[Invincible] + [The heroine who does not have too many scenes] + [Spiritual Beast] + [The Trend of Raising Beasts] + [Destroy the World]
If you want to read a mindless article that only knows how to kill, please mark it out and don't waste your time. The following is the official introduction.
Bai Lingfeng was reincarnated into the Jindan family, and her biggest wish was to successfully build the foundation to prevent herself from becoming a hindrance and drag to Grandpa Jindan.
For this reason, he practiced hard and studied the way of making talismans in order to have a foothold. However, he only had five spiritual roots, and his cultivation speed was really slow. Although he had some talent in making talismans, he was only an average person in the clan.
But, after that night, everything changed...
Let's see how Bai Lingfeng cultivates countless spiritual beasts, uses countless spiritual beasts to form a Taoist formation, sweeps away countless enemies, and overcomes obstacles on his own path!
Note: If you have any questions, just ask me to come out and correct them, or directly help me correct them in the comment area. I will make the corrections according to the situation.
Reader comments
The idea is very good and the setting is good. This is the first time I have seen such a detailed novel written by Yushou, and I think it is very interesting.
The writing style is a bit immature. In the early stage, the protagonist interacts with his grandfather, which gives the impression that he does not feel like a grandfather and grandson, but a relationship between superiors and subordinates and colleagues. Zou Zou talks a lot of polite words and does not feel the warmth. (If the author is interested, you can read the psychology book "Intimate Relationships".)
The second point is that this article is too flat. It is clear that the protagonist has experienced a lot. His cultivation level has increased, the number of monsters has increased, he has broken through secret realms, and he can even control three to four hundred mortals, but it just makes people miss the point. If there is not even a single impressive point in a book, it will be difficult for people to continue reading it.
Third, there are too many side descriptions and some frequent adjective possessive pronouns. This will give readers an illusion - most of my impressions, characteristics, strengths and other advantages of the protagonist of this book are introduced and understood through other people's words. There is extremely no sense of substitution, and naturally there is not much impression. The readers also have no sense of satisfaction and the process of watching the protagonist's growth step by step. (Here I suggest the author to read the author's "Starlight Moon Busy" or "My Rice Vat". This is not a request. I really think the author can learn from it next door to see the rhythm and meticulousness.)
Fourth, most of the protagonists are described as "light" or "indifferent". The description is too lacking, but one thing is better than other authors, there are fewer wry smiles.
It is recommended that the author should not use modern units of measurement, such as "meters". It would be much better to use "zhang, chi, cun" unless it is what the protagonist is thinking. Too many pauses are used. Generally, two pauses are enough in one sentence. Too many pauses make readers feel tight and nervous, because most readers read the book silently in their minds, which is not good for the senses.
Finally, it is recommended that the author divide the paragraph into paragraphs. Three lines are most suitable for viewing on mobile phones, and no more than five lines at most, otherwise it will be confusing.
This book is good, and the logic in the early stage is well connected. I hope the author will not unfinish the follow-up. The classic family cultivation flow, the logic of time and the logic of realm are connected in series. Come on
The foundation-building families in this book are all very awesome.
Pet beasts can physically enter the space, but the protagonist can only enter spiritually.
What my parents left behind, what my family expressed condolences to, and what my grandfather subsidized, it totaled more than 10,000 contribution points. I earned more than 7,000 contribution points in just two months by drawing talismans.
The first level of high-quality materials requires a hundred years of spiritual materials. The third level only requires a thousand years, and even tens of thousands of years are not enough.
The family did not receive all the required beasts, and the Ten Thousand Beasts Pavilion had not collected them all. In the end, it was the beasts given by grandpa that finally gathered them. At chapter 33, I got them all, and only at chapter 59 did I switch to the cultivation method. I can really ink.
Let me give myself a four-star rating first. Although there are a lot of problems, I feel that I can still watch it [laughs][laughs]
Not bad, watch it.
Hidden Dragon's Assets, this book is a rare masterpiece, both the storyline and the setting are excellent. The author has profound writing skills. Come on, come on, come on!
Well written and logically clear.
A very good article about cultivating immortals. It's a bit refreshing. Unlike other books, just looking at the table of contents is enough.
The idea is very good and the setting is good. This is the first time I have seen such a detailed novel written by Yushou, and I think it is very interesting. The writing style is a bit immature. In the early stage, the protagonist interacts with his grandfather, which gives the impression that he does not feel like a grandfather and grandson, but a relationship between superiors and subordinates and colleagues. Zou Zou talks a lot of polite words and does not feel the warmth. (If the author is interested, you can read the psychology book "Intimate Relationships".) The second point is that this article is too flat. It is clear that the protagonist has experienced a lot. His cultivation level has increased, the number of monsters has increased, he has broken through secret realms, and he can even control three to four hundred mortals, but it just makes people miss the point. If there is not even a single impressive point in a book, it will be difficult for people to continue reading it. Third, there are too many side descriptions and some frequent adjective possessive pronouns. This will give readers an illusion - most of my impressions, characteristics, strengths and other advantages of the protagonist of this book are introduced and understood through other people's words. There is extremely no sense of substitution, and naturally there is not much impression. The readers also have no sense of satisfaction and the process of watching the protagonist's growth step by step. (Here I suggest the author to read the author's "Starlight Moon Busy" or "My Rice Vat". This is not a request. I really think the author can learn from it next door to see the rhythm and meticulousness.) Fourth, most of the protagonists are described as "light" or "indifferent". The description is too lacking, but one thing is better than other authors, there are fewer wry smiles. It is recommended that the author should not use modern units of measurement, such as "meters". It would be much better to use "zhang, chi, cun" unless it is what the protagonist is thinking. Too many pauses are used. Generally, two pauses are enough in one sentence. Too many pauses make readers feel tight and nervous, because most readers read the book silently in their minds, which is not good for the senses. Finally, it is recommended that the author divide the paragraph into paragraphs. Three lines are most suitable for viewing on mobile phones, and no more than five lines at most, otherwise it will be confusing.
This book is good, and the logic in the early stage is well connected. I hope the author will not unfinish the follow-up. The classic family cultivation flow, the logic of time and the logic of realm are connected in series. Come on
The foundation-building families in this book are all very awesome.
Pet beasts can physically enter the space, but the protagonist can only enter spiritually. What my parents left behind, what my family expressed condolences to, and what my grandfather subsidized, it totaled more than 10,000 contribution points. I earned more than 7,000 contribution points in just two months by drawing talismans. The first level of high-quality materials requires a hundred years of spiritual materials. The third level only requires a thousand years, and even tens of thousands of years are not enough. The family did not receive all the required beasts, and the Ten Thousand Beasts Pavilion had not collected them all. In the end, it was the beasts given by grandpa that finally gathered them. At chapter 33, I got them all, and only at chapter 59 did I switch to the cultivation method. I can really ink.
Let me give myself a four-star rating first. Although there are a lot of problems, I feel that I can still watch it [laughs][laughs]
Not bad, watch it.
Hidden Dragon's Assets, this book is a rare masterpiece, both the storyline and the setting are excellent. The author has profound writing skills. Come on, come on, come on!
Well written and logically clear.
A very good article about cultivating immortals. It's a bit refreshing. Unlike other books, just looking at the table of contents is enough.