Yang Guo: I Am Born in the Sacred Eagle and Reach the Sky

The plot is not changed at all, even the character of the protagonist is inherited. It is considered an NPC that has completed its mission.

The writing is okay, but it's not too overwhelming. The first level of Nisheng is almost invincible below the innate level. I feel that if I open the second level, I can stop Ouyang Xiuhong Qigong's mouth.

Yes, the protagonist is not frivolous, and has no plans to open a harem at the moment. His practice is also similar to that of people practicing in the Trinity School, which is very suitable for people in the martial arts community. I look forward to seeing the protagonist's expression when he reaches the third level of Qi Condensation and steps into the void.

The smartest thing about this article is that it knows that what readers want is not a 'new story', but a new light on an old person. "The rhythm is clean and neat, the characters stand firm within three chapters, and the emotions are deep in the bones within five chapters. There is no delay or watering down. He is a rare author who knows how to stop."

Looking at it now, it is a very good novel and worth reading. When it comes to dynasties @ @father I hope that the protagonist can help establish the dynasty and become an immortal. There is no need to be an emperor himself. The protagonist can continue to walk up to see the scenery above and become a man who can reach the sky.

AI is indeed very powerful. The writing and words are really deeper than many middle- and lower-class authors, describing the scenery and the form of the characters. I have to admire it. In fact, the author doesn't have to worry about those people's negative reviews. Just look at the number of follow-up reads. It doesn't matter if it's a single heroine or a harem. After all, your label is not on it either. Single heroine or harem. Xidu does many evil things, and his son is not a good person either. I don't see Hong Qigong killing him either. It doesn't matter whether Li Mochou kills him or not.

If you think it is well written, please give it a five-star rating. Thank you bosses.

It's very nice to watch, and the fighting scenes are well described.

Come on, author, I feel like the rating shouldn't be so low. This fanfic is pretty good. I just ask that you don't stop updating it. Many sites on this site have stopped updating. Stop talking about writing a million words, and work harder to expand the non-original chapters. After the end of The Condor, don't write the protagonist as someone who becomes an immortal or a god. It's too bad. Normal relatives and friends die and are reincarnated in other worlds, and you can write a book with the grown-up protagonist. Write more.

Godfather, you've already used bean bags, and why don't you show it to anyone so little? The more you give, the faster your grades will rise. It still looks good.

The writing, plot, supporting characters, action, dialogue, pacing, conflict handling, transitional plotting, etc. Are all very good. The protagonist's character, character, beliefs, desires, behaviors, and understanding of the exercises are described from the side, allowing the character to take into account the omniscient love of the high-dimensional saint and the clear distinction between grudges and grudges of the urban ranger. The shortcomings are that being omniscient and silent on paper seems to be equivalent to insidiousness, following the trend and self-improvement loses the value of kindness in the eyes of readers, calculating opportunities and holding grudges seems not enough, and is a bit unworthy of the skills used by Daying Immortal. In terms of combat power, even if you press it to the death, it is only for those who practice martial arts. Being more capable means that the dilemma is gone. So what's the point? It's better to be casual and don't let the protagonist be so anxious and shameless.

The novel "The Condor and the Reverse Life" is very novel. I really like the theme, but I feel that there is too little original plot.

The rating is low, probably because updates are slow.

It's well written. I finished reading the latest chapter without realizing it. Good luck to the author.

Can you please update more? It's rare to see a martial arts fan with such good writing and plot on Tomato. I'll give you full marks, okay? I watch ads every day to show you how to make love [I'm about to cry]

Good luck to the author!

When the protagonist gets into a fight, we make crazy comments and shake him up.

The writing is quite good. The previous story is a bit bland, but the writing is very comfortable to read. Some people think that the cold jade bed is a poisonous spot. If you don't rely on external objects, you are joking. Zuo Ruotong is so anxious when he sees Wu Gensheng. You ask him to cultivate without relying on external objects.

Update my dear brother

Nowadays, there are very few people who still write about the Divine Condor. This book is the tallest among the shortest, and this book is already very good.

The writing is pretty good, I hope the author can stick to it. It's been a long time since I've seen a novel like this that I can read [STARE][STARE][STARE]

Great book, read it in one sitting, friends who like Yang Guo and Nisheng Sanzhong should not miss it!

It's really good, it blends well, and I can look forward to the future!

The writing is good. He is excellent and calm in martial arts, but martial arts is for the country and the people, but it basically does not kill landlords or carry out land reform.

Beautiful, top quality. The characterization is delicate, but the only flaw is that one detail is not handled well, but it is undoubtedly an article that can be read carefully. There is no trace of AI in the whole text. Hmm... I don't understand why many people say that this novel was written by AI. Maybe it's because I'm not good enough, but I think it's pretty good.

The writing is pretty good, but the plot develops too slowly.

Not bad, some minor details were not handled well, and the rest are excellent.

Even if the protagonist can tell the truth, such as practicing martial arts, etc., Be honest. After all, there is no conflict of interest between you and others, and they seem to be unable to defeat the protagonist.

What is acceptable is acceptable, what is unacceptable is unacceptable [eating melon]

Don't call yourself emperor, this kind of article is meaningless.