters so far. Overall, it looks good. It is one of the few novels that I can put on my bookshelf. The plot is quite interesting. But I still feel it's a little bit worse. Maybe I've read too much about Akaishi. This book may not be very good. It's quite interesting among a bunch of average works by Akaishi.

Except that the description of the wasteland is a bit strange and jerky [thinking] because if such a wasteland world really existed in reality [fear] it would be very desperate [fear], the other parts are quite detailed [send heart] The feelings of the pseudo-sisters are very novel! I like... [Laughing] The development of the plot so far has been very smooth, which is good (*σ´∀`)σ It is that the plot so far is not long enough. After all, he is the author of a new book (⋟⋞) [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

In wasteland development novels, the wasteland is a bit unprominent. The setting of the wasteland is like a background version for the plot. When you need it, it is the wasteland. When you don't need it, it doesn't matter if you buy groceries or trade water bills. There is no introduction at all about the points in the currency, and the credit points are a bit untenable as a currency. But these are not important. What is important is that the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine is so sweet😋

The author's writing is first-rate, creating a wonderful balance between the apocalypse of the wasteland and small happiness. How do two female prostitutes survive in troubled times? With an invincible basic plan coupled with an excellent worldview design, the ups and downs and warm daily life are superimposed, and a wonderful picture of life unfolds in front of us.

The characters are full of emotions and the details are well described. The narration of Yuluo and Hattie's daily life is very sweet [heartfelt], which makes their relationship deepen without being abrupt. It is also because of this that the plot develops a little slowly. It can be seen from various places in the article that the author has good writing style and very delicate emotional descriptions [Bird Food Masterpiece]. I hope the author can persist in finishing this book [Please update more]

Good, it reminds me that I have just come into contact with the Lily of the Doomsday Wasteland theme, and I spent so much time watching it that I forgot to eat and sleep. It is smooth and has no major poisonous points. The character interactions are also warm and lifelike, and the details of life in the wasteland are also well described. It would be amazing if I can keep this level and keep making more updates. I hope not 🕊️ [Sending Hearts]

As an apocalyptic article, the early world framework is still very good. The female protagonist is a relatively weak type. It can be said that it is because of this that it feels like the apocalypse. In terms of plot preparation, although it has not been fully developed, the overall impression is still good. If it is more about redemption, I am still looking forward to the scene where the identity is exposed later.

Several long reviews have done a good job. The current setting is attractive enough, and the author has a good grasp of the plot. I am also very active. However, due to space limitations, I can only say that the potential is relatively high. I hope that I can follow up and complete the book. [Sending heartfelt wishes]

As far as the more than 60 pictures are concerned, they are quite good. Anyway, the plot can be anything. I think the author's writing style is still good and okay. Then there is the deliciousness. I think this deliciousness should be very good. The author has said that he will eat each other, and it is still physical [laughter]

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Very nice. The setting is relatively rare and novel, and events happen one after another, and because of the daily lubrication, it will not be too stressful. The action is smooth, but the writing is lacking in describing the major events and climax. Overall good.

Sister bones and stuff, they're so delicious [eating melon]

This article is whitened, but personally, it is no different from pure white. Pure white readers can also eat it. Adding wasteland to the setting is quite novel, and the setting of pseudo-sisters is also very delicious. But what will it be like after the heroine regains her memory? I can't wait The plot, rhythm, and writing are all very good. Overall, I recommend reading!

Really pretty! After searching for gold for so long, I finally got a big guarantee. The plot and the characters are very good, but it's a little bit bad, and it's too good to catch up with the rest of the group. It's not too poisonous, just take a look at it.

I usually don't post book reviews, and the first one I post is a negative review, but I made an exception this time, because this thing is really good [face covering] The plot is relaxed and relaxed, and there are many characters. It can be seen that the world view is not small. There are only about three or four chapters in the post so far, and the rest are about operations and combat [laughs] Besides, you don't have to doubt my taste. You can tell what I am about by looking at my bookshelf. This book is really good-looking.

It's a very nice cultivation system in the wasteland. It focuses on cultivation rather than the flow of upgrades. I already vomited the routine of actually fighting monsters and upgrading in the wasteland. But is the protagonist a little too weak? Will you consider adding a prosthetic body in the future? At least he can participate in the plot.

It's a very good wasteland novel, at least it's not the kind that says it's the end of the world and humans chase monsters and fight them. However, I have a question about whether the original protagonist group will appear in the plot. If so, will they be friends or enemies?

Good, great good, I really like this book with super powers and a post-apocalyptic wasteland setting😋😋😋The feeling of the tip of a knife licking blood and struggling desperately makes adrenaline soar. After all, tomorrow is an unknown sign. Only by surviving can we be qualified to talk about the future. Everyone is like rats in the gutter, fighting crazily for food and living space, guarding their pitiful territory and baring their teeth at other rats. Everyone does not trust each other, the chain of suspicion will always exist, and reversals are constantly happening. People who were weak and bullyable yesterday will take advantage of you unprepared to shoot you in the back today. Everyone is a beast in human skin, and will only stop when it bites the neck of its prey. Morality, law, and order will always give in to interests. Hypocrisy, fraud, and chaos are the laws of survival in the apocalyptic era. Let me look forward to what kind of drama you will put on for me, author😋😋😋

The progress is smooth, the descriptions are clear, and the writing is good. Generally speaking, it is above medium to large.

Some novel wasteland texts, tomatoes are high-quality food and grass [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

It looks good and the author's writing is good. .

Fat intestines are in good health, author, cheers

Now the more you cheat, the harder you will be punished later [shy]

It's beautiful. I hope there will be more people and I'll give the author 50 reviews [send my heart] [send my heart]